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Improve your grades

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grades are very important, esays dont neccesarly need to involve trama and resumes should be neatly organized brandi

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Her grades are good but her act scores are low.

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yes, good rank, great grades, good act score, liked the essay

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good ACT scores and grades and good overall but his resume seems a bit messy and his essay doesnt look that good.

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The grades are good. He was a bit low on the act for science. The essay was also good. I would accept him into college.

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Great rank, amazing grades overall but went down a bit on senior year, good act, could do better on essay

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grades improved and act scores are really good.

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Grades improved throughout ACT scores were good essay was good

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The grades are good. he did a lot of things and worked hard. The ACT scores were good too. so I will accept her into college.

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yes, very good ACT score, grades were good and improved in senior year, liked the essay

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Yes because she has good grades and very good resume.

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The Act Scores is very high

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Her rank, gpa, and achievements are great. She has good grades especially for advance classes but then declined in grades and her ACT scores are average.

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He could do better in the act scores

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Yes because she has a good gpa and rank. Also has good volunteering hours

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Love her rank, gpa, and achievements.
ACT could have been better

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The GPA is high and overall has good grates ans interesting activities. The Act Score is good since the university requires 30 but I think she can do better.

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I would accept but wished the would have better explained her essay, grades were good but a bit lower towards senior year, and had goo act score

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She helped out on a lot of stuff and also win a lot of things. Her grades got a bit low at the end. and her scores on Act are normal. I would accept her into the school.

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she has good grades except toward the end and has many activities that are interesting. the act could be better if she want to get into that university

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Good grades overall, 4.3 GPA, average ACT scores, well written essay.

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I learned that we should use trauma when writing the essay because it might sway the people to put us in the university. Also, we could bring up our grades. I also learned that sometimes it is a good thing to get wait-listed since we were good but not great. 

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I learned that we should use trauma when writing the essay because it might sway the people to put us in the university. Also, we could bring up our grades. I also learned that sometimes it is a good thing to get wait-listed since we were good but not great. 

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I learned that I will not be getting in an elite school and that I clearly didn’t try enough to even be considered for one.

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1. I need to think about what I wanna write about
2. Better ACT/SAT scores
3. Join more clubs and service hours

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When applying to college I should prioritize what the college looks at when reviewing my admission. I should continue increasing my grades.

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I can trauma dump but it needs to have a story arc.
Keep consistent and don't dip in grades
Do things that you could add to your resume and you like

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Three things I learned are that, grades are a very strong factor depending on my career. I need to write a good essay, but not about my trauma. Pass all my classes, the use of trauma needs to be used to an extent.

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Three things I learned were use trauma to an extent, study for the ACT, have good extracurriculars.

- Zeltzin

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I learned to be organized in a resume, good grades and the rigour of the classes are important, and that the essay doesn't have to be trauma-dumping.

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3 things I learned from this lesson is how advanced classes look good on a resume, how to structure a college essay, and having good achievements.  

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3 things I learned from this lesson is how advanced classes look good on a resume, how to structure a college essay, and having good achievements.  

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It is never too late to pick up your grades. 😌

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It is never too late to pick up your grades. 😌

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Im not getting into an elite school
my act score sucks
I need to works on an essay

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Trauma is fun to use, but maybe don't use your whole backstory -.-

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I learned that grades are a huge factor in application forms. And the resume itself cant be too lengthy. And don't over trauma dump  

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I learned that grades are a huge factor in application forms. And the resume itself cant be too lengthy. And don't over trauma dump  

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Grades are very important, since its an aspect they look at first. Essay need to be detailed but still have a good idea.

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Overall had very high grades throughout high school, their ACT score is in the range, and their essay described their accomplishments. The resume is great and I would accept into the school.

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bragged a lot in the essay, but understandable as they have achieved many great things. seems like an exceptional studeny

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amazingggg everything, wish the essay had more variety and not so much explaining her activities in high school

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Very good grades and amazing ACT score. The essay was more of a routine and not much else but still alright. 

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Very good grades and amazing ACT score. The essay was more of a routine and not much else but still alright. 

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Grades were good did have some decline but still held them in the hard academic classes. Shes's very expressive about how life is for her, and what she has done means to her.

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Her good grades stayed consistent, she even got good act scores only lacking in STEM and math

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ACT score is average, grades were lacking towards the end of high school, but the resume was not too bad. Would not accept into the school.

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She has plenty of time doing volunteer work and is apart of advanced academic programs and groups that celebrate their achievements

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The grades and ACT could be better, the lack of on and off A to C's. Think they could have better essay and better academics.

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Grades were okay but seemed like they were lacking senior year and ACT scores were above decent.

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Grades were okay but seemed like they were lacking senior year and ACT scores were above decent.

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Really good, very traumatic pobrecita :( Good on everything else, I wish she spoke more about her goal of policy making but I would accept

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could have better act scores, liked that she tied her experiences to her education, lots of extracurriculars and volunteer work

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ACT score= wow

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he had good grades and a great essay. he also did well on his ACT

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Although, her grades shows some progress, and her ACT scores were amazing, we believe that she will either be wait-listed or denied. 

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Although, her grades shows some progress, and her ACT scores were amazing, we believe that she will either be wait-listed or denied. 

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His grades improved significantly from the start to the end of high school. He showed that he has improved and has very impressive ACT scores. His essay shows how he is open to change.

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Spectacular grades and ACT score. Essay was well formatted and worth reading.

