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To sustain one's happiness, the existence of money is crucial.

I sort of agree with this opinion.

First reason for my opinion: With money, you can provide one with shelter and food, which can lead them through a basic healthy life.

Second reason for my opinion: Even if the life of one is threatened with factors that makes them to be unbalanced like bad health, you can't make it balance once more without the help of money

Summary:

I agree that money is one of the most important factor in one's life in this modern day because it can provide them with shelter, food, the basic crucial things of their lives and even health in some of the cases that in need of it.

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Introduction: money is one of the most important factors, happiness needs money. I agree that agruments -> my life don't have money, it's very difficult for physical or mental life.

Body 1: People need money to pay for their life, families and entertainments.

Buy for clothes, laptops, furniture in family,....

Pay for bills, medicine, tuition,...

travel around the world.

Body 2: Money is an ultimate purpose of life

Take the rest

Enjoy the life easily

Take care yourself.

eg: Amercians save moneys to worry about their life when they are old.

Body 3: Making me confident and comfortable

Belive in ability of myself

live in a luxurious place

Everyone respect me

=> This is a type of happiness.

Conclusion: Money is a important things and indispensable in our lives. I belive that money is the source of happiness.

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Intro:

Paraphrase the statement

Both Disagree & Agree

Body:

1. Disagree: Money is not enough to impact on happiness. It's just one of the most important in our life -> not in person's happiness.

Use Maslow matrix to analyze the levels of demands -> prove to the argument that people cannot feel happy when they just have money or much money

2. Agree: Cannot self-control the demands -> lack of money can make people unhappy

Lead to peer pressure, depression, or some mental issues

People cannot level-up their awareness of real happiness when they don't overcome the low level of needs (physical level)

Sum up

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Intro: Some people believe that money is one of the most crucial elements in an individual's happiness. I completely agree with this theory.

1. We need money to maintain our daily life: food, health care, clothes, entertainment, education, ... I use it to pay my receipts. Without money, people will feel difficulty in solving the problems that happen in life.

2. Every culture has a certain difference in their money earning and using.

-In Western countries, they intend to earn and save money first, then they spend it.

-In Eastern countries, they frequently spend money first.

The rich and the poor has differences in using money for their health: physical or mental health.

In conclusion, I think that money has a definite role in our life.

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Intro: Money: one of the most important reasons make a person happy

1. Necessities for life

-food: Eating is happiness for many people, helping to relieve stress

-accommodation: A house is always a home --feel the happiness, love, and inseparability

2. Health issue

-necessary at all ages

- cannot be happy if you are constantly sick

-money improves and protects health

-eg: sick people if they don't have enough money for treatment

=> The importance of money in human's happiness

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Intro:

The correlation of money and happiness is a universal interest nowaday. Some people claim that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. In my view, Iam both agree and dissagre with this statement.

Paragragh 1:

I believe money is essential to maintain our life better which is the reason to make us happy. For instance, poor people need money to support basic needs such as: food, clothes, shelter. In addition, wealthy people aslo use money to entertament, or to hepl their mental health.

Paragragh 2:

But in the contrary, I would suggest money is one of the most reason cause stressful in a person's life.

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agree with this opinion

1) money can improve quality of life: traveling, entertainment can boost energy, contribute to happiness

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2) money can open opportunities for growth such as education, training which can help people to have a better job in the future.

ex: according to a recent survey from oxford university, people who have good degrees can get a job with high salary than others

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My opinion: This opinion is absolutely true to my mind.

P1: First reason: Buying necessaries

example: student and parent's point of view

P2: Second reason: Improving our life

example: - White-collar workers in urban area need money for having trips to get out of daily stress

- Blue-collar workers in industrial parks need money for treating their occupational disease

Conclusion: In short, i agree that money is one of the most essential things in our life / that money plays an important role in our life.

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Introduction:

My opinion: In our life, people usually think that money is essential to their enjoyment.

Paragraph 1:

+First reason for my opinion:

It can be seen, that money is an important part of our lives, it gives us a way to purchase a variety of things that we need.

