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Clara feedback from Michael

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Daniela Feedback from Michael

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Artur Feedback from Michael

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Juliana's Feedback from Michael

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Laura Feedback from Michael

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Fabiane's Feedback from Michael

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Julia Feedback from Michael

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Medals: This idea of yours of representing one feeling/situation into a character is something I enjoy because it really shows your research and study behind people's perceptions and first thoughts about these situations/feelings. You indeed showed a lot of experimentation and testing in a way that all characters work well together. What really impressed me, specially because I don't have this skill, is that you can draw one character and draw the same one in different expressions and positions! I wouldn't be able do to that (;

Mission: I know our struggle to finish a project on time, specially when we want to do something big/complex but don't have enough time for that. That's why we need to organize and put on a paper what we have to do and how much time we think we'll need to complete something. I do think you should complete this project of yours on the holidays

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Medals: I enjoy your idea of combining the projects together, the narrative seems well connect, the way you create a story and used the different medias, the photos and digital collages as well as some other effects showed a well finished outcome. The humor is on the right contrast, because it doesn't seem out of date, nowadays this kind of jokes and parodies of the end of the world are up to date.

Mission: This can became some deeper project, you can create this as a series of the Cats dominating the world or dominating different parts of the city, like your house, or the neighbor, etc. I also think you could create some sort of comic book with the frames you created, to give an even bigger meaning to the outcomes.

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Medals: Your struggle with idea and creation in this project seemed more intense, but you managed to go beyond this struggle and create a piece. The outcome seems like your personal style, it creates a narrative very explicit and I think you had a great experimentation and research aspect.

Missions: Try to relax and create more pieces during the time you are generating ideas, maybe you can think of smaller tests that can be the outcomes so you don't force yourself into creating the perfect piece and even if your ideas change you can work on the processes that you had. Don't think that deciding your idea should be too hard, sometimes you will have to decide on something you may not like, but that is okay.

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Medals: I think how you were into the production of the video was great, it shows how you were inspired by the pathway you choose. Also, the concept of your protest now after this remake is stronger, so it gives a new meaning to it.

Missions: I would like to see, like Dani said, more sketches, I think you could show us your thoughts of visualization of the video, how you wanted to be at first and your changes. Also, the video could be even more powerful if you made it louder and the music got louder, speaking slowly and taking bigger breaks, like your inspiration Charles Chaplin. This is something you could test out more.

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Medals: It seems like the boats are very well finished at some parts, the shapes and the effort you put yourself to create them is impressive. Both of them have their unique style, and I think them together they outstand each other, so one balances the other, but still catches out attention.

Missions: You can try and test the other models and see if they get the same result as the first one, if the structure works well on all of them. Maybe even think about testing different textures, apart from the ships pictures and the sea, you can create more of a map, creating the ship that shows off the history it passed on through.

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Medals: It is great to see how you went out of your usual projects and your style is still based on them. It is great to see you learning new things such as softwares and photography. It seems like you did a great experimentation with this project.

Missions: You could think about different backgrounds, test different colours of the drawings, and as well think of creating GIF's afterwards, it looks like this is a project for you to continue!

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Medals: The way you experimented with the materials and the changes of the software seems like you really were into the project. I would like to see your previous work as seeing this one I feel like this is a great outcome of the scenario (it is well finished, specially when it is on the dark and rain part). Also, the smoothness of the wave during the storm is really well done, the patterns made from the cloths are really expressive of the natural form.

Missions: Maybe you could have re thought about doing a gif, and think more of a stop motion short film, and create the character that is related to the materials you used on the scenario, or a character that stands out (made from clay for example) and go beyond the green screen and putting your face on it.

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Medals: You way of exploring the meanings of the photos and creating a composition was great. I think the presentation of the work is intwined with your concept.

Missions: The way you expressed your work on this video could have been a little more extent, I would like to see some of your tests and experiments as well as some research that you did. Even if the final piece was what you wanted, I would feel like seeing the pathway to choosing the pictures that match the words would be interesting.

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Medals: Your concept and creation of the 2D and 3D zine is different and it stands out, it seems like a complex solution that you managed to use and create a great piece.

Missions: I would like to see more artists and references from your work, you show a great development on your sketchbook but I think your project can be even more stronger if you showed where some of this inspiration came.

