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I liked it when you added transitional phrases to the beginning of your body paragraphs. I think this helped your essay flow smoother. Great job Alexis! Keep up the great work!

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Miroslava Enciso Oseguera1.docx

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Document13.docx

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Literary Essay-Addison Rosell.docx

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Addie! I loved how you made the reader sink into the characters; the quotes and stories made me feel like I was inside the characters. -Emily

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lily i love how u hooked the readers/me on ur intro and i think it was very detailed  -mia

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Isabella, I loved how you showed what happened; nearly exactly how it happened in the story but with your own words! -Emily

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reilly i rely liked how u made ur suported ur frist reason -mia

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I like your thesis statement and reasons, very carefully thought. Good work!

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Jacob, I liked how you used transitionaly correct phrases when moving onto different reasons/examples. -Emily

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i like ur claim and ur suporting reasons -mia

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Leah, I think the way that you wrote your story really hooked readers like me! keep up the good work! -Emily

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Riley, I loved the way you used your talents and hooked the readers with a question! Most people did a normal hook! -Emily
"Keep going!"

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