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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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i will ad detalis

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I will most likely try out giving more detail in my writing. Like how the writer gave details like " her curly brown hair" and " I swan in big wide strokes".

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I will give more diloge to my writing so they see want I am trying to sayin my writing

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I will try to give more detail like how she said her eyes were big as oranges

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I will use more detalis

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I will use my own words.

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I will try to be more discriptive when writing to give the reader a picture in there head

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I will most likely put words that are interesting

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i will give more details and describing words

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paying more attention

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I will add more details just like how she was talking about the " thin water" and how the " snake slithered" near them!

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I will most likely add more exsperssion and emotion

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i would ad BOLD letters

yeahhhhh

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I will ad detalis

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I will most likely try to detail and use my own words instead. i will also try to use my best grammar instead of leaving the red lines at the bottom of the word.

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I will use my own writing and spell the best I can

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Add more details and ajectives so they can know what they are doing.

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I thought that using very descriptive words would be very nice to make my writing better and more detailed!

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I will use descriptive words to show how I feel

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i used descriptive words to show how they feel.

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I will use descriptive words + sayings to let the reader have a better image on what's going on in the story.

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I will try to spell and be more descriptive in my texts. :)

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Using more unique words than basic words like jumped or cold and stuff like that

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i used descriptive words to show how they feel or do

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I will do my best to give detail to my writing and make my writing more exciting.

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I will end up adding details to get people into my book and sharing it because of how good it is. I will also be adding things like ¨She held the poster up as strong as she could, as the wind got stronger.¨

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I will most likely add more feeling to my writing

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I will use my best grammer and detail

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I will most likely try and give more details and be more descriptive in my writing like using emotions and punctuations.

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I will try and show more detail to my text when I'm writing and use more descriptive words and use more emotion while I'm working and show more events and make my text more eventful I will also add more of my punctuation. :)

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I will add detales and punctuation

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I will add details and use my own words

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i will do good

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I will use more detail in my writing and make to where they know what I am try to say in my writing

JO IS BETTER THEN YOU

BYE MR. BRADLEY

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using a lot more parentheys and using discribive words

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I will use more detail and better punctuation in my writing so people actually know what im talking about.

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The strategy I will try to use is to use more descriptive words to show how the person is feeling or doing

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use descriptive words so they know what i'm talking about and better spelling. have a good day :)

RHETT can dunk on me

from

mr.bradley

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the strategy i will most likely try to use in my own writing the right punctuation. i think it helps tell the story better.

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The strategy I would most like to use is Capital letters because if i do all capital letters, it would be like the person that is talking is yelling.

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The strategy I will try to use in my writing is more exclamations and adjectives to make it more informative.

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the strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorperating idioms to show I am I good writer.

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I will be using methphores in my writing more because it added more like tension to the writing.

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the strategy I will use is to use my own writing to see if i get good at writing .

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I will use adjectives to describe things

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I will try to be more descriptive so the listener knows what im talking about.also ill work on my spelling and punctuation.

Thank You!!

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I will use strategies such as describing certain feelings and emotions as well as certain actions

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Start using good puncuation, and write for a while.

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I will describe my writing so the person reading can understand what I'm saying

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I will add details to my writing and text in informations <3

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I will use more descriptive words and use dialogue whenever I can or it is needed. I will try to make my feelings easier for the readers, and I will work on correct punctuation.

bye :]

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She chose a fun and interesting topic with a lot of details and punctuation.

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I will use capitals and spell words properly

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I would use descriptive words in my writed

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The author uses strong verbs like “cringe” to help the reader understand how the person is feeling and to help the reader visualize what is happening.

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it gives us perspective

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I will most likely try using more disciptive words in my writing like the text.

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I will look through the story find what I like most comment or put a Sticky note (Digital) and put a reason why I picked that word

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I will add more detalis

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I will write better with neater and better words

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the strategy I will most likely use is descriptive words so it helps reader know what I'm talking about

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The writer used all capital letters and an exclamation point to show that the character was yelling.

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i will try to use more detail and explian things better.

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The writer used all capital letters to show that someone was yelling.

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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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the strategy i would most like to use is capital letters and punctuations so it can guide me through.

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i will use big letters to show screaming

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i will use more details to make the person know what im writing.

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The strategy I will most likely try to use in my own writing is incorporating dialogue (what a person is saying) to show how the person is feeling, rather then just telling.

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I will use more detail.

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I will most likley use more detailed wording for better understanding

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you are the best teacher ever and everyday when I walk into this school I am whiting to see you bye mr. Bradley

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i can add deatails and let the reader know the emotions that i fell when i mtell the storie

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i will add more feeling more deltiles

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I found detail in the mentor text and that is something I want to try out, it helps paint the picture in your mind.

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A strategy I found and would use is adding specific details to paint a mental image.

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add descriptive word so the reader can understand what is going on in the story.

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i will try to spell more and be more dicriive