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Medals: Your choice of getting to know better the methods of photography by getting one of the concepts that we learned at the beginning is actually something that is impressive, it shows that you feel interested and went beyond to gather your results.

Missions: Now that you have understood the principles and tested it all of the elements, you can think about how to show these pictures and if they could became something else, like a publication or a website for them. I think there is a lot of room for your creations to became even bigger!

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Medals: I think you showed a lot experimentation and research on the ways you could create the visuals to your characters, they have an union style that is definably going to look great together.

Missions: Even if you plan on keeping this on your vacations, try to think about managing your time when coming to the project, even if it means to you creating a sample piece first to show. It would be really great to see one of the posters at least sketch of it!

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Medals: Your concept for the project, about seeing from other perspectives is a really great and based idea. You showed a very great thought of redoing the project when combining the elements you felt missing from the first one. I enjoyed the narrative that the 4 drawings create and talk together.

Missions: I felt like you could have showed a little bit more of research, and I also agree with Fabiane, I don't think doing the drawings all in one day might have been a great idea, it seems too rushed and unplanned. You can think about this concept of the project of other perspectives but actually given the freedom to people show their perspectives, so, for example, when you make a childish drawing, you can ask a child to draw in comparison to yours. That can create a bigger narrative and a strong point for your concept.

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Medals: There is many shows of experimentation and research about your project. Also, you were able to analyse and step back from these experimentations to see which one you think fits betters on your work.

Missions: I understand that your point was to create a less childish illustration, but have you thought about letting the different papers and textures create you something that you aren't expecting? Maybe go beyond you thoughts at first and really try out the methods and possibilities of those materials.

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Comment : Ju, next time, if you don't have an youtube account, you can upload on mine, then it'll be easier for people to watch the video (:

Medals: You got to draw more than one character in such a small amount of time. You included different artists in your project and that shows you're an artist who's up to collaborate with others.  I like the aesthetic of your drawings because at the saem time they look "melancholy" and dark, the colours you used changed that a bit, making it appreciable for people who don't really like these "creepy" types of drawing.

Missions: Even though I enjoyed your taste on music, next time try to turn the volume down a bit, because it was difficult to hear your voice. Also, try to show us more references, some artist's paintings/drawings you felt inspired by and so on

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Medals: You clearly felt connected to this project in a way you wouldn't stop experimenting and this is what this week was about. You did something by yourself that I would've definitely needed help with if trying so. You have a good eye for photography and should keep this sparkle on!

Missions: Go further in this project. Really, it can really be something amazing in your portfolio.
Try to put the pictures in black and white to see how they look and also, having a reference from the picture of the 3 face movements (the successful one), try to capture more than 5 movements, but crazier ones, in which your sister would be putting her hands on her face, and things like this.. Just to see how it could look in the end.

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Medals: Carrying about your audience's preferences is very important whenever you want to sell something, and that is noticeable you did. I wasn't expecting your zine to be like that and I loved it! Mixing 2D with 3D in such a small scale (zine) is something I'd never though of doing so congrats for the creativity. Your process is clear on your sketchbook and you spire me to really write down a "column" for the problems that came up. Thanks for that!

Mission: Next time, as you said, I'd tried different paper, folding technique of glueing material to use. Next time, try to experiment making the drawings a bit more realistic. I'm sure that a kid would go even crazier if they open their zine and see such a realistic scenario for them to play with their little toy.

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Medals: I'm happy you chose this project to remake because I saw potential on it! Since the beginning I had told you I recognized something different comparing to the other scenarios in the classroom and that's because you had 2 of them to work on. Good choice to experiment editing firstly in a different software, this shows you're not a careless person that's just satisfied with an average result. The passage of the waves looks smoother as well as the character's movements.

Mission: Show us some parts of your sketchbook sometime, it's important for the viewers to see how you think and go through your processes and ideas. Also, I'd try to add that part of the close-up you wanted to! You just have to research more about body language since you'll be wearing the mask. Go for it!

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Medals: Combining the old pictures with an up-to-date theme is always intriguing because you never know which topic the artist will talk about both in the past pictures and the nowadays ones, do you know what I mean?
Good idea to create this narrative for the pictures, otherwise I think it would've been a bit confusing to jut see a collage of a gigantic cat invading a city (hahahaha). But what about one of your tryouts, which there's a city underwater!? I liked its appearance, why did you not like it?

