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The lightness of your voice and thoughts enable you to have more musicality in your voice.

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Your pleading in the RomCom drill helped convey the desperation in your voice.

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The hurt in your voice during the RomCom drill was authentic for the scene.

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I liked when you said about punishing him in a lovely voice was really good.

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When you first came on that accent really made you seem older.

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you're really good at conveying emotion when lashing out at Fortunato,  in the tombs

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I notice that you actually show emotion in this. The type is a little different, but its better than just reading the lines.

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Your nonchalant way of talking to the Police really worked for this scene.   

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Your nonchalant way of talking to the Police really worked for this scene.   

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Yea Like you don't believe that he is going to do it!

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Yea Like you don't believe that he is going to do it!

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Your screams were very authentic when in horror.  

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Your screams were very authentic when in horror.  

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Good vocal dynamics in action adventure drill

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Good vocal dynamics in action adventure drill

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The "clever and cunning" in your voice along with your facial expressions was great.  

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The "clever and cunning" in your voice along with your facial expressions was great.  

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The almost whisper of "so calm, so clever" I want it to match the way you say it at first.

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Need more volume, your entrance at the beginning was almost at a whisper.  

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Need more volume, your entrance at the beginning was almost at a whisper.  

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Need to be more alarmed at his ranting.  

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Need to be more alarmed at his ranting.  

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Good job giving the character more depth with the pain rather than being mean

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Good job giving the character more depth with the pain rather than being mean

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Both of you are playing gentlemen so need to make you discussion regarding dandelion tea more "manly"

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Both of you are playing gentlemen so need to make you discussion regarding dandelion tea more "manly"

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Maybe try to change your tone a little when its appropriate. I notice your voice doesn't really change throughout 

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Maybe try to change your tone a little when its appropriate. I notice your voice doesn't really change throughout 

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When you give Poe the news of your sister's death it is not a believable emotion.  

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When you give Poe the news of your sister's death it is not a believable emotion.  

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React more to the news of Madeline's death, and you are in denial when you say are you sure.

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That sound needs to be more aggravating and alarming

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That sound needs to be more aggravating and alarming

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"Keep yourself occupied,"  You are attempting to keep him from going mad.  

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"Keep yourself occupied,"  You are attempting to keep him from going mad.  

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Right before you kill the man you are kind of just standing there emotionless. You look kind of lost. It might benefit you to look like you've just been caught. (becau
se you have)