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Very traumatic essays, wish the healing for her, but using those experiences is smart. I also think her favorite subject is reading/english. She is a bilingual queen.

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Really good and impressive overall, I would accept

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Like: straightforward essay, good ACT scores, lots of clubs, and volunteer shows his character

Dislikes: N/A

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This student really went above and beyond for their resume. Made sure that they made account for what they had accomplished through their high school career. Essay was a good way of getting to know the student.

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ion like this guy

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Despite all their achievements, the essay was really average, didn’t live up to what they seem to be working towards.

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Grades were overall good. The essay was okay at best. GPA and Rank makes up for everything else that felt left out. BUT the name Howard doesnt suit our school.

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Although Howard's profile is well-made and organized, we believe he'll be wait-listed. 

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Although Howard's profile is well-made and organized, we believe he'll be wait-listed. 

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He lacks writing skills and this can be seen through his essay. He also has too low of an ACT score for the science portion. His resume is his only strong suit.

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The resume is very interesting, it stood out like no other, GPA is outstanding, and the essay is very personal and showcases what kind of person they are.

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A lot of things involving community, alright grades but not elite-school material. The essay felt like he was full of himself.

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Good ACT score, High GPA, maintained a job while in school (very hard but accomplished), and served in community service. You can see he is a hardworking student.

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Liked: good grades, okay essay w/ bad conclusion
Disliked: low ACT score for science

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Really good grades and scores. Could use more community service hours, essay was well written but also very superficial for a hispanic  kid.

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Good rank and GPA. Good community service essay sounds strong

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I liked his rank it was very good along with his gpa of 4.7, I did not like the act scores as much, they werent bad but were not all good enough to be within our range.

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Good Rank and GPA
Lacks in essay

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Honestly i learned that i am not good enough for an Elite college, I have to get an resume, and that trauma dumping is bad.

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you know wwhat they say, life is a highway and i wanna ride it all night long

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imagine writing about ur own childhood trauma. couldnt be me tho

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honestly same, i also have deep rooted family trauma but atleast counceling exists

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honestly same, i also have deep rooted family trauma but atleast counceling exists

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Three things I learned from this are the fact that you have to be organized in your resume, be straightforward in your essay, and you should include your academic achievements so elite colleges can notice you.

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Likes: Absolutely nothing
Dislike:Child abuse ig

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couldn't be me bruh

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what are these essays bruh im dead

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Like: essay, awards
Dislike: grades and ACT score could have been better
Accepted !

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Definitely needs therapy. Good amount of extracurricular activities. Good grades and act scores.

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most of her essay was mainly about her trauma that her mother had gave her. Her ACT scores are average. Her resume did show her achievements and awards in a good light, as well as being to 5% of her class.

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Resume has a lot of activities, volunteer work, and lists their overall education in a good way. Essay is just them getting beat like woah child abuse. They tie their trauma to why they did good in school which helps the essay make sense. She's an A & B student with only one C in AP Stats. Tests scores could be higher. Therapy required.

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Essay was sad but had poor formatting. I never knew words could cause so much physical discomfort. Bad grades. Sophomoric level ACT scores. Not enough to get accepted but enough to pay for your therapy.

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Like: good extracurriculars, good grades, good ACT score
Dislike: essay overall (repetitive)

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Good scores on the ACT, as well as great grades during AP classes. I didn't like how they kept repeating more about how they overly brag about themself.

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In the essay, it felt like they didn't know who they were, doing all of these things just to make their essay and themselves look good. Overall, the resume felt too perfect.

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The essay does not tell me who she is as a person other than that her school life is her entire personality. Good volunteer and work experience. Good ACT scores except for math and STEM 🤨

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Essay sacrificed readability and flow for the sake of listing every accomplishment known to man. Why look at your hard-to-read transcript when I can look at your poorly made essay. Grades felt deceiving. ACT not in top 3%. 3.5 College GPA. NEXT

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This resume felt very well-rounded, but not enough for an elite school.

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Not enough extracurriculars or community service hours
Essay had a weak theme and inadequate conclusion

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Essay is kinda ehhh. Its just him flexing and talking about how hard he worked and blahh blahh. I feel like its a good essay but I just see it as an ego boost to himself. 💩 Grades were amazing, definitely cheating aint no way, ACT scores were decent could be higher, and has good achivements.

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Not good hook on essay. Should have been bzzzzz! Basic essay. Grades are good. Should have better scores on science if he wants to be a doctor.

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Essay was like a TV dinner, serviceable but lackluster and depressing. Grades were alright but stem ACT scores are a negative. I don't want a doctor with a 27 in science. Try again next lifetime when you get legacy admission.

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We liked that Mr. Villalobos was in several clubs and organizations because they further helped him in his admission process.

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We liked that Mr. Villalobos was in several clubs and organizations because they further helped him in his admission process.

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I think the essay was very average and straight-forward ; no clear point or theme.

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I think the essay was very average and straight-forward ; no clear point or theme.

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I liked how many organizations he could keep up with.

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I liked how many organizations he could keep up with.

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We liked Mr.villalobos has multiple achievements in his resume and the resume over all what we didn't like was the essay for the main point that it was repetitive and just wasn't strong enough

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The essay didn't repeat a lot of the achievements mentioned in the resume which is good. The essay sounded dramatic with the Rubix cube and the tango bit. I would accept him because of his high ACT scores even though his grades could be better. :/

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Resume: This should not have included elementary and middle school.