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Artist : Sing Herh
Artist Friend : Bryan Ng Wei Jie
T: I really like the  blending in the artwork. the colouring is accurate with no lines coming out its neat. the colour schemes also contrasts and brings attention
A: Why did you decide on using the son of man
G: You should make the head bigger as it is the main point of focus and it allows you to add more details to it.

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Artist: Kay lyn
Feedback given by: Yukie

I love the way you drew and coloured the sky as it really depicts the original art work. I also like the way you coloured the tree as i can see the shadings and textures of the leaf.

I am wondering why theres fire in the middle of the sea.

You could try adding more shadows to the drawings and more shadings in the sky and water.

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name of the artist:Giselle
feedback given by:yimeng
i like the idea that you put the Merlion on the wave and you find a artwork tht add the merlion inside also would not look weird just look like it is the original drawing.I think you can improve on the shadow to make it look more reality,like really Merlion is sitting on the wave.

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name of artist: Charmaine Chiu
name of partner: Evan
T - I was pleasantly suprised by how creative your artwork was. The mutliple eyes was an Idea something I could never fantasize of, it gives me a feeling that i cannot explain.
A - Why was there nothing in the eye, it lookes plain.
G - Maybe more details on top of the eye an inside it, it could balance out the artwork.

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Artist: Sky(20)
Feedback given by : xuen (13)
The colours in your artwork is nice and liked the way you portrait the neighbourhood

Why did you not add details to your buildings and humans

You could add more vibrant colours and details

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name of the artist : Joel
Feedback given by: Joy
i like how colourful it is as it has almost all the colour in the rainbow and how realistic it is .

i would like to ask why the guy in the piece is holding the earth up in the air like that

i think you should make the background a little bit more colourful like the guy and the world in the middle of this artwork

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name of artist:Evan
name of artist friend: Charmaine
I like how some of the flowers are blooming and growing but some are withering. This is very interesting
Can you explain why some of them are withered and some are not?
I think you can put in more colours and make it even more colourful instead of all pink and red.

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Artist: Eiman
Commenter: Haoyu

I can tell that the artist is after an combination of multicultural and pop art. However the art work is incomplete, but it has a potential to be a good drawing.

The colours needs to be bolder with more shading, i like how orange and yellow is put together, it would look nicer if the colours can blend together. Blending is an important part for this drawing. Also i would recommend bright colours.

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Name of artist: Kaylene
Feedback given by: Ke Wen

I love how you used different shades of blue to make the waves more realistic and I like how you drew the pineapple tart really big so it stands out.

I am a little confused about the 2 extra mountains

You could add some more elements of multicultural like a ketupat

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name of artist: Joy
name of artist friend: Joel
I like how the background of the second artwork is colored cos its vibrant and the texture of the shading looks very good
i want to ask why the the bins are floating
i think you could draw the second drawing vertically instead of horizontally

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I like how the colours are vibrant and bright. as it makes the drawing more lively and cheerful.

Why did you choose to replace the certain objects such as the clocks with the other objects such as the chess peice and the controller and change the original colours to the colours you have chosen?

Instead of colouring every colour, perhaps you should use a water-colour brush to prevent your artwork from having 'holes' in your colouring and make the colours more 'solid'.

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name of the artist: samoeul
name of artist friend: Jayden lim

I love how the colour beige makes the eye look real and the black colour pencil outline the eye makes it look realistic.

I would like to ask u about how u blended in the colour to make it look realistic.

Maybe next time you can try drawing the iris and the pupil to make the eye more realistic and would look better.

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name of artist : yukie
feedback given by : kay lyn
i loved how you used a lot of colours , and it filled up the whole page , making it very attractive and eye catching .
i want to ask what inspired you to create this piece , the chinese lantern over the mans face and him wearing a traditional chinese costume .
you could make the black sky lighter , maybe add some dark blue instead of all black , and add some clouds .