In contrast, even though money will give us everything, it cannot bring us health or happiness.

Summary:

Money certainly is a necessary part of life, but it is not everything.

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Intro: It is believed that money is one of the crucial factors that brings happiness. However, I think people can find their happiness without the need to have much money.

Body: Many other reasons can make one happy

Have family members who will not judge an individual and conversely, support all the new beginnings in their lives.

Allocate time for their leisure activities since it gives a better sense of self-development and adds more moments to cherish in their lives.

Conclusion: I believe that people can be happy without much money. If more people try to find other reasons for happiness than having a lot of money, the world will be a better place to live in.

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Most of the students in the survey studied state education. In detail, the percentage of students in public schools was 90%. On the other hand, the number of private schools accounted for 10% in total. Although private schools were not the option that students wanted to study in, the number of these schools still accounted for three-fourths.

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There was a larger number of students who studied in public schools than in private schools. Looking at 90% of pupils went to public schools, compared to 10% of those in private schools. In contrast, the difference between the number of private schools and public schools was lower. There were 75% of public schools and only 25% of private schools. All in all, private schools took up a quarter of the number of schools in a certain area.

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A large number of students studying through the survey were in state education. In fact, the figure for participating in public schools was nine out of ten, while the students in a private school accounted for only 10% compared to that of public schools. Nevertheless, there was a small gap between the amount of state and private schools. The number of public schools was about 75% and three times higher than that of private schools, but private schools accounted for a quarter of the number of schools in the area.

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The charts show almost all of the students chose to learn at state schools. Only 10 percent of pupils went to private education, while nine out of tenth teenagers attended state schools. But it is easy to see that the gap between the number of private and public education areas was smaller than the difference in total students in both types of schools. Especially, the number of state schools accounted for 75% and just 25% for several private schools. All in all, state education places were three times more than private ones.

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The data were taken in a survey of the students attending the state education. As it showed, one-tenth of the students were in private schools, the rest were in public schools, which was 90% of the students. Although the ratio of students in private schools per student in public schools was one-ninth, the ratio of private schools per public school was one-third, which meant that 25% of the schools were private schools and 75% of them were public schools. All in all, there was a tendency in choosing public schools for the students.

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The survey compared the number of students between public and private schools, which shows that almost all students tended to choose a state education. The percentage of public school students was 9 times that private ones. Besides, the difference is getting smaller and smaller, while public school students accounted for three-fourth private school students account for 25%.

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Generally, most students chose to learn in public schools. The percentage of students pursuing their studies in state schools was dominant, with 90%, in fact, ninth as much as what private schools had. However, the difference between the number of state schools and public schools was slightly smaller. The number of public schools was 75%, whilst private schools took the rest, just 3 times bigger.

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The number of students studying in public schools was higher than in private ones. Nine in ten students applied for public school, in contrast to only one in ten students in a private school. Whereas, the difference between private and public schools was that private schools were much smaller than public. The number of public schools was three times higher than that of private schools, at 75% for public schools and 25% for private schools.

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In general, the number of students attending a state school was higher than that of private schools. In fact, only 10% of the students in a private school, meanwhile, the number of students in a public school was 90%. Therefore, there was a significant gap between the number of private and state schools. The number of state schools was three times higher than that of private schools, at 75% and 25%, respectively. All in all, public education took the vast majority of students in the area.

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The survey compared the number of students in private and public schools. This shows public schools were dominant over private schoosl. The survey shows that 90% of students were in state education, meanwhile, this amount just took third quarter of the number school in total. Besides, the number of private schools was 25% of the total schools but only 10% in total number of student, that means that the private school have higher requirement in entry qualification.

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the vast majority of children in the survey were in state education. In fact, the proportion of students who attended a state school was 90%, which was 9 times higher than those of private schools. However, the difference between the percentage of private and public schools was smaller. 3 out of 4 schools were state schools, compared to 25% of state education. private schools accounted for a quarter of the number of schools in the area

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In general, most students were inclined to choose public educational systems. In fact, the number of students attending state schools was nine times as much as that of private schools. That can be seen as the reason why state schools outnumbered private schools. Otherwises, this figure had little change in the gap between these two education organizations. The state schools number was three times higher than that of private ones, which were 75% and 25% respectively.

