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Body 1: Benefits

Topic sentence 1: Playing games reduces stress and helps students relax after study studying for hours.

Explanation:

Students' brain needs time for taking away the stress because of the lesson.???

If students think games time after studying is a gift to relieve stress, they will have more motivation to learn and study harder.

Games are the good method for students if they play with control themselves, they help students relax anf recharge for students' brain.

Example:

My litte sister feels more fun and hard - working when she has time to play games after finished homework, she feels comfortable and has big laugh. ( ví dụ chủ quan do đó là người thân của con, không phải là tất cả có thể bỏ quả nếu con phân tích kĩ ở trên rồi)

Topic sentence 2: Playing games helps develope thinking and language development.

Explanation:

"Games" not only just video games, there are many good games like:

Many games need strategy , quick reflex and solve the problems, so students play that game can practise and recieve benefits above on the funny ways.

Foreign games help the vocabulary of students better, listening skill, too.

Example:

Some games like chess, sudoku, Portal or Monopoly are soem example of practise skill game, in game we can learn more language especially English that most of games use.

Body 2: Drawbacks

Topic sentence 1:Playing games makes students health decline. has negative effect on students' health.

Explanation:

The reason many people think we have to ban games because the dangerous consequences they have.

The sad point of playing games that it makes students form a bad habit like: sit for long time, less exercise, sleep time isn't resonable,....

Some bad habits cause weak eyes, back - ache, tired........

Example:

Many students have to wear glasses beacause of games.

Topic sentence 2:Students will have bad behavior if they play bad games.

Explanation:

Many games with violence is the biggest reason for the dirty mind on students, must mention action games. Students may copy the bad behavior in real life.

Violent games may increase the angry sides of students.

Example:

There is one boy fight with his mother when he plays game with violence, in the end his mother die because of the bad bahavior.

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Body 1: Drawbacks of playing games

Topic sentence 1: Playing games too much can negatively affect students' academic performance.

Explanation: Students may spend too much time on games and don't care their homework or studies, leading to poor grades.

Example: Some students who play video games for hours every day will often not complete their assignments on time.

Topic sentence 2: Excessive gaming can be harmful to students' physical and mental health.

Explanation: Spending long hours playing games can cause health problems such as eye strain, difficulty sleeping leading to fatigue and stress.

Example: Students who stay up late playing games will feel exhausted and lose focus in class.

Body 2: Benefits of playing games

Topic sentence 1: Playing games helps students develop teamwork and communication skills.

Explanation: Many games require players to cooperate with teammates, share responsibilities, and communicate effectively to achieve common goals.

Example: In games like "Among Us," students learn to make decisions and trust each other.

Topic sentence 2: Playing games can help students relax and reduce stress after studying.

Explanation: After long hours of studying, gaming provides a fun way for students to improve their mood.

Example: A short gaming session after homework can make students feel happier and motivated for the next day's lessons.

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Sâm 6m

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1 playing game is bad

explanation

- Playing game make you nearsight

- playing game make you nearsight because in TV or computer have blue light and is harmful

- playing game might cause you addiction

example

- Tuan playing game very much, he very like free fire and play 2 hour in day. First, he doesn't wear a glass, but after 3 month, he wear a glass.

Phần này con cần chỉ rõ và kĩ hơn và ảnh hưởng đến mắt ra sao, tại sao lại ảnh hưởng đến mắt, tầm nhìn, kết quả mắt sẽ ra sao nếu tiếp xúc nhiều.

Phần ví dụ thì sẽ không nêu tên hẳn 1 người ra mà nói chung chung hoặc là nếu phân tích kĩ rồi thì không cần ví dụ nữa.

2 playing game is good

explanation

- much game have a good lesson and creative story ( ví dụ đó là game gì).

- the game can have a creative charater help childen have a creative brain.

- game also help you relax after a tiring day.

example

- Tuan Anh draw very beautiful and he very kind, he say he play black myth wukong after school and charater in that game is beautiful. ( tương tự không nên để cụ thể tên ai)

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Minh Loan 6M

Body 1: Benefits

Topic sentence 1: Playing games helps develop critical thinking and problem-solving skills

Explanation

-Games bring joy, excitement, and help the brain relax after long hours of work or study

-In strategy or survival games, players have to analyze situations and choose the optimal solution under time pressure.

Example: Games like online chess, strategy games, or puzzle games train the brain like physical exercises for the mind.

Topic sentence 2: Playing games helps the mind relax after stressful study hours

Explanation:

- Long periods of studying can make the brain fatigued, reducing focus and memory retention.

