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1. Make sure to refer to PEA paragraphing when writing a piece of work. Following this structure of, point, evaluate, analyze will ensure the work is focused on what the aim is.

2. Focus on the language I use in my work, to ensure it remains critical and academic.

3. Make sure to use reliable sources your arguments.

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1. Structure and justify your points using the PEA structure.

2. Use good phrasing to present your points critically and acdemically.

1. Avoid being to descriptive by ensuring your points have good sourcing and referencing. Make sure they engage and add to the academic debate through evidence based discussion rather than simply describing someone else's point.

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1. Using a variety of accurate and recent conjunctive adverbs to present and promote information.

2. Comparison and cross referencing of multiple accurate and proper sources

1. Conciseness. Avoid 'descriptive' language and focus on telling a POINT, not a STORY.

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Remember PEA in your paragraphs

Use third person correct language

Use x2 evidence for every point made

Don't say too much stick to point keep it clear

Don't use I, we etc

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use the pea structure & ensure sources are strong and genuine

use your box plan and stick to it. short topic sentence, link for evidence, as little bullets for evidence.

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be concise

Use reliable sources when referencing

Use PEA paragraphs

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1 • Make sure you used 3rd person (it stops you from putting your opinion in)

2 • Do lots of further reading

1 • Do not waffle ! - try to be objective

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Always try to use PEA

Always use for and against

Promote evidence using references

Argue the case with evidence

Do not waffle make it clear .

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1, Justify the points you are making by using the PEA paragraph.

2, Have you used reliable and credible sources for the work.

Using the PEA paragraphs ensures that you are not being too descriptive. This gives you the opportunity to balance your argument and provide evidence to back it up.

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1. Justify every point you make to lead the reader into reading your position.

2. Is your argument relevant to the reader and have you used reliable sources?

Use your box plan to categorise paragraphs using the PEA method to lay out your structure. Ensure you have covered all revenant points and you have stuck to your source.

Make sure you have given your balanced argument to the reader with every bit of detail. Ensure you have analysed your point and evidence clearly and back up your point using a balanced argument.

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1. Tell the reader your position

2. Justify every point using well structured PEA paragraphs

To avoid being too descriptive in writing use the PEA structure and use evidence to support a balanced argument. Using and applying evidence to support the viewpoint. Rather than simply providing evidence without applying it.