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a narrative take-away for me it would be  adding similes and metaphors.

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a narrative take-away for me it would be  adding similes and metaphors.

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in my narrative,I should keep on working on my seed making it in 2 slices of the watermelon.

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A narrative take-away for me is...

In narrative, I am still going to work on how to not say I a lot,I want to say myself. Another thing that I want to work on is using paragraphs  because if the paragraph is not long then I feel like its not good. The last thing that I need to work on is Simile.

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A narrative take-away for me is

In narrative, I am still going to work on get better

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A narrative take-away for me is.....
adding more detail and excitement as well as ending each paragraph

What I really want to improve on is dialogue. I also want to work on my transition words.

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A narrative take-away for me is...

In narrative, I am still going to work on...

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A narrative take-away for me is using punctuation and spelling.

In a narrative, I need to work on when to use commas and work on it quicker.

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A narrative take-away for me is putting in some transition words on my story's.

In narrative, I am still going to how to end my story.

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A narrative take-away for me is making my story real

In narrative,I am still going to work on how to spell better on my story

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A narratives take-away for me is to keep writing more so you can make a small short story into a big long story.

In narrative, I am still going to work on is transition words.

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A narative take-away for is puting pics and adding music

i'm working on mine :/ so sorry i need to work on ending and i like mine a lot O-O U-U
also when u use transiton words you can put it some whee it makes sense

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A narrative take-away for me is adding better transitions in my stories.

In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration.

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A narrative take-away for me is putting me
Additionally,  for my story

In narrative, I am still going to work on
how to end my story.

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a narrative take-away I am still going on my end of my story
In narrative i am still going to work on elaboration because i can put this for my story. to see the reader would like my story.

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A narrative take-away for me is endings and beginnings.

In narrative, I am still gonna work on details, transitions and dialogue in my stories.

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A narrative take-away for me is adding more details into your story.
In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration.

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A narrative take-away for me is ending.

In narrative, I am still going to work on elaboration because sometimes it's hard for me to think of more things to write.

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A narrative  take-away for me is...

In narrative,I am still going to work on  my writing to get better bc I need to look at my writing to see if write my words are right . and to to a good ending for my writing.

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A narrative take-away for me is that adding similes and metaphors. Also how to start a story.

In narrative, I still need to work on how to keep my little seed and spread it.

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A narrative take-away for me is editing stories.
In narrative, I'm still going to work on transition words.

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A narrative take away for me is putting Transition words for my story

In narrative, I am still going to work on is put How to start a story and putting . in my story. these are what i want in my story

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A narrative take-away for me is how to write long stories.

In narrative, I am still going to work on how to end my story.