-Playing games in moderation after study hours is not only harmless but also an effective relaxation method, helping to recharge the brain.

Example: Many students often play casual games like Candy Crush, Stardew Valley, or puzzle games like Sudoku after school to relax. These games are not stressful and help ease the mind, making it easier to regain motivation for studying.

Body 2: Drawbacks

Topic sentence 1: Impact on study and work.

Explanation:

-Playing games too much can cause players to lose focus on their studies or work, reducing their learning efficiency and work productivity.

-When games take up too much time, players may fail to complete assignments, skip studying for exams, or neglect their learning.

Example: A university student spent most of his time playing online shooting games in the days leading up to his final exams. He no longer had time to study, and as a result, he didn't achieve the desired grades in his final exams.

Topic sentence 2: Impact on physical health.

Explanation:

-Playing games for too long in front of the screen can lead to eye strain, fatigue, and vision problems such as dry eyes and headaches.

-If playing games replaces physical activities, it can lead to a sedentary lifestyle and increase the risk of obesity.

Example: A university student, who frequently plays games on the computer for many hours each day, started to experience eye strain, dry eyes, and occasional headaches after a while. He had to see a doctor, who advised him to reduce his gaming time and take proper breaks to protect his eyes.

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Body 1: Drawbacks of playing games

Topic sentence 1: Playing games too much hurts students' studies.

Explanation: It takes away study time and leads to bad grades.( nói kĩ hơn nhé tại sao lại khiến điểm kém đi được)

Example: A student addicted to games often fails exams.

Topic sentence 2: Gaming affects students' health.

Explanation: Long gaming hours cause eye strain and poor sleep. ( phân tích kĩ hơn tại sao mắt lại bị ảnh hưởng và mắt hay sau khi ít ngủ thì làm sao)

Example: Many gamers feel tired and sick at school.

Body 2: Why gaming should be limited

Topic sentence 1: Limiting games helps balance study and play.

Explanation: Students can focus better and still enjoy games.

Example: Schools with gaming rules see better student performance.

Topic sentence 2: Less gaming encourages better activities.

Explanation: Students may join sports or clubs instead.

Example: Club members often improve teamwork skills.

Tất cả các ý của con đều ổn nhưng khi viết thành bài con vẫn cần mở rộng ý phân tích rõ nguyên nhân kết quả nó tạo nên để tránh bài sơ sài

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Body 1: Negative effect of playing game

- Topic sentence 1: Playing games too much can make students do badly in school. ( do badly trên khía cạnh nào con, vì nó rất chung -- affect negatively on academic performance)

-Explanation: Many students spend many hours a day playing games, so they don’t have enough time to do their homework or review the lessons.

-Example: For example, some students play games on their phones or computers until midnight. The next day, they are sleepy in class and cannot listen to the teacher or understand the lesson well.

-Topic sentence 2: Games can make students addicted and behave badly.

-Explanation: When students play games every day for a long time, they may become addicted. They feel uncomfortable, angry, or even shout at others when someone tells them to stop.

-Example: For instance, many parents say their children skip meals or don’t talk to the family anymore because they only care about the games. This makes their behavior worse and causes problems in the family.

Body 2: Good effects of playing games

-Topic sentence 1: Games help you communicate

-Explanation:Playing games can actually help students communicate better, especially in games that require teamwork. Many online games or multiplayer games involve talking to other players, sharing ideas, and working together to solve problems or win challenges.

-Example: In the game Among Us, people must communicate and work together to find who is the imposter

-Topic sentence 2: Playing games can reduce stress

-Explanation: After a long day of school, playing game allows them to relax their minds.

-Example: For example, a student who has had a stressful day at school might play a relaxing game like Animal Crossing, where they can decorate their house and garden.

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Body 1 :BENEFITS

Topic sentence 1 : Playing games helps children of teamwork.

Explanation:

-Some people think that children playing games are not good ,but in game we can learn about teamwork.

- Playing with friends and Communicate with social networks ,chat with many people to have fun.

Example: Roblox is a famous game that many game about teamwork,we can work in group to fight each other team,we can play online with friends

Topic sentence 2: Playing game helps children rest and entertaining.

-After studying in at school children are so tired ,but they need to do homework and housework to help parents

-Children need time to relax , some parents are playing games to not only children as well,so sometimes children can playing games too.

