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Text 1. The orientation can be seen in 1st paragraph. Where the writer explains their whole experience concisely. The events can be seen in 2nd until 12th paragraph. She has explained and shared her experiences in detail there. Then, for the reorientation can be seen in last paragraph. She gives us her marvelous feeling for her experiences as well. It has also been her conclusion for her experiences at that time. Time connectives: The first day, while, at night, the second day, first, after, then, although, the third day, the fourth day, as always, the fifth day.

Text 2. Emotional highlight:

1. The “all my Christmases at once” moment when discovering the article.

2. The mix of excitement and doubt on the road trip, leading to the “Wow!” reaction at arrival.

3. “I waited excitedly”

The dialog makes the story become engaging because it makes humor and persuade the readers to getting interest while reading the writer's story. It also show emotion from writer to readers

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My Holiday Recount

1. Orientation : When the writer start to tell her last year’s holiday vacation in 2019. She and her family went to their hometown in Ciamis

Events : when the holiday started from the first day until fifth day, with many experiences

Re-orientation : The writer told how her holiday so fun, when she visited her hometown with her family

2. 1) While : While she colored my draw, I also asked her to speak with the English language

2) At night : At night, we made suki-Yuki with tom yum gravy. It tasted so good. The recipe is easy, we just need tofu, crab sticks, some green vegetables, enoki mushroom, sausage, squid, shrimp, and the tom yum sauce and mixed them one by one, and this is it!

3) First day : The first day, I helped my auntie to keep on watching of my niece and nephew, yeah, I’m being a babysitter for a while.

4) Second day : The second day, it was a big day for us. we woke up very early because we’re going to have fun! we went to pangandaran those day.

5) After : After we ate, we played on the side of the beach and took some photos.

6) Then : Then we played some arcade named “sepeda goes”

2. Emotional Language :

I was SO excited

I waited excitedly

I think my children thought I had gone mad…

I was impressed

Dialogue :

1. Adds personality from the writer, it shows how people really speak and makes the story feel real

2. Creates humor, for example, when the kids said “Mum, I think we are lost,” it makes the reader imagine the moment

3. Shows emotions, or example, “ I was SO excited” helps the reader feel the excitement too

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1. The orientation is when the writer introduces themselves and tells about going to Ciamis for the holiday. The events are told day by day, from babysitting on the first day, going to Pangandaran on the second, resting on the third, babysitting again on the fourth, and having a boring fifth day. The reorientation is at the end when the writer reflects that the holiday was fun and unforgettable. The time connectives used are “last year’s holiday”, “on the 20th of December”, “the first day”, “at night”, “then”, “after”, and much more.

2. The emotional language highlights the writer’s excitement and enthusiasm, with expressions such as “all my Christmases had come at once” and “absolute awe” showing how much the experience meant. The dialogue also makes the story more engaging, as it captures her family’s different reactions during the trip and helps the reader feel more connected to the experience.

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1.Orientation

The orientation started from the first paragraph until the third paragraph where he explained that this is her last holiday and las visit to her hometown

Events

The events start form the fourth paragraph the she said the first day until the ten th paragraph where she said the fifth day

Reoriantion

The reorientation start after the paragraph that she said the fish day or we could see that the last paragraph is the reorientation

2.Last year – shows when the event happened.

On the first day

The second day

After

While

Then

After

The third day

Yesterday

On the fourth day

On the fifth day

TEXT 2

1.I was SO excited, I read the article to the kids and my husband (I ignored a few teenage eye rolls) and without hesitation my very supportive husband said “how far is it from here? You have to go there…you will love it!”.

2.by using the dialogue the writer can express more of here feeling in the text when she was on her holiday

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1. First Recount text shows the Orientation, Events, and Reorientation. It structured well. At the beginning part of the recount text it tells us about the writer agenda when it was New Year Holiday. The events is when the writer explained about what did she done while to holiday. She spent her time for bought some clothes, went to restourant with her family and she must took care of her nephew. The reorientation shows in the last paragraph in the text.

