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- Speaking is very good as usual
- I like the idea behind it
- Powtoon needs more work (not sure if you have finished it or not, sorry if you aren't!), maybe consider using more videos and animation maybe for the students engagement and attention.

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include more references and less overview.

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Projected your voices really well, great pacing of your speaking.

The comment on media presence using celebrities is a good pop culture reference - maybe not accessible to everyone but still cool.

Good ICT link with Evernote.

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Really good start - probably just need some more justification to support why you have chosen to include what you have. PowToon could be a bit more interactive - the assessment is a good idea. I really like the idea of the happy place speech.

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Pace of powtoon slower, pace of speaker well; good style of speaking volume was good
Concept first before showing padlet?
Approach to the requirement explained a bit more, more “what’s”
Touch base more with the connectivness of the requirement to what you’re doing
Good reference to backing up, perhaps more justifications though

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Better photos
Like the structure of that presentation structure bad boi, but maybe simplify. There’s a lot to read D:
Warming up is important to public speaking. Noice
Toms hot

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Good voice

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I know Lebron, cool dude

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Seems to switch between too much info, and not enough explanation.
Cant read the text with the assessment section, and it is spelled as assesment ( i know its nitpicky, but i figured it would be good to know).
Really great start, good speaking skills

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Slow down the Powtoon
Proofread for mistakes

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Good work guys, I'm a fan of evernote (huge if true)

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Slow down the Powtoon

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Good Speaking Voice
Slow down powtoon
Good use of references

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Great speaking voice, a tad quiet however

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- I really like how your appearance of the powtoon is looking

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Activities on Padlet sounds like a great idea - make sure you really integrate those to ensure the ICT is covered.

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Nice work, but powtoon could use alot more visual stimuli. Large amounts of block text diddn't seem very engaging for audience. Presentation was also a bit unclear to understand, especially how ICT was involved.

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ood work

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Nice layout with A E S T H E T I C illustrations

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Good explanation, sounds like you have some awesome stuff coming up! Really great explanation of how you will minimize bullying.

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Great work on anonymity. Applies ict safety to powtoons so it makes it obvious that you take it seriously,

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Good consolidation, u guys r strong u smart

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Good things:
linked to different types of learners
powtoon looks visually appealing

things to improve
elaborate how students can use ICT safely

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Access is good for students.
F L E X on that mathematics

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Spoke slightly fast
Good integration of readings
Perhaps slow down powtoon

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Things done well:
-cool powtoon animations
-good use of sources

Things to improve:
-projection of voice

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Things done well:

- Nice powtoon

Things to improve on:
- Both speakers need more volume

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- Very quiet
- Unsure what the task is

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Positive:
- A well developed Powtoon which is easy to follow
- Good visuals in Powtoon
Negatives:
- Maybe slow down and project your voices a little bit more

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Powtoon was very bare bones. Remember that end goal is to create a microlesson through the platform.

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- first speaker was very quiet
- second speaker was very fast and hard to follow
- powtoon looks lit, love the pop- ups to keep our attention
- i don't really understand what their task is or what your micro lesson is on.

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- Presenter needs to work on public speaking
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Looks like you guys have put in a lot of work already. The website is a really good touch - but does it maybe take away from the main PowToon micro lesson??

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Make sure talking to audience not at audience.
Further into topics for maybe less topics rather than shallow level about all topics.

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Great construction of powtoon, engaging, visually appealing: font well, use of emojis well done in this instance
Depth of analysis further needed in relation to the required curriculum
Good inclusion of source reading to backup points
Pace and presentation was well done, projection and volume could be heightened
Interactive maps are attention grabbing, well done
Good development of task, like the idea of a a powtoon included in another powtoon, I think on the day it will come across effective
Good amount of effort projected into this, just need to tweak how it’s presented
Nice inclusion of pop culture, links in well with helping the students’ understanding of the chosen area of WW2 (history) ? May need to identify this early on

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would have been good to see the Powtoon. Still good as always though.