Example: My father often play CandyCrushSaga,is puzzle game, my father play this game so fun and he likes this game, he play many levels hard ,and now he in levels 9860. ( không lấy ví dụ chủ quan từ bản thân)

Body 2 : DRAWBACKS

Topic sentence 1: Playing a lot of games is not good for your body

Explanation

-Playing game is have time not playing game 4-5 ,it make we not have strong body .( câu này cô chưa hiểu rõ ý )You will be tired every time

-Your eyes can near be affected negatively and you have to go hospital to check your eyes. Your eyes need time to relax. ( viết rõ phần hậu quả cho đôi mắt)

-you play game and you don't care about family and even not eating or sleeping. Not look after your younger bother or youger sister. --> sửa ngữ pháp.

Topic sentence 2: Your point will pull over.

Explanation:

-Many children play miscellaneous game. it make your test wrong and you will make many mistake.

-your point will not good and you are burning pupils. Your friend will laughter at you

-Your teacher you are so sad with your point .Some teacher are so anger. She/he will talk with your family

Example : My brothe has the bad point and he are so tired , but he still playing the game and from there he was expelled from school.

Con thay hết từ "you" chuyển thành students/ they/ them nhé

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Body 1: Drawbacks

Topic sentence 1: Playing game affects student's health

Explanation:

-Playing games for hours with computers, phones or ipads and don't do not doing excercise is not good for students health and their eyes.

-Playing game late at night can make students sick and feel sleeply when going to school.

Example: Some students play game for hours at home and they have a headache in class.

Topic sentence 2: Playing games make students study worse.

Explanation:

-Students will spend less time for studies.

-Students can be addicted to games and hate studying.

Example: Some students playing games for hours at night and lose the exam because they didn't study.

BODY 2:BENEFITS:Topic sentence 1: Playing games sometimes can make students become smarter

Explanation:

-Some games you need to think and it can help you become smarter.

-Playing games sometime can make student learn.

Example: Some games like Brain out, The moron test, IQ Test can help students smarter.

Topic sentence 2: Playing games help students relax.

Explanation:

-When students feel tired they can play games to relax

-Playing games sometimes helps students feel better.

Example: After a long day at school, students can play game to relax and feel better.

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BODY 1: BENEFITS

Topic sentence 1: Playing games can improve students' creativity and solving skills.

+ Explanation:

- Some games provide children the opportunity to think creatively as obstacles arise.

- Besides, other games like have puzzles and codes that they have to solve to move on to other challenges. These questions help children improve their puzzle skills and apply them to life.

+ Example: Minecraft is a popular game that encourages player to use “modding” options to customize their characters appearance. They can also develop new worlds and levels. Modding gives children opportunities for self-expression.

- Topic sentence 2: Students can enhance their leadership skills.

+ Explanation:

- When children play games in groups, they can take turns leading and following. Teens who play in groups online feel like they gain leadership skills in persuasion, motivation and mediation.

+ Example: There are many teamwork games in Roblox that require a commander like Teamwork Puzzles and Altitoture. Students can work together, lead each other and bond friendships.

BODY 2: DRAWBACKS

Topic sentence 1: Playing games too much is bad for students' health.

+ Explanation:

- Spending time just playing games on electronic devices can hurt students' eyes, sitting a lot without moving can affect their body and health.

- They may spend less time doing other activities such as reading, sports, homework and interaction with family and friends.

- Many children are addicted to games. They can play games everytime without eating, sleeping and resting. That's very dangerous.

+ Examples: Some students have to wear glasses because they play games too much. They may be lonely and isolated because they don't talk with anyone. Many families are really sad when they know that their children are addicted to games!

Topic sentence 2: Students will be encouraged to engage in violent behavior.

+ Explanation:

- Many games include violence like action games. Students may watch them and imitate this behavior in real life.

- Studies show that those who watch simulated violence, like that in video games, can become immune to the violence and more inclined to act violently themselves.  There has been a correlation between violent game use and aggressive behavior.

- The interactive nature of some of the video games can worsen the effects of the game violence on children by encouraging repetition and rewards for the behavior.

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Body 1: The bad sides of playing games

-Some people think that playing games too much can make students study badly.

-If students play games all the time, they don’t do homework or study lessons. This can make their grades go down.

- Also, playing games can be bad for students health and daily life.

-Sitting too long in front of a screen can hurt their eyes and make them lazy to move or talk to family.

-Example: A studdnt who plays games all day may not go outside or talk to friends and parents.

Body 2: The good sides of playing games (if students play them wisely)

-But some games can help students think better and become smarter.

-Puzzle or building games make students think fast and solve problems.

-Example: Games like Minecraft help students be creativd and learn new things.

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I. Introduction

-Playing games is popular among students today.