2. In the recount text it tells us about Mathema Gallery, she was amaze by that gallery. She tried to express her expression and tried to make us believe that it really amazing. The conversation shows how they amaze with the gallery so when the readers read it, it affect the them by make them feel more believe to the story.

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The orientation of first recount text is Last’s Year Holiday with big family. The event of this text is vacation in Ciamis and Pangandaran beach. For the reorientation is at the last paragraph. The writer told that her vacation with her family was very amusing and fun.

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The orientation of first recount text is Last’s Year Holiday with big family. The event of this text is vacation in Ciamis and Pangandaran beach. For the reorientation is at the last paragraph. The writer told that her vacation with her family was very amusing and fun.

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For the Text 2 some sentences using emotional language.

“Well… as you can imagine… it was like ALL my Christmases had come at once! This kind of expression shows the writers very exited, making readers feel enthusiastic and eager to share in the moment.

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Blog 1:

Orientation: We can see the orientation of the ‘blog’ at the first and second paragraph in the blog. And the orientation of the ‘story’ itself, we can see it from the third paragraph.

Hello! This is me in 2020! A new me in the new year, Happy New Year All!

Last year’s holiday, me and my family went to our hometown in Ciamis. We went there on the 20th of December by car. I had a great time and I did fun activities.

Events: We can see the events from the 4th until 12th paragraph in the story.

Event 1. The blogger needs to babysit her nephew at the first day.

Event 2. The blogger and her family went to the beach and having some fun there (second day).

Event 3. The blogger do nothing and fasting at the third day.

Event 4. The blogger babysits again her nephew at the fourth day.

Event 5. The blogger have nothing to do at the fifth day and use it for “me time”.

Reorientation:We can see the orientation at the 13th paragraph.

“Visit my hometown and holiday with a big family last year is very amusing for me. Although that was a boring day, I have do fun there! All the moments and experience on holiday last year was interesting. I would never forget it, I love them so much.”

Temporal Conjunction: First, then, all the while, at the x day, after, while, etc.

Blog 2:

We can see the emotional highlight from the blog, which are:

1. I heard someone genuinely say “Wow! This place looks cool mum!”🙌🏻

2. Well… as you can imagine… it was like ALL my Christmases had come at once!

4. I was SO excited, I read the article to the kids and my husband (I ignored a few teenage eye rolls) and without hesitation my very supportive husband said “how far is it from here? You have to go there…you will love it!”.

By using the dialog, it can make the blogger expresses her expression more freely instead of explaining it using words. And also, it can make the readers to be interested with the story that the blogger made.

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Text 1

the orientation start when the writer tell the holiday vacation in 2019, you can see in third paragraph.

the event is all the paragraph after orientation and before reorientation who has the time connect

The reorientation say her feel in the end experience, at the last paragraph

Time connect:

The first day, At night, The second day, The third day, the fourth say, the fifth day, then, after.

Text 2

I was SO excited

I waited excitedly and finally the day arrived!

I was obviously so excited

writer can share and looking up her emotional with her dialogue

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Text 1 = The orientation can be seen from 1st sentence. The writer gave an opening statement before she explain and tell all of her story. The main event are structured and can be seen from second paragraph until twelve paragraph. She is an indonesian people that having a holiday on her term break. She went to her home town which is ciamis. She is very happy to went back to her home town. She met all of her family including her niece and nephew. On her holiday she was being asked to watched her auntie son & daughter. She also taught them a few word such as counting a number, guessing the color of a ball, and even conversation in english. This encourage her nephew and niece before they entered their kindergarten. Beside that she also embrace her second semester of college year.

Text 2 : Emotional Highlight :

"it was like ALL my Christmases had come at once" at this point the writter express her emotion that she was already waiting for this oppoturnity.

"I HIGHLY recommend you pop in and if your school is local- it would be such a wonderful location for an excursion, particularly for Year ⅚ students."

This explain that the writter recommend the school near The Mathema Gallery to have a field trip to go there. The purposes are to encourage student learns math.