Missions: I would try to create even more collages for the narrative and actually conclude the "story". Also, have you thought about putting some speech bubbles in the collages? Maybe it'd look nice and would add this "comics" aesthetic to your result.

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Missions: You always impress me with your projects. Not only because of the final look of them but how persistence, focused and hard-working you are. You don't seem to care how much time you have to work on each project. You just go and do it without even complaining. This shows how confident and organized you are and also   shows time-management skills.
The boats look amazing! I loved both of them, specially the one that carries such a history behind it.  Congratulations for having such an ability for hand-made things. Oh, I know you don't like to put too many things on your sketchbook but I do see you've improved that so keep on it!

Missions: Maybe you could try to achieve the first result you've wanted to in the holidays? I'm sure you could do it.

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Medals: I reckon you're very into expression your ideas to the world and it's impressive how you're not just the guy behind the screen, editing the videos. You're the one talking and leaving your message, so you have both skills. I like you're speech in the video. It touched me somehow. The soundtrack, lighting AND camera angles were just perfect to make the video even more "dramatic", persuasive and touching. Comparing to Chaplin's video now, I really visualize you achieve that aesthetic.

Missions: I'd like to see your sketches, specially the one from your speech. Were you always that good at writing? Have you tried setting the video in black and white? I don't know, just an idea. And also, did you use a blue shirt and frame for a reason? Write that in your sketchbook so maybe next time you could show us some more details of your processes.

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Medals: I felt so connected to your pieces and I assume is firstly because its aesthetic it's something I would eventually aim for in one of my future projects (black and white with a contrasting color). And secondly because the theme behind it is really current: Streets and its diversity a s well as people's diversity. But somehow, we're all connected and it's pretty clear in your project. Congrats, really.

Missions: I'd like to see some pictures of you doing the processes and also, a better place for you to place all your results to take a beautiful picture.

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From Fabiane to Daniela

Medals: I like how you described the problems you had for the project. I like how you had many ideas for the project and how you showed this in your sketchbook. I like your initial collages and how you used the old pics mixed with drawings and writing, I don't understand why you didn't like them. Very nice research and I like the way you registered it in the sketchbook.

Missions: Plan time better next time. Maybe research more in the beggining so you don't struggle so much while thinking about what to do. The video is quite long, but well-explained. I prefer the first outcome because I think the one in the acetate is a bit too messy and can't really see the pictures that well (just personal opinion).

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From Fabiane to Vinicius.

Medals: I like how you explained the process you used for the project. Showed research. The outcome is really nice but I think it needed a more impactful ending. Its great that you made a storyboard but I think you should have shown it.

Missions: Maybe next time show somw pics of the process. I think the alternation of the camera is quite wierd, its a little too fast. And I think you could pause a bit after some sentences because it was pretty fast.

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Feedback from Fabiane to Artur

Medals: I see you made lots of research on ships but maybe put some research on artists that turn pic to 3d models. The structure is very impressive and it has a very nice finish to it. I ike how you made it stand. I prefer the chaotic one because it grabs more my attention. Its very nice how you have the moldes for them.

Missions: I think it only missed the sails but the rope or detailed didn't need to be included.

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From Fabiane to Letícia

Medals: I really liked how you experimented with different materials and different styles to get the road printed on paper.

Missions: maybe register the road that became art with a pic so that the person weeing the work can be more amazed.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Mixing old images with a actual theme (memes) was a really nice idea, besides the part of creating a narrative and not only putting things by themself.

Missions: You could develop it more by doing more collages thelling the story of how this happened.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Working hard to have a work even you were not feeling comfortable with the time/project.

Missions: Try to get more time on the doing part than in the thinking time, you could learn a lot using research, do a creative process (scamper, 6 thinking hats...) this project wasn't about getting the outcome by the end of the week, was about experimentation, you could do the things you wanted and finishing later.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Doing the complete video by the start to the end gave lots of meaning to what you are protesting for.

Missions: You could make the speach more shocking by talking slower and having breaks.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Experimentation was a big part of your project and you achieved a high level with this. The creative process is really complete and we can see that you really got into the project and managed to do what you wanted.