-Some people think games are harmful and should be limited.

II. Body

Body 1: Playing games too much is bad for study and health

-Their grades can go down.

-Games can hurt their eyes and health when played too long.

-Example: Some students play late at night and feel sleepy in class.

Body 2: Students need to control their game time

-It’s okay to play games, but only after schoolwork is done.

-Parents and teachers should help students make a good schedule.

-Example: 30 minutes of games a day after homework is a good rule.

III. Conclusion

-Playing games should be limited because it affects study and health.

-Students should balance games and learning to stay healthy and do well in school.

Phần bài của con body 2 chưa rõ ý, là con ủng hộ hay không ủng hộ phần chơi games, nó là giải pháp, nhưng mình cần giải thích tại sao con thấy nó tốt hay xấu)

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Hà An- 6M

*)Body 1: Drawbacks

Topic sentence 1: Playing games can be addictive and affect negatively study.

+) Addictive game mechanism:

Rewards and incentives: Games often use

Use a reward system (points, items, levels) to create a sense of satisfaction and encourage players to continue.

-) Interactivity and sociality: Many games allows players to interact with each other, creating a sense of community and promoting engagement.

-) Competitiveness: Games often have leaderboards. Ranks, challenges, and other competitive elements encourage players to strive harder to achieve high results.

-) Addictive Design: Game Developers

often use design techniques to enhance addictiveness, such as short play times, easy accessibility, and constant updates of new content

==> những đặc điểm con nêu ở trên thì có ảnh hưởng như thế nào đến việc học? ảnh hưởng xấu đến học sinh như thế nào ? Con chỉ rõ ra nhé. Hoặc là con chỉ cần viết đơn giản lý do nó ảnh hưởng đến việc học do học sinh mải chơi không có tâm trí và thời gian để ôn tập...thuii

+) Example: of a student neglecting his studies and staying up late playing games.

Topic sentence 2: Playing games affect physical and metal health.

+) Health problems caused by playing too much video games. ( con kể ra là học sinh có thể mắc phải bệnh gì? như là nó ảnh hưởng đến mắt, lưng,.... vì sao lại vậy?)

Vì con nêu ra 2 cái đó là thể chất và tinh thần nên con phải đưa rõ ra là nó ảnh hưởng đến thể chất như nào và tinh thần ra sao?)

+) Example: Of health problems caused by playing too video games.

*) Body 2:

Topic sentence 1: Playing games can develop thinking and proble - solving skills.

+) Play game can strategic thinking, quick reflexes and other skills.

+) Example: Of games that help develop these skills. ( đưa ra một vài game phổ biến, chứng minh rằng con phải suy nghĩ, đưa ra chiến lược, luyện các kĩ năng..)

Topic sentence 2: Playing games can help students relax and reduce stress.

+) There are many benefits to having fun and relaxing after school, including:

Stress Relief: Helps students relieve stress after a stressful day of studying.

-) Improving Mental Health: Creating Balance

and help students feel happier and more joyful.

-) Increased Concentration: Helps Students Gain More

energy and concentration for other activities.

-) Develop social skills: Recreational activities can help students communicate and interact with friends, developing social skills.

-) Explore interests and talents: Provide opportunities for students to explore new things and develop their talents.

+) Example: Of playing games as a healthy from of entertainment.

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𖹭 Writing Task 2 ( Agree - Disagree )

Topic: " Some people say that playing games is bad for students and should be limited."

✦ ) Body 1: Benefits

୨୧ Topic sentence 1: Playing games help students reduce stress and entertain after studying and learning

Students can learn, experience and explore the world through games

Students can make friends with other friends through online games

Some games have educantional content for students to help them explore the world, teach they some important skills, how to behave with family,...

For example, adventure games, math games are very good for kids, they help kids to think faster, how to win and score.

==> Phần này con phân ra cho cô 2 ý chính:

Games giảm stress và entertain (các câu sau phân tích tại sao lại giúp hs như vậy)

Học sinh có thể mở rộng kiến thức thông qua educational games ( các câu sau phân tích thêm chứng mình là mình có thể học qua games)

✮ ) Body 2: Drawbacks

୨୧ Topic sentence 2: Playing games can negatively affect to students' health and students' learning results, they don't have time with family.

Playing games can make eyes worse, make students feel lazy, students can become addicted. When students become addicted, it will be hard to quit the game. For example, students' eyes will be affected, from which they will have to wear glasses to see more clearly.

When students become addicted, they can play games when they are eating, doing homework, they can play games all night and forget to sleep, so they will feel tired, lose energy in the morning. Why don't they spend that time to study, rest and have time with family?