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good things:
good introduction
good link to the ICT criteria
excellent website

things to improve
spoke too fast
a bit hard to follow

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Separate website is super fancy! Really great use of cyber-safety implementation.

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reference only authors name in speech and year

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things you did well:
-good use of group photos in powtoon
- good use of research around subject area to influence activity
-good integration of online safety criteria
-good projection and presentation style
Things to improve on:
- powtoon still needs work, but it looks very good for what you've got

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Things you did well:
- Cool Powtoon
- Nice use of sources and explanations and justifications
- Awesome volume and pace
Things to improve on:

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Things you did well:
- A cool idea and very engaging
- The video examples were good
- Good explanation on why you used Makey Makey kits and set the tasks you did
Things to improve:
- Define collaboration

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Wonderful design! Love the integration of ICT throughout in the exercises.

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PowToon looks good already. Good use of sources to support. The scenario is a good touch and the group work is a good idea. That's an interesting concept of testing ICT vs Face to Face collaboration.

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GREAT justification and reasoning!!

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dam jack a hubby

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- I really like the appearance and layout of your powtoon

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More eye contact, feels like information is being repeated i,e, cyber-bullying and the coggel. Would like to see an an example of Coggel in use. Space and and Stellar Science is always an exciting area to jump into!

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Powtoon looks dope dude, deliverance of speech needs fine-tuning
Good Work OG

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Good speaking pace, good use of sources and really good justification

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Like groupwork online! Noice

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The content covered was in depth and had a lot of theoretical links but I would try and clean up the language to make it more professional

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Very visually appealing.

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Structure of the microlesson was great. It was then backed up by the wix website. Good stuff

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Things you did well:
- Good knowledge on what you were talking about without using your notes
- Good idea to talk to a music teacher and get first hand experiences
- Nice looking Powtoon
Things to improve on:
- use of more referencing
- Talk more about or further explain what a visual learner is

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things you did well:
- you actually spoke to a music teacher! really good idea.
- really technically advanced powtoon

things to improve:
- sometimes the text is a bit hard to read in the powtoon.

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Things you did well:
- cool use of a source (the music teacher)
- nice use of the 12 bar blues
Things to improve on:
- more projection from first speaker
- have a more concrete script, the two speakers spoke over each other at one point
- more use of references

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First speaker more projection, loss of position in speech created an awkward stance, need to be more familiar with what your speaking, don’t be so nervous you got this!
Really great idea seeking knowledge from a professional, nice
Good eye contact
Linking to task (connectiveness) needs more work
Second speaker good voice, volume and pace good
More justification and referencing needed
Powtoon needs obvious tweaking to come across more effective
Needs further analysis of how it meets the required curriculum

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The narrative structure is an effective way to signpost the students through the microlesson. I would say less hand gestures would help your presentation. Can be distracting

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Don't doubt yourself, if you say "most schools" let us believe it. Better yet, find sources to back you up.
"If everyone used technology, there'd be no element of communication." - how do you know this? Why wouldn't there be?

Good idea for using a 12 bar blues backing track and a blue colour scheme/jazzy font in the Powtoon

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speech was a bit staggered, it didn't flow easliy which made it hard to follow. try and know what your going to say a bit better so it runs a bit smoother
two speakers were trying to talk over eachother in some parts and interrupt which made it difficult to follow
love the concept of learning the 12 bar blues, very good idea
the task was clear in the speech,

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when the writing runs onto the page it's really hard to read

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Some colours of font make it hard to read
Great progress of powtoon
Great backing for why you made the decisions that you did.

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PowToon is really put together well. Presentation felt like it had a lot of down time and a bit awkward at points where I suppose music is meant to be playing?

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good things
good powtoon
good link to ICT criteria

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things you did well:
- cool concept for the activity! looks really fun and engaging
-good presentation style considering the other side was being pretty loud

Things to improve on:
- good sources, but need more references and quotes.
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the set out is so coolll! will definitely keep kids interested

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I love the idea of a mission, nice layout as well
Less what, more why
Work on clarity "add a layer of structure, stated by Drahmy" it wasn't fully clear what he theorised, step us through it

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Love the design of the powtoon