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Milestone #5 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation

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Milestone #5 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation

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• Identify gaps in the story and Retake photographs

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1. definitely better than the previous draft (more angles and variation)

2. the sweat photo is not effective, need to retake

3. lunch time photo does not align with theme, audience may not understand what i want to express

4. can add a photo with no/less chicken to show transition from long queues to closing of stall

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Milestone #4 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation

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Milestone #4 Consultation + Reflection and Self-evaluation

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• Identify gaps in the story and Retake photographs
• Look for 1-2 classmates to give you feedback. After you have done so, write
down the feedback in your design journal and indicate the name of your
classmate(s) who provided the feedback

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1. Pictures for slide 3-6 are too repetitive

2. No emotions in this visual essay, right now seems like I'm just telling the audience step 1/2/3

3. More close up shots (zoom in into sweat / hands)

4. Opening of the visual essay can be father outside the coffee shop (try to make it darker because right now its very bright) -> did not seem like its early in the morning

5. For picture 9 (aka the climax) try to be IN the crowd -> remove all the negative spaces, be in the same level as the customers in the picture

6. Try watch food documentaries and see how people frame their shots

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• Title of your project
• Summary:- a one-paragraph summary of the story concept/theme of your photo
series
(Fictional/ Non-fictional)
• Mood board

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a one paragraph about my theme of my photo series 

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a one paragraph about my theme of my photo series 

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My photo series is about the life of my father, who is working in the Food and Beverage (F&B) industry in Singapore. He started his own business in Yishun 8 years ago, wanting to achieve more than what he had at that point of time. As I know that it takes a lot of hard work and effort to be able to build his own business all by himself, I wanted to capture them through this assignment. Knowing that working in a F&B industry is one of the most tiring work one could ask for, I admire how he pull through every single day including the weekends with only 1 day break every 2 weeks.

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• Achieve Aesthetics & Visual Design by applying camera framing and
Composition
• Filter through your photographs identify 9 or12 photographs for your Story Draft

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all images from pinterest

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09/05/2024

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link to videos (because file too big for padlet) 

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Milestone #1: Story Ideation part 1- Identify and research your subject matter.

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Milestone #1: Story Ideation part 1- Identify and research your subject matter.

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• Document all findings and observation (include a lot of photographs, video, audio
recording, sketches, objects....)
• Please refer to the Requirements stated in Page 1 for Fiction and non-fiction story

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non-fiction

life working as hawker in Singapore (chosen)

my comfort, my home

fiction

what if I wake up one day and there is no more internet?

what if I can't remember the things i did yesterday

what if there's no tomorrow??