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Excellent job, Marce! Beautiful story! Your grandma is a true hero! Thanks for sharing her story!!!

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Such an amazing story, Ana!  You must be very proud of your mom! Congrats!!!   Remember: she was studying Maths at university

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How nice, Alma! He is such a good singer, I really like him!
Remeber:
- he uploaded videos ...
-  he is intelligent, he is generous

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Great job, Agustina! I didn´t know Min Yoongi, but we can learn a lot from him!
Be careful:
- his family consists of
- songs and sold them
-he solves his problems

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Wonderful story, Lourdes! Your mom sets a really good example for all of us!
Be careful:
- She was born in San Juan
- She is a brave person
- She started dating my dad (...) she was pregnant with me
- She is a very supportive person and a companion

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She was born on San Juan-Argentina on 19 on december 1971.

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Great, Rodrigo! Tevez is such a good soccer player! I admire him, too!
Why is Carlos Tévez your hero? What can we learn from him? Next time, include your personal views! And if you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Way to go!
Be careful:
- and now he is playing ...

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Nice job, Federico! A national hero! Well done! Next time if you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!
Remember:
- He keeps playing football..

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Very good, Alfredo! You chose a very interesting person!
Why is Ronaldo your hero? Next time try to include your own opinions! If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!
Be careful:
- he began to be recognized worldwide
- and with his national team the Eurocopa 2016

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What an inspirational hero! Excellent, Luciana! Thanks for sharing it!

Be careful:
- She is a strong person
- continue to strive
- She is important to me because ... and because I love her
- What is your mom doing in the picture?

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This is a great story, Valentina! Lily Collins is a great actress. Good job, and very nice photos!
Remember:
- his second wife
- .She also suffered eating disorders
-After this achievement, she won ...
- Why do you admire Lily Collins?

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What a really nice story, Abril! Your mom is definitely a role model!

Be careful:
- It She´s Very important to me because it she´s my mom
- She estudied to ...
- "what doesn´t kill you makes you stronger", it is one ...

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What a moving and lovely story about your brother, Juan Pablo! Congratulations!
Remember:
- He isn´t  a very pupular ...
- highschool in a very difficult conditions
- Currently, he is a father and ...

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How nice, Marti! Beautiful story, your grandma is an authentic hero!
Remember:
- the paint was awarded
- her husband´s death

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Such a wonderful story, Camila! I loved it! Your mom is absolutely an inspiring life!
Be careful:
- (...) her mom to work while her father was going to work as a policeman
- She studied to be a Maths teacher
- I admire my mom because she is a strong, generous and independent person

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How nice, Rosario! This is a very interesting story! Well done!
Be careful:
- she didn´t finished the career
- When she was a teenager, she said

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Excellent job, Victoria! You wrote very interesting facts about Shawn Mendes! Great!!!
Remember:
- a good person and an excellent singer
- became famous and many people

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Good job, Luca! Very interesting choice of a hero! Keep on working!!!
Next time, try to include your personal ideas and opinions!
Why is Hazard a hero for you? If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!
Be careful:
- in his first season he received ...
-  Real Madrid where he currently plays

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Nice story, Valentín! Steve Job is definitely an inspiring life in many aspects!
Why is he a hero for you? Why did you choose him? Next time, include your personal opinions
Be careful:
- He was an entrepeneur and businessman
- His life after Apple it was quiet

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Very good, Guillermina! Nice story!!!
Next time try to be more careful when you type so as to avoid making mistakes.
Be careful:
- in San Juan on April 23rd 1973
- She has two daughters
- her first daughter was born ...
- I admire her because she is a strong, intelligent ...
What is your mom doing in the picture you posted?

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Congratulations, Luciana! The choice of your hero was super original! I really liked it!
Remember:
- May Revolution
- the creator of the Argentinian flag

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Excellent job, Valentina! Your mom is a truly role model!!! Lovely story!
Remember:
- One of her achievements
- Befrore achieving it, she worked hard ...
- (...) with effort and that she trusts me (?)
- she achieves everything she resolves
- everyday teaches me to be a better person

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Wow!!! Such an amazing job, Rocío!!! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this story!

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Azucena Moral was born on San Juan-Argentina on July 27th 1972. When she was 24 years old She had her first daughter and with her husband they worked hard to support her baby. Her husband had to sell his weddi (1)

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This is a really nice poster, Martina! Louis is such a good singer, great job!!!
Remember:
- His full name is ...
- His mother died in a ...
- He also had a fourth sister
- In 2005, he had a small band with his school friends
- After a while, they replaced him by another vocalist...
- Nowadays, he keeps trying to ...

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Very good, Nara! I didn´t know Jonghyun, he was an inspirational person!
Be careful:
-  an ex-member
-  (...) make an achievement, but he was an important ...
- lived a happy life, but he had depression
- (...) and he never showed his emotional ...
- (...) but in 2019 they returned

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Great presentation, Guadalupe! But you copied many things from the Internet. What about your ideas? Next time, try to include your own words! If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Way to go!

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What an interesting story, Paloma! Very creative choice of you hero, congratulations!
Remember:
- (...) Unlu club, until he was summoned to the national team with only ...
- He with his team got through for the first time to the Olympic Games
- He is my hero because he sets goals and struggles to reach them

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Very nice job, Lucrecia! Cool poster!  However, you copied many things and included very few of your own ideas. Next time, try to include more of your words. If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!
Be careful:
- (...) fans in different parts of the worls, teaching them self love ...

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Kim Namjoon; Born on September 12, 1994 in Ilsan-gu, and better known by his stage name RM, he is a South Korean rapper, dancer, composer, producer and model. He studied at Global Cyber __University and in 2013 he

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Good job, Ignacio! Robert Downey Jr. is such a good actor, and he has a moving story, I didn´t know it!  But why is he an inspiring life for you? Why did you choose him? These are not your words. Next time, try to write your own story. If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!

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Great presentation, Luján! I didn´t know Amber J. Liu, she´s tought you many things!
Next time, try to include more of your own words! If you need to copy information from the web, you have to quote it. Keep on working!
Be careful:
- (...) trust me no matter what other people say