“Wow! This place looks cool mum!”

This dialog told us that her child was happy to see The Mathema Gallery and they were impressed with the environtment also the building strcuture.

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1. https://karinaffa.home.blog/2019/12/27/recount-text-last-holiday/

2. https://www.numeracyteachersacademy.com/blog/myholidayrecount

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Hello! This is me in 2020! A new me in the new year, Happy New Year All! 🥳I hope in this year we can do something better than yesterday.

Okay then, I'd like to tell you about my last year's holiday vacation in 2019 with my big family! Hope you like it!

Last year's holiday, me and my family went to our hometown in Ciamis. We went there on the 20th of December by car. I had a great time and I did fun activities.

The first day, I helped my auntie to keep on watching of my niece and nephew, yeah, I'm being a babysitter for a while. My niece is only two years old and her brother, my nephew is 7 months years old. My auntie asked me to draw some objects in the paper so that my niece will color it. I drew a princess on the paper and my niece put some color on it. While she colored my draw, I also asked her to speak with the English language, like counting the number, guess the color, and some simple conversation.

At night, we made suki-Yuki with tom yum gravy. It tasted so good. The recipe is easy, we just need tofu, crab sticks, some green vegetables, enoki mushroom, sausage, squid, shrimp, and the tom yum sauce and mixed them one by one, and this is it!

The second day, it was a big day for us. we woke up very early because we're going to have fun! we went to pangandaran those day. I will tell you about my holiday in pangandaran.

My family went to pangandaran beach. We visited someplace there and do some fun.

We went there by 3 cars, because we went there with the big family. My parents with my auntie and my grandma, my cousin with her husband and her daughter and son, and I join with my sister and my cousins who are the same age. We took about 2 hours from Ciamis to Pangandaran Beach. Along the way, we slept and woke and slept again until we arrived at our destination.

First, we're looking for a place to stay on the beach. My mom brought some food. There was fried chicken, rice, and some others food. For the drink, my dad bought some coconut milk. It was so delicious and refreshed.

After we ate, we played on the side of the beach and took some photos. All the while, the wind was rising, and it was good. The waves were crashing down on me, I could feel it in my feet. My niece bought some sand stuff, so we also made a things from the beach sand such as castle,crab, and the shells.

Then we played some arcade named "sepeda goes". We had to oar the four-wheeled cycle. I played with my sister and cousins. I didn't expect that it was very tiring. We tore sweat so much. But in the middle of the road, we visited a clothing store and bought some beach clothes. The clothes were comfy to wear, matched with the environment there.

After we played and bought some clothes, we ate in the seafood restaurant. I ordered fried squid while the others ordered shrimps, fish, and crabs. And the drink I ordered was orange juice.
We went home after that, and for me, that was a good moment because I could spend time with my family, although after that i felt so dizzy but I really enjoy those moment 🙂

my nephew

The third day was very tiring. I had to fast. although I still exhausted because of the vacation yesterday, I had to do it. yesterday was a long day, even my niece and my nephew had a fever. and others my family members had a headache and felt very weak for a whole day.
So, on the third day, I did nothing.

The fourth day, as always, I had to babysit my nephew and my niece. Teach them about something new or something that they will have when they enter kindergarten. And I also learn too, I was a little bit made an embrace for the second semester besides babysitting my cousins.

On the fifth day, I had nothing to do. so I just watched some videos on youtube, Instagram, chatting with my friend on the line app, and sleep. It was just a boring day, a very very boring day. But in the evening, I had continued my embrace.

Visit my hometown and holiday with a big family last year is very amusing for me. Although that was a boring day, I have do fun there! All the moments and experience on holiday last year was interesting. I would never forget it, I love them so much.

Hi, my name is Karina. I'm 16 years old and a student of SMAN 3 Bandung. I started this blog because of my teacher's assignments. In here, I'll write some of my tasks. Hope you enjoy it! View all posts by karina Fitria Alhaq

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