If students play too much games, their grades will be worse. Their grades can be affected because they play too much games and they forget to study, hate studying and learning.

What if students spend time playing games, what will happen? Their grades will go down, they can skip homeworks, test, grades, friends and family to play games

If students play game too much, they won't have time to play and spend time with their family, relatives, friends,.. Childhood is the best, most beautiful time with friends & family, but what if students spend that time on playing game?

For instance, a student play too much video games, he always get low score and reflections from his teacher. His parents are worried, tired and angry with him.

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Body 1:drawbacks
Topic sentence:If you play too  much games, it will affect negatively on your health.
+) when playing games, our nervous system will always feel tired, feel a loss of energy or rest will help you regain strength
+) Playing too much games will also cause difficult situations. It can be a conflict of mood or doing wrong things.
Body 2:Benefits
Topic sentence:Help students relax after each class
+) Games can also be a way for students to entertain themselves. Because there are many intellectual games on the internet.

+) Students will become more optimistic. There is no more pressure.

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WRITING TASK 2 (AGREE - DISAGREE)

*)Body 1: Drawbacks

Topic sentence 1: Playing games too much will become addictive. makes students addicted

+)If you play games everyday, you will gradually become addicted to games. If you become addicted to games, it will be difficult to quit later.

+)For example, every time you go home, you play games; after doing homework, you play games; you play while eating too! Therefore, you will play games anytime, anywhere you want!

Topic sentence 2: It will affect the students' learning results.

+)Playing a lot of games will cause the students' learning results to deteriorate seriously. This result not only affects the psychology and spirit of students but also causes the anxiety of most parents to increase.

+)For example, Because of playing too much, they will receive low scores in many subjects and cannot concentrate during class, causing their parents to be very worried.

*)Body 2: Benefits

Topic sentence 1: Help students relax and entertain after school.

+)Some games have entertaining and funny content, suitable for young children to play. Therefore, it'll make they feel more excited and happier when playing games.

+)For example, when they play adventure games, there are many different types of adventure maps to choose, it helps to increase the attractiveness and enjoyment of playing.

Topic sentence 2: Some games can teach students more new knowledge of understanding skills about social, world, etc.

+)Sometimes, games have educational content for kids to teach them some important life skills. Some of that also can improve their IQ, EQ with fun quizzes, trick quizzes or smart puzzles.

+)For instance, in "Brain Tricky Puzzles", the players can try many tricky quizzes and situation questions. It will help you improve your ability to think and organize logically and scientifically.

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Body 1:Negative effects of playing games:

+) Point 1: Playing to many games can hurt your body.

Sitting for a long time while gaming can make you lazy and weak. It can cause back pain, sore eyes, and even hurt your hands from pressing buttons too much.

For example: If you play games for hours without breaks, your back might start hurting, and your hands could feel stiff, just like how your legs feel tired after sitting too long.

+) Point 2: Too much gaming can make your grades go down.

If you spend all your time playing games, you won’t have enough time to study or do homework. This can make you forget lessons and get low scores in school.

For example: playing games all night instead of studying for a test—the next day, you might not remember anything and fail the exam.

Body 2: Good effects of playing games.

+) Point 1: Games make you smarter:

Some games teach children about English, physical,...... So some game you play can make you smarter.

For example: Playing games like Sudoku or Minecraft is like exercise for your brain – it helps you think faster and smarter!

+) Point 2: You help you comunicate:

In games you can play with other player, play games together, team up,.......

For example: In Roblox or Among Us, you can play and laugh with friends just like at recess! --> Students có lợi gì từ việc này

These are simple but strong points. Không viết câu này

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I Introduction

Gaming is popular among students

Many people believe it is harmful and should be limited

I agree with this opinion

II Body 1: Negative effects of gaming

Point 1: Affects academic performance
Students spend less time studying ( tại sao lại vậy? Hậu quả là gì?)

Point 2: Bad for health
Eye strain, stress, addiction, less physical activity ( tại sao lại ảnh hưởng đến mắt, tại sao lại stress...., con nói rõ ra nhé)

III Body 2: Reasons not to limit gaming

Point 1: Helps students manage time better
Balance between study and play ( cụ thể con lấy ví dụ ra nhé!)

Point 2: Protects from harmful content
Avoid violence and online dangers ( con có thể nói thêm hậu quả khi học sinh xem nhiều bạo lực quá)

IV Conclusion

Gaming has many drawbacks

It should be limited for students’ well-being