Missions: You could go further and create a big map mixing these textures, also, going on different places to get lots of little maps.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Mixing two parts of the project into one shows that you were really involved in doing it and learned a lot during this semester.

Missions: Plan time in the holidays to come with the outcome that you wanted in the first place.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: exploring a thing that you missed during the course and combining it with another project that was about photograph

Missions: You could explore more the point of view, doing a research of field and asking to people in different ages to draw so you can have a solid base.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: keep doing the project even when you're not feeling well

Missions: try to go out of your bubble and ask different people to draw, people on the streets and around ebac, not only people that know you well

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Try to put the video on youtube, i think that making people download the video really desmotivates them into watching the crit, also, the music is really loud and i almost can't hear your voice

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: You're doing really well in this character development, the research is really complete and well developed. The theme is also really touching and we can see that you're really involved with this.

Missions: Try to do a planner thing in the holidays to keep these project going, i think you can explore this in different ways of drawing too.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: working with new things and process were a great medal, i believe you did a lot in one week

Missions: Keep on going on this idea of creating a book/gif, if you want to make an easier process (for a longer thing - a gif), you could do the drawings on the computer.

*I just want to know the project you're redoing

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Feedback from Fabiane to Juliana

Medals: I really liked how you tried to experiment different styles and use only black and white, different from what you are used to doing. I like the way you experimented with new softwares and the different materials used.

Missions: I like the idea of the collage but maybe experiment more in terms of different backgrounds (not only using the seashells) and I think a short animation would look really nice with that type of process/style.

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From Fabiane to Bia.

Medals: I really like how you used the suggestions made in the crit to improve your work. I think the video was very well explained and I think you summarized everything you had to in 5 min.

Missions: maybe add some other vfx, like fake rain coming out from the sky and then a thunderstorm with lightning.

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Feedback from Fabiane to Laura.

Medals: I liked how you used the glass and combined different materials for the project, not only photographs but also red sting (that gave a very good contrast) and words.

Missions: I think the video was a bit short and lacked a bit of research.

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Feedback from Fabiane to Clara

Medals: I really liked the outcomes, I would totally buy a print of them and stick them on my wall. I liked how you made different outcomes and not only one.

Missions: Maybe present the artists that you talked about so we could see the work.

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Feedback from Fabiane to Julia.

Medals: I liked how you included other artists to experiment. It was very nice to be a part of your project. You did lots of research and

Missions: I think you should ask for other people to draw even if they aren't artists, to see how others react to it. The background music is kinda of annoying after some time and is too loud.

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Feedback from Fabiane to Len

Medals: I really liked how you researched into the ideas of character concept design and how you gave the messages from the fair another meaning/purpose.

Missions: Maybe try to relate characters that already exist to those feelings/phrases.

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Feedback from Fabiane

Medals: I like the idea of turning yourself into a character or a certain age to figure out what they doodle.

Missions: I think It lacked planning, because I don't think the drawings had to be all done in one day and lacked research also (at least I didn't see it on the video). Maybe show show sketches or ask people that are that age to show them their drawings and doodles.

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Feedback from Juliana
Medals: You clearly into the new context studies, using differents perspectives and human viewpoint. As a redo projects, i believe that you could experiment a other way of representation, as you have worked with animals security. I consider that, your worry and interesting with empowerment works.

Mission: I agree with Dani of you seems to be more engaged with the hippie's perspective. In my way of view, of this can be a  empowerment project, you should have done equal production for both. But i understand that maybe this could happen because of time. I believe that if you had done just two perspectives but be more detailed,  could be a better outcome.

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Medals: I saw you working really hard for this project. Cutting letter by letter takes time so I can see you'd put a lot of effort. It's nice you took time to consider each picture to really give them a new meaning and recreate a story for them. I liked how you connected the pictures with a red string because it really emphasizes the connection they have with each other. Good choice!

Missions: Try to show a bit more about your process and also get closer to your outcome. I was really interested in seeing it closely but I just couldn't...

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Medals: You totally went out of your comfort zone without leaving your style behind. This is difficult to achieve because when people want to do something really different, they do things it looks like it's not even by them. You experimented working with black and white that you're not "used" to and took the opportunity to go beyond and use photography as the main technique.