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Both video games and other hobbies have certain benefits. They are always a necessary form of entertainment for not only children but also adults. Moreover, enhancing people's creativity and imagination is attractive to any player who is eager to learn new things. This can be useful for their career in the future, as well as offering you a relaxing hobby.

There are a lot of reasons for choosing video games or other better hobbies. Playing video games can lead to laziness and some health problems such as eyesores, obesity, and backache, etc.. Nevertheless, playing sports helps you stay fit and be stronger. In addition, you probably play video games alone at home, but in sports, you can interact and compete in teams with each other in person. Another contrasting point is that there may be a large number of violent scenes in some video games, that children can imitate and apply negatively to real life. In opposition to that, outdoor activities such as running or skipping rope are still nonviolent choices for children.

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There have been arguments about video games being a waste of time, and people should spend their time and money on better hobbies. However, video games have both benefits along with their drawbacks. One of the advantages is helping us develop skills and brain function.

but at the same time bad things about that is when we play too much time we sit too much, your muscels reduce so that will be bad for your heath. That's why we need balance and go workout like gym, swim,....

Also play video game all day may be lonely but with conecting people online all over the world that seem like not much of a problem.

Compare to other hobbies seem like olmost the same things, All about relax, having fun and productive

In my opinion other hobbies and video games both are useful but for me music is better choice if i have to chose because i like music

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For the first reason, video games pick up a new skill for users which provide them with problem solving skills to find out quickly a way playing games better. However, solving problems in sport games will be expanded for your social experiences such as communication, discussion or cooperation of another people.

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Another reason is the amount of people playing video games that it make them addicted and lazy to exercise. So this affect human health and work or study seriously. Playing sports games helps people relax and release your stress rather than playing video games. They improve your physical and mental health because they don't need excessive brain activity especially good supporting for good work or study after playing sports.

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It can be seen that playing video games is considered a form of intelligent entertainment. It is not necessarily a bad thing because it can help children be creative and responsive. Video games also contribute to relieving stress and regaining energy after a long period of studying. However, we need to be careful not to become addicted to electronics and play reasonably to avoid bad consequences that lead to children becoming more and more lazy.

Other sports are also considered an important part. Playing sports makes children healthy and strong. Not only that, it is also a good thing to prevent children from becoming too addicted to electronics. Although sports help a lot, it is not the best way to keep children healthy. Therefore, there needs to be a balance between electronics and sports to help children develop best.

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Firstly, one of the main reasons to pursue a hobby is entertainment. Both video games and outdoor sports are fun and can help people reduce stress after a long day. Video games with attractive graphics and good storyline bases can help pp escape their boring or stressful life. Meanwhile, some studies have shown that playing outdoor sports such as tennis, basketball, and badminton might release bad energy inside our bodies.

Secondly, having a hobby is beneficial for personal development. Video games and outdoor sports are great for developing quick reactions. Playing video games could improve our tactical skills and also they help us practice how to deal with losses in games so we would go through disappointment in real life better. On the other hand, outdoor sports could help us learn better work as a team and build sportsmanship.

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For the benefit brought to our health, outdoor activites sometimes have more advantages. Video games, in case of having good teammates, are only able to help us feels better but simultaneously bring some physical issues. On the contrary, we can both stay in fit and get out of stress after playing sports. Nevertheless, if you live in a region which has air contamination, workouts can also be a risk, none of the two habits is better.

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As concluded from the data, camping reached a peak at 30 percent and then fell steadily to under 30 percent in 2007. On the other hand, cycling rose gradually from 27 percent to 27 percent over ten years. In particular, the only activity with a stable percentage of people involved was horse-riding with 6% through the years.

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Throughout the decade 1997 to 2007, horse riding remained to be the steadiest among the three having percentage of participants in the activity although it was the lowest amongst the three. Camping experienced a peak in the year 2001 at around 32% then decreased to nearly 30% in the year 2007. Compared to that, cycling went through a steady decrease from nearly 22% in 1997, to 25% in 2001 and 30% in 2007 in the end.

