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Updated - Assessment Task Three Detailed Description.pdf

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Good things:
-encourages students to use ICT
-good voice
-clear dot points on ppt
-good modules
Things to improve:
-some fonts on ppt are too small

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Good clear outline for the Microlesson. The use of a resource page is a really good idea. Good use of different ICT elements.

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things you did well:
-sharing of the presentation among group members
-good projection in presentation.

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Things you did well:
- really good at staying calm and continuing if you stumbled over a word
- really neat use of games, looks very engaging
- good back up for all your decisions

Things to improve on:
-  Flow, introduce each other
-  Eye contact

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Great use of theory and implementation into the powerpoint

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- Really good sources and theories used

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The presentation was well signposted and easy to follow. Very content heavy

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Looking good Jack great projection
Rob lovin the shirt, great projection and excellent source use
U guys are bomb!

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-Good clear speaking voice from all of the speakers
- Q&A was very engaging
- interesting concept of spy
- well shared out group presentation

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Things you did well:
- Clear speaking, pace and use of volume
- Good transition between speakers
- Good command of time
- Interactive questions

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Very well spoken
Good use of sources
Clever use of powerpoint to support what was being spoken
Great Q & A and very well planned

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Appealing Powtoon - good use of colour and animations
- Good explanation of Padlet - well thought out for anonymity and price for
- Great q and a, super engaging and really cool how open ended it was, was very easy to generate conversation

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Good:
- definitions of terms
- really good looking powtoon
- good and flowing signposting
- great speakers and their projection
- good and consistent talk on the same topic- really nailed pushing the one point
Could improve:
- personally, showing the powtoon in the background was somewhat distracting
- kind of fast talking but great voice and projection

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Things you did well:
- Good introduction
- Nice to have powtoon playing in the background for context
- Good use of sources and explanation of them
- Acknowledging disadvantages

Things to improve:
- Using palm cards for all speakers

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Well spoken
Good explanation of concept
Nice use of sources

Showing powtoon in the back was slightly distracting

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- Good definition of terms
- Could have picked out certain parts of the Powtoon that related exactly to what you are saying in your speech
- Good Powtoon
- Good introducing of next speaker

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things done well:
- good introduction of what the expectations were.
- powtoon was nice to have some context with the speech
- easy to follow speech and tone of speaking.
- second speaker had good hand movements and tone.
- good justifications of why you did things, and picking up on any problems such as cyber bullying in an anon space.
-nice smiles!
things to improve:
- first speaker speed up towards the end of her speech and it was getting a bit fast, very minor though, really good job in general.
-minor thing, but second speaker needs to move there palm cards in a different place as it was too low and every time they looked down they disconnected from the audience and it cut off your volume a bit
- a bit to reliant on palm cards

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Things you did well:
- Nice justification and explanation of ICT criteria
- Good volume and projection
- Good use of justification
Things to improve on:
- kind of hard to focus on Powtoon and speech at the same time

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- cool PowToon concept
- speaking was a little fast
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Things you did well:
- Clear stepped out Powtoon use in presentation
- Good introduction of speakers
- Good explanations

Things to improve on:
- More projection of voice

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good things:
- referring back to references
- slides with clear pictures and indication
- good explanation during q&a
- good link to cyber safety
- interesting and engaging
things to improve:
- voice: can't really hear you because of the other groups

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- Good, well structured introduction
- Good to see the powtoon on slides
- Virtual friends - no consequences

Overall great speech, well supported and well presented. Good work!

Grade: 7

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good things:
- great projection
- good back up of all decisions
- good link to cyber bullying

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Things you did well:
- Good introduction
- Good to have powtoon for context
- Command of sources
- Acknowledging the disadvantages
- colourful, clear, funny powtoon
- interactive to and more engaging when used the whiteboard during Q and A

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- Great introduction
- Good public speaking
- Fantastic Powtoon with a lot of videos
- GREAT Q&A

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Good:
- Great break down for your speech (the benefits, limitations etc)
- great speakers! VERY GREAT!
- great powtoon, colourful & engaging
- loved the Q&A
Could improve:
- kind of distracting playing the powtoon behind
- kind of confusing jumping between the same people

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clever powtoon  - love the videos and putting your own faces into the powtoon
- good link to research with the popularity of music

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things you did well:
-powtoon looked really good, nice comedy touch with the faces.
-good use of facts to influence your micro lesson (students like listening to music)
-good presentation!! very enthusiastic :)
-makey makey kits seem like a really good and fun idea.
-good discussion of positive/negatives of
Things to improve:
- a bit hard to pay attention to the powtoon while the speech was going on, but the analysis was very good.