Mission: I would've shown who inspired you for this project so we could really see what you were aiming for.

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Medals: You've put yourself into people's perspectives which is very important, specially when you're, for example, doing a project that you want to connect to people. For this, you really need to study how people react to different things.

Mission: Maybe I'm wrong, but I feel like you felt much more connected to the "hippie's perspective". What if you had chosen only the hippie's perspectives and drawn different scenarios from your everyday life (bus stop, ebac, a friend's house, a restaurant), each one in a hippie's perspective?
Also, next time I would've shown more research so maybe we could link your references to some other that might help you in the future.

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Medals: It's noticeable you like to experiment, specially collage. You did some research, which is good because it really guided you to your goal.

Mission: I'd consider doing even more research so you can see how other artists combine such different elements, textures, papers and techniques to come up with a collage. Also, You said that when you're working with magazines you don't have much control about the size. Have you thought about scanning the images and reprinting them in a bigger size?

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Medals: The way you have made the interview with the students about what they prefer for buy, show how you carry about the audience, what’s importante for have a good zine . The experiment you have made with paper became a great idea.

Missions: I don’t know if you did but maybe experiment another types of paper, and play with the character scale. For experiment and have more resarch

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Feedback from Juliana

Medals: This projects is about taking new experiences and its clear that you took this for yourself. The best part of your video, is that is very explain your creative process, putting your hits and mistakes. Its seems that this week was very successful for your new ideas genaration.

Medals: Maybe if you did more research before starting the practice, didnt happen this hits with the image, you could went to the library or even online sites that explain this  techniques.

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Feedback from Juliana

Medals: This project i see that you really try to go further in your new perspective and tecniques experience. Its possible to see that you did research and thought to explore a new visual elements.

Missions: I want to know what exactly you mean when say " not having a nice style" or about doesn't have control with collage. What mean have a nice style?.
Also, maybe try to work with differents and abstracts shapes in your viewpoint.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Giving a new meaning to the project and getting into another level of deepness was really inspiring, I believe that those pictures have history and you were able to tell them.

Missions: You could explore more another ideas instead of sticking to one and just doing it, I miss the part of experimentation in your project.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Researching by yourself and trying to understand better how the software works and whats more apropriatted to use.

Missions: Go further on the green screen thing, i think that would be really nice if you could insert yourself into the little boat. And you could try to align the frames by making only the sea movement.

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: The material research and idea development is really complete, besides that, i think you kind of mixed the 2d in 3d with the zine, showing that you learned from the other projects.

Missions: I missed a research part on the sketchbook, i would like to see where this inspiration came from.

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Medals: You researched a lot about college and used these information to try new collage techniques. I reckon the most successful technique was the digital college because it is seems very real, almost like a dream, and this could be a way to understand the end of the world.

Missions: You said on your video that collage using magazines wouldn't work out because you can't control the size of the objects, but maybe you could do a more abstract approach, or even use the magazine to draw what you want and then cut it and make a composition.

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Feedback from Fabiane

Medals: I really like your results because I didn't think those pics were possible to be done without Photoshop. I like the different ways you experimented and how you explained each and every picture even the ones that didn't come out so good.

Missions: Maybe experiment this in and outdoor space at night. The pics are so good and I think the background could be more interesting.

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Feedback from Fabiane

Medals: You have shown a lot of research and experimenting. I like how you used different techniques and looked for other solutions.

Missions: I don't quite understand the idea behind the project. I think you could have explained a little better the idea of having a cat on a waterfall (I couldn't see that well, so I'm not so sure what it was...

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Feedback from Raissa

Medals: Exploringa different way besides the use of light in the long exposure photos was a really creative thing to try, i believe that you have a big knowlodge on photography and should go further on this.

Missions: You could try with natural light instead of flash to see how it works

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Feedback from Michael

Medals: This project explores a complex problem in how to visualise information that has scale and is abstract. You use an interesting process to do this which explores ideas around labour and human ability to record time passing. I think the most successful outcome is the drawing on glass as this medium enhances the viewers focus on the mark making.

Missions: Explore other visual language to record time or members of a community. What about using 3D objects or sculptures? The larger the sculpture the larger the amount? The heavier the materials the larger the amount? Try at least 3 different materials.

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