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Camping and cycling were two less popular activities respectively. The proportion of people took part in both activities at 25% in 1997 and then increased slightly around 30% in 2007. Howerver, camping saw an rise in a large of campers over 30% in 2001 before falling, whereas the percentage of cyclist rose steadily during the period before increasing. Beside that horse riding stayed the same from 1997 to 2007 without going up or decreasing.

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the proportion of people who interested in horse riding stayed the same at under 10 percent between 1997 and 2007. there was a 8 percent increase in those who took part in cycling from 1997 to 2007, whereas, the number of those enjoyed going camping reached at more than 30 percent before falling slightly to 27 percent

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We can see from the data that horse riding was the most unpopular activities outdoor for over 10 years remaining constantly at nearly 10 precent. The second and third least popular activities were camping and cycling. Although people spent the same interest in the two activites in 1997, the percentage of campers reached a peak at 30 precent in 2007, meanwhile that of cyclist increased slowly. However, the percentage of campers decreased in 2007, while that of cyclist stay the same after 6 years.

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Both percentage of camping and percentage of cycling had gone up slightly between 1997 and 2001 before changed differently after 2001. Those numbers had started to go up from about 22% in 1997 to more than 25% in 2001 with camping's and slightly higher with cycling's. Then, Australian still went cycyling more until 2007, but less people  went camping. On the other hand, the propotion of people going horse riding was very stable, standed in approximately 8% over the time period

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Unemployment is a critical economic issue that everyone is concerning today as it affects individuals, families, and societies. In many countries, young people have some difficulties in getting work. This leads to a lot of consequences for the economy of any country. This essay will discuss the causes of this and how it currently affects our society.

P1: Causes: economic crisis (not many jobs, layoff matter, minimize company, decline in need of white-collar jobs, example)

P2: Effects: reduction in life quality reduction (anxiety, depression, crime rate increase)

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Getting a job has always been a matter of interest for everyone. However, the rate of young unemployment is increasing dramatically nowadays. With whole generations struggling to get their first job, there will be a huge problem in the future. This essay will argue that this is because of an economic crisis and suggest what we should be concerned about.

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Introduction:

A serious problem and deserves attention to young people for my country through history is unemployment. This is lead to the large number of youth who lacks of work in some countries. Due to the difficulty in finding jobs higher, there are many problems to create bad effects in the future. This essay will look at many causes about national developments and overpopulation, and even the impact on individuals and on the economy as a whole.

Body 1: Causes

1. National developments:

- The technology is developed and improved => achieve high quality in some industries => a decline youth workers. Eg: morden facilities, robots.

2. Overpopulation:

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In modern society, finding a job has been known as a complicated problem for young people in many countries. It is evident that unemployment among young adults is increasing more and more. People are finding it difficult to get jobs, leading to a lot of serious difficulties in the future. This essay will focus on the reasons behind this matter and its impact on young adults and on the economy as a whole.

(Introduction)

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Unemployment is one of the most serious problems that many countries now have to deal with. It has become a struggle to find jobs, especially for young people. This essay will discuss the factors causing this issue and the impacts that it can have on our lives.

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Unemployment has been one of the most serious problems in our history. It cannot be denied that such a large number of youngsters lacked employment during the Fourth Industrial Revolution, which will eventually lead to problems in the future. This essay will look at the causes of this and its impact on young people in the future.

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Paragragh 1: Cause:

Economic crisis -> Workforce reduction + Company bankrupt

Result: Dificult to get job for fresh graduates

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Paragragh 2: Effect:

Mental issues: e.g. Anxiety + Depression + Stress--> Serious illness: Anorexia --> Lower quality of life

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P1: causes

-Financial crisis caused by COVID-19 pandemic => Employers tend to minimize their workforces.

-The improvement of automatic technologies is more rapid than ever => low-skilled manual workers become redundant.

P2: effects

-More depressed young people

-Unbalanced-grown economy