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Artist : Hao Yu
Commenter : Eiman
I love how you blend smoothly for the eyes. I thought that the colour combo was good because it matches with the theme itself.  Why did you choose this type of artist reference ? I think next time you should try to blend the bright colours smoother like your grey and white colour blending. In addition , I think you should combine the recycling bin with other items that represents your theme like paper bags.

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Name of artist: Haidah
Name of artist friend: Charmaine
I like how you colour the dumplings, it looks delicious. The sun is also in a really cool shape, I really like it.
I am wondering why the dumplings are on the boats in the ocean. Is it because the dumplings and going home or leaving home to go on a journey?
Instead of the ocean wave going towards the dumplings, why not have some waves coming towards the dumplings and some going the other way. This is to represent the dumplings are also trying their best to fight back the waves and overcome their problems.

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name of artist: ke wen
feedback given by: kaylene

I love how you but plants coming out for his hat as it shows how you combined both ypur drawings together and i also like how you colour the leaves with different shades of green to make the leaf look realistic.

I would like to know why u only drew 3 leaves

I feel like you can add more plants and maybe flowers to make things more colourful

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name of the artist: sarah(12)
name of the artist classmate: rayner (29)
i love the idea that you switched the face which is coverd by a ketupat
i would like to ask why do you have kaya toast with the ketupat in the background
i think you could make the water more darker

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name of artist:Jayden lim(24)
name of artist friend:Samoeul(31)
1:I was pleasantly suprised by the way you colored the back ground and the brick
2:what happend when you were trying to draw out the layout of the art work and when you were trying to fuse the plastic bottle and the man
3:you could try and make the man in the son of man art work bigger and the water in the background more brighter

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name of artist: denzel (18)
name of artist friend: ashvin (27)
i love how you put the trash in the wave and make it look like its being wash around by the wave.
i would like to ask what is the thing on the top that is a circle and has das in it
i think that you could add the background and use vibrant colours for the background it would look better.

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name of artist: ashvin (27)
name of artist friend: denzel (18)
i love how you were able to draw and colour the suit of the figure in your work
i would like to ask you why you had purple withi your drawing
i think you could work on the background of the drawing, and work on the sky as well

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name of artist : Charmaine Chiu
name of artist friend: Haidah Hanafie
T - I like how you used many colours at the top of the artwork which contrasts the colours of the eye
A - why didnt you add anything at the bottom of the artwork ?
G - Maybe you could try outlining the outwork with a thicker black ink to make your artwork stand out more as it looks pretty dull

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Name of artist: Rayner
Name of artist's friend: Sarah
I like how you applied cubism to your artwork and the colours used are vibrant
I am wondering why you only use a few colours to colour your artwork
I think that you could try to at more different shades of colours to make your artwork more realistic

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name of the artist :yimeng (15)
name of artist friend : giselle (4)
I love the idea that the man's face is covered by a nintendo switch.
I would like to ask why you added the majong tiles behind the man in that manner.
I think maybe you could try to use more vibrant colors in your colors.

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Artist: Rayna (14)
Feedback Given by: Jasper (21)
I like the colours in the artwork because it makes it look like a comic strip or a cartoon explosion which is creative.

I would like to ask why you decided to use brighter colours rather than deep colours.

I think you could add other vibrant colours in the explosion clouds to show greater impact of the artwork.

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Name of the artist :Xu En(13)
Feedback give by : Xuan Qi(10)
I love how it look so realistic and how you even included the flower dome in your drawing.
I would like to ask you why you added what i think is green scales in your drawing.
I think maybe you could try to use more vibrant colors in your colors although it already vibrant enough.

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names artist is  xuan  qi
i love your art becaues it is like chinese new year you can add more staff and you have good drawing you can add more vibrand okay colors is nice you can plan more thing to make it as realistice

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something beautiful

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A. Take a picture of the layout you would like to work on for your End-of-year exams and upload it under your name.

B. Write your TAG feedback on your peer's wall.

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Chosen Layout: A        19 September 2023

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Chosen Layout: A        19 September 2023

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my chosen piece is B

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chosen layout: B

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12/9/23

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Layout plan