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Write the headline (CHOOSE ONE):

Tommy, the Dog: A Hero!

New Shooping Mall Opened Yesterday.

Forgotten Brother Appears!

Man Killed in Accident

Little Boy Saw Woman Steal.

Strange Visit!

Use past tenses - simple past and past continuous
include quotes ( things someone said)
Write at least 2 paragraphs

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This is a story about me, that my dog saved my life. My dog's breed is Golden. His name is Tommy.

One day me and my family decided to go to the forest. We live in Florida,and we want to go to a park to have a picnic with the family. We are with all family, even the dog Tommy.

We walked so much in the park that we ended up getting lost inside it. After a long time, we ended up in a forest, but at that time the sky was already getting dark, it was almost raining, but it wasn't going to be a simple rain, it was going to be a storm, but we were still looking for a way out.

After 30 minutes of searching we found a covered place and ran there before the rain started.After a while the rain started and as we were protected we weren't worried.

We decided to have our picnic in the covered place, when  we forgot an entire backpack full of food and cell phones and many other things, so I decided to get this backpack, but this time it was raining so much, a storm was happening.

So I ran to get this backpack after a while of searching, I finally  found it. I got the backpack  and went back to the shelter. suddenly when I would be struck by lightning Tommy saved my life, he gave me a push and saved me.

This was so scary!!!

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Yesterday one person was found and nobody know who he is. He is 27 years old, is a man and have a brother, but his brother forgot him and his parents already died, so he don't had where to live and work.

Luckly today he found his brother, he is so happy to find his brother, he said "I'm so happy to find you, you are the best brother".

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Last week a catastrophe happened, a child was almost run over! But thank God she wasn't seriously injured. She was saved by a dog named Tommy, her owner Grace was surprised because Tommy had run away from home.
- Tommy ran away from home I'm a little sad but if he saved someone's life he's forgiven!

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New shopping mall opened yesterday! -Marina

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New shopping mall opened yesterday! -Marina

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A new shopping mall just opened yesterday, on September 17th, 2018 at Hawkins. People were very happy and they loved this new shopping mall.  The reason it was built is  just because some people were complaining with the city Mayor because there was no entertainment in the city. Then, someone suggested to the Mayor to build a Mall, so he saved some money and started this project. It took 4 months to finish this building.
Let's hear what people have to say; “This shopping mall is amazing! I loved it so much! There are a lot of stores that I like in there and I had some fun shopping with my friends”- Vanessa A.
“I think this mall is sooo boring! It needs an arcade or something for kids and teens to play”- Ruby S.

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New Shopping Mall Opened Yesterday - Matheus

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New Shopping Mall Opened Yesterday - Matheus

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Yesterday (28/8/2023) the largest shopping mall in the world was opened in the city of Sao Paulo.

It took 7 yearsof construction and a lot of work plus 1 bilion dolars used for the project.

The local population is very happy, as this man said:

-- I realy liked the construction of the mall, now I can buy much faster and cheaper.

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One day, a blind woman was walking in the street, but a car in 150 per hour is coming to hit her, but a boy's dog saw an ran a lot to save the blind woman.

At that moment, everything seemed to be in slow motion, the dog saving the blind woman, the car coming towards her.

In the final, the dog was broke one back leg, but, he saved the woman blind.

Since that day, this dog has been recognized as the best dog the city has ever seen.

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New shopping mall opened yesterday                   (Luisa)

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New shopping mall opened yesterday                   (Luisa)

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      It opened on November 7th in the Itaquera neighborhood, yesterday the mall was packed with 33,000 people, it has 260 stores.
     The creator was Ancar Ivanhoe, he created the shopping mall to influence the growth of commerce in the region
     In an interview a girl said that she loved it but still needed to figure out a few things

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This month, Tommy, a dog saved a man when started a thunderstorm. During the thunderstorm, a lightning struck a tree and the tree fell down in the street when a man was driving his car.

The man was very hurt and he can´t ask help, he was looking around when he see a dog, a dog barked and two peoples in the local heard, one of this peoples say: Look, have a man in the car!

The peoples helped the man and he say: Thank you, I can´t do anything in the moment. In the end, everything was ok, the man was good and the dog was considered a hero.

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Last week, a old woman was crossing the street and a car came in her direction when a dog jumped towards her and saved. The old woman said "I saw this dog on the streets every day and I always fed it, I think he did it as a form of gratitude"

The people named the dog as Tommy and the old woman adopted Tommy.

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Yesterday (27), a 40-year-old man named John died in a car accident. He was driving to a meeting in a heavy storm when a speeding truck crashed into his car, causing his tragic death. Slippery road conditions contributed to the accident. John leaves behind a wife and two children.

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LITTLE BOY SAW WOMAN STEAL - Isabella Ortona

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LITTLE BOY SAW WOMAN STEAL - Isabella Ortona

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A big robbery happened in New York. It was a big case that could never have been solved! But a great hero saved the day!

An expensive necklace was stolen that afternoon, but no one noticed.

And this “crime boss” was a woman. At the time of the crime, a little boy saw the woman steal and joked with her mother: “I’m going to be a superhero, mom.” The mother didn't understand at the time, but the son recorded everything.

When the police came to question the mother, her son showed the video and said "Look mom, I was a superhero"

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The speed of cars still causing problems around the world. On October 15th, 2023, a man died because he was going 320mph on a highway that could only go 120mph.

Only he was injured, however, the car destroyed the toll booth, meaning the cars had to go in the opposite direction back to the city they came from.

The entire road was closed. His family said: "When he left home he was strange and didn't tell us what he was going to do".

Upon learning of the event, the family was outraged and everyone immediately began to cry. The car and toll booth caught fire and were completely destroyed.

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New shopping mall opened yesterday-Felipe

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New shopping mall opened yesterday-Felipe

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Yesterday opened a new shopping mall in São Paulo.

After 6 years of construction, people were very happy with the result, because the mall has many stores, a beautiful food court, a fantastic cinema and a magical theater

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Bob was a mixed-breed dog who lived in a peaceful neighborhood. He wasn't the prettiest or the most playful, but he had a big heart. One day, while strolling in the park, Bob saw a boy in trouble. The boy had fallen into a lake and was struggling to swim.

Without hesitation, Bob jumped into the water and swam to the boy, grabbing him with his teeth and pulling him to the shore. The boy coughed and cried, but he was safe. People in the park applauded Bob, and he became a local hero.

From that day on, Bob was known as "Bob the Hero," and he continued to protect and help people in his community. Even though he never won a "Dog of the Year" award, he had something much more valuable: the respect and love of everyone he had helped to save.