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Things you did well:
- Good voice projection and volume
- The Makey Makey Kit idea is cool
- Good justification of why you chose MM instead of professional equipment
- Really good Q&A and quick justification
Things to improve on:
- A bit too much back and forth changing between the speakers
- Kind of hard to focus on both the Powtoon and the speakers

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Super groovy powtoon
Good vocal projection
Good use of sources
Really good use of whiteboard in Q & A

Having powtoon in background was slightly distracting but worked well/was well timed with what you were saying

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good:
-first speaker very clear and good projection
- writing on the board was very effective, but to save time it would have been more effective to have a pre-made diagram on the computer

improve:
- second speaker very good projection, emotion and tone, but very fast.
-maybe spread the group speaking around a bit.

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I liked the link between the task and cyber bullying. Ties in

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Cutest presentation I have ever seen in my whole life.

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- good speakers, second lacked a bit of emotion and tone
- PowToon took away from what was being said, focused on PowToon more

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Probably would have been useful to have an alternative presentation, so you didn't need to rely on the PowToon. Good research used to back up the speech.
I like the use of Coggle - sounds like a great ICT tool to incorporate. Getting the students to make a presentation is a great idea.
Good link to Cyber Safety - the activities will help a lot.
Really great speaking and engagement with us (the audience).

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No ppt (distracting use of powtoons)
Like home-based SDL!
nice graphics on powtoons
Like the incorporation of coggle
Reading off phone is a little distracting... can be seemless, but read from phone
Great speaking pres2!
Yay PBL :D
Like the arguing/competition. Makes it edgy
Like the Q&A/discussion forum

Top job.
Grade: 6

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Things done well:
- Good, clear introduction
- Nice use of powtoon to explain your concept
- Clear, paced speaking

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- Great introduction with a VERY strong speaker.
- Good use of bringing the curriculum up on the board so we knew exactly what you were talking about
- Good use of quotes and powerpoints
- A feel like the video was a bit random and just a bit of a mess around
- I liked the idea of the same person doing the introduction and conclusion
- A bit of a strange Q&A

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Good:
- good quotes and support of ideas
- lovely and effective ppt
- great job sticking to the same topic/key response
Could improve:
- not sure about the Q&A

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Things you did well:
- Awesome voice projection and volume
- Nice introduction of your task and microlesson
- Nice small video
Things to improve on:
- Could make better use of Q&A in the way that you justify why you've used a video AND a teacher

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the earth is flat bro

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Bit hard to hear the presentation. Not sure what we're following at points. Reading off the phone makes things a bit awkward for presenting.

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Good use of other technology, such as coggle.
Great use of pedagogical  content

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Things you did well:
-Good start! very bright and refreshing presentation style.
-good use of actual music teachers as a reference.
-good use of narration in the powtoon, even if it was a little bit loud
-good use of introducing other group members. It made the presentation flow

Things to improve:
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The pontoon presentation is well structured and concise. Second speaker has great volume and it's good to see someone who has learnt there entire script yeah

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The presentation was distracting at the start. Could've waited a little bit so that the attention was on the speakers from the start. I liked the use of coggle and how it will work.

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Yeah nice one boys. Dominating 1050 once again. No Surprise really. Always looking sharp.

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Awesome first speaker, really confident
Good work integrating a scholar in the area with a quote!
Good work going with the technology even when it isnt working

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good:
-Good, simple and effective concept of the 12 bar blues
- first speaker was very strong and demanded attention, loved it
-good sharing the work load, including everyone somehow on our last assessment as groups
things to improve:
- second speaker needs to learn the speech better, there was a lot of jaggered pauses and it lost our attention, good volume and tone though.
-maybe test the video before hand

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- Good set out of Powtoon
- Nice use of the Powtoon in the presentation
- Mostly good volume and speaking
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- engaging PowToon, explains concepts well
- enjoyed the little part of video that was shown

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I'm really liking this, huge stuff

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Really engaging and well-spoken. Great PowToon.
I'd let both of you teach me.

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Very smooth presentation from timing to speaker transitions and powtoon layout.

Good idea to use powerpoint to link everything together

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- I like the idea of having another Powtoon for us and one for the students
- Maybe slow it down between slides so you have time to pause it on the right slide
- Good speaking voices and use of sources
-  Good Q&A, the questions were a little wordy though

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Things you've done well:
- Good projection of voice
- Good speaking about the ICT
Things to improve on:
- Go into more depth about how it suits all type of learners, what are they and specifically how Powtoon helps kinesthetic learners
- Try palm cards instead of a big book
- Would have liked to see the Powtoon that the students will see because it would have been easier to understand and answer the Q&A questions better

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Great Presentation:
things u did well;
* good distribution of  speaking between speakers
* great Powtoon

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Good:
- good use of evidence
- love that you made another powtoon to support your presentation
Could improve:
- define the different learners (what is auditory & kinaesthetic)
- powtoon in the background had too many words

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things done well:
- Good presentation, with good variation of tone and a steady pace
-good use of ICT specific sources
-very in depth discussion on ICT elements

Things to improve:
-with other group presenting it was a bit distracting, maybe a bit more projection
-it would have been good to see the students powtoon about history

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done well:
-first speaker had a very clear voice
-powtoon was appealing
- good answering question

can use some improvement:
-get some palm cards girl
-needs more definitions, especially for learnings.
-youve stated what they need to know, but you don't state how your micro lesson fufills this and teaches them these.
-theres a lot of facts, but you don't really state how your micro lesson teaches that, i can see youve hinted at it but there isnt a clear link
-needs to reference more facts, there was a few facts in there that need to be referenced.
-needs simpler questions, they were to complicated to understand and answer on demand

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- A little unsure on the curriculum (subject area) from the outset
- Unsure if your Powtoon is the actual microlesson
- A little distracting having the powtoon playing next to the speech
- Unsure what your microlesson actually is

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Would have been good to have the PowToon or an alternative presentation going throughout the speech. It was a bit hard to follow, particularly without a presentation.
The use Kahn Academy is a good touch and will be a helpful ICT tool, as well as the songs.
Good use of different elements, for the different learning types.
Timing was a bit off.

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good vocal projection
Good use of sources
Appeared to know what they were talking about well.
Clever having two different powtoons.

Appeared to be some problems with the powtoon but they were managed well.
Font on powtoon was a little distracting.

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good things:
-powtoon is visually appealing

things to improve:
-voice
-first speaker's eye contact
-maybe stand still during the presentation so it looks more professional
-length of the presentation

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-  work on script familiarity so can engage audience more
- good use of different resources for different learning preferences

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Speaker one: Great projection, kept my interest, but just perhaps next time use palm cards (you made a great effort to look up though)

Speaker Two: enthusiastic and clear speaking! Your question was confusing at first but clarification is good (perhaps next time if no one answers and no one asks for specification, try rephrasing the question)

I like how you made an extra Powtoon to support your use of it but it moved a bit fast for me personally. I actually would have liked to see the Powtoon you made for your class :)

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Loved the Powtoon

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Great visual design of the Powtoon, and nice impromptu solution to technical difficulties.

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I liked the song links to Pythagoras. I've seen this done in many classrooms and it's very effective. Powtoon could've been loaded quicker

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Great Idea with using music software
generally good speaking, however positioning of your 4th speak to the left was a bit distracting.

Very nice Powtoon, but , maybe use a powerpoint to link everything together

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Very engaging presentation , great Q n A

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- Maybe less focus on what you decided and more on why you decided it
- Cool use of QR code
- Good Q and A

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good things:
-powtoon is visually appealing
-good use of pop culture- jennifer Lawrence
things to improve:
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thought provoking, pontoon looks good

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Clever integration of powtoon into speech
Some writing slightly hard to read, but overall great quality of Powtoon
Great speaking skills, despite some nervousness. Nice work

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The use of pop-culture, with Jennifer Lawrence is such a great idea! I think would really help year 10 students. The PowToon looks really good and engaging.
Speech maybe could have been a bit more prepared - but you both did really well! The 3 Tasks look really good!