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The tree is as colorful as a rainbow and the tree danced as the wind blew harder
Descriptive words : glamourous , striking , elegant

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I've told you a million times to clean your room
-hyperbole

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It was the child's painted fingertips which adorned the branches of the tree

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The tree shows such beauty that it inspires the heart and mind to dance among the colors.

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As the tree stool tall in the valley and its blossoms glowed in the sunlight and leaves shaded violet,, and as the sea touched the land and the roots try to grab those nutrients to sustain its lushes colors that blinded you

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The tree sprouted out of the juniper green bushes, its rough, chocolate brown bark and branches spread out to display the magical purple leaves speckled with wine-red, white and yellow dots.

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Her last smile to me wasn't a sunset. It was an eclipse, the last eclipse, noon dying away to darkness where there would be no dawn.

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red- figurative language
yellow- adjectives
brown- openers

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The wind whispered through the trees like I was there feeling the cold breeze

-figurative language

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The wind whispered through the reddish purple trees and it looked like the trees were dancing.

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The glorious colourful tree was dancing in the wind like a happy penguin dancing on a sheet of white snow!

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Grade: B+
Writing is mostly fluent and has a sense of audience. Transitional words and phrases are used logically and help build a clearer image in the mind of the reader. Effective figurative language has been used and the use of five senses add more details to the image. Content develops some interesting and realistic features in parts of the writing. Details and frequent well chosen images give an impression of reality throughout the description. Grammar and punctuation could be more accurate in certain parts.

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Grade A-
Keeps the reader's attention with well-chosen photographs and information that offer the appearance of truth. Throughout the piece, effective figurative language has been used to paint an image in the reader's mind. Subtle and efficient listener awareness; effective use of a variety of sentence forms.

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Creates a very clear image in the reader''s mind. In the paragraph,effective figurative language has been used.Five senses has also been added throughout the paragraph to add more details.

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Grade: A-
Writing is fluent, Transitional words and phrases are used and they help build a clearer image in the mind of the reader. Effective figurative language has been used and the use of five senses add more details to the image. Content develops some interesting and realistic features in parts of the writing. Details and frequent well chosen images give imagery throughout the description.

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Grade: A
All five senses used and give the reader a clear sense of the surrounding. Transitional vocabulary used and indicate a change of topic effortlessly. Color shades, similes and metaphors help the reader picture the setting in mind effectively and make the writing attractive

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I would give it a B+ because details and transition words and phrases are placed in a logical order and the way they presented effectively keeps the interest of the reader. Figurative language has been used throughout the piece creating a clear image in the readers mind and 5 sense added greater details and dimensions to the overall image.

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grade: A
It was very descriptive and creates a very clear image about the setting and used 5 senses ,figurative language are used , wide range of vocabulary.

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Grade - B+
There  is a wide range of vocabulary. Subtle and effective sense of audience; appropriate use of varied sentence structures.

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Figurative language
Powerful adjectives and adverbs
Image

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OcARCM9tYMrH0-op6ZcX8r4UD7AAmrm9-5bY64CddVY/edit?usp=sharing

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Hend, Haneen, Aniella, Kaniesa, Karim
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-fr8Ga-Fyvvi3p9ePQnEtbzXi2C0UnrWWHqA1yLgHnw/edit?usp=sharing

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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PYia4hWv0YKOkz_mr_07x4iY6A4AdrgEJIzweHx4A2Y/edit?usp=sharing

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The gate squeaked in surprise as I swung it open and strolled hurriedly into the front garden. There the statues saluted me in warm welcome as I trudged along the stony, weathered, ash grey pathway. A strange sensation tingled in my veins, my chin quivered with anticipation. I felt the gentle breeze blow by, lightly caressing my face and rustling the emerald-green leaves that hung from the wooden fence. Birds sung sweetly in the trees, neighbouring children laughed hysterically in the background, and the smell of petrichor embraced the summer air. It was as if the whole world had become far more vibrant and dreamy. It was good to be finally home.

Arriving at the doorstep, I rapped my knuckles against the burnished door. The sight of this old, once deserted house, now standing glorified made me nostalgic. Neatly trimmed vines greedily hugged the worn-out doorframe, aged hickory brown bricks whispered ancient stories and sunlight bounced off the pearl white French windows, casting an angelic glow. My heart leapt with jubilation as Francis waved frantically from the living room window, smiling so wide, I half worried that her face would peel off. I grinned like a mad man in return and hastily strode into the cosy house which had been warmed up by the hearth.

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A powder blue blanket that spread across the atmosphere, was decorated with wispy silver shapes. Beneath laid the prepossessing brick cottage standing tall. Chocolate brown bricks stacked up like blocks made up the structure of the house. French windows painted a charming white adorned the walls and an enchanting door separated the lush gardens from the enchanting home. Outside, the captivating smell of petrichor invaded my nostrils and a soft breeze tickled my skin. The once barren land, dried from the scorching sun, was transformed by radiant flowers. The fuschia plants danced to the harmony of the summer wind and the voluminous evergreen trees swayed their limbs. Perched on branches were miniscule song birds, vocalizing into the serene abyssus. Underneath, chartreuse grass feathered beneath my feet and was embedded with the hoofprints of the family goat. I was blinded by the sight of the sunlight casting an angelic glow around everything; and was enchanted by the constant sound of buzzing by iridescent creatures, and the swishing of the vines on the textured grey wall which clung tightly on it like a child to its mother.

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BRAINSTORMING - Google Docs
our google doc

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Omar, Ali, Latofati, Loury & Amalyn

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The smell of cherry red roses dancing to the harmony of the breeze embraced the summer air, while entering the house Statues greeted you as we walked along the stony pathway. you see the beautiful basil green garden with astonishing flowers and trees. Sunlight bounced off the serene windows and casted an angelic glow, the sight of this old glorified house, made me feel nostalgic. The happy Hummingbirds kept on singing and dancing beautifully in the whispering wind like trees on a windy day, sliding my hand through the alarming concave walls. Tasting the watery watermelon from the glorious garden.

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A colorful rainbow colored houses appear as you walk through the street, the smell of freshly prepared cupcakes and cakes from a coffee shop, I could imagine how peaceful the village is as if its turned on Silence mode, the houses are enormous that you would get lost! In summer, the backyard garden is full of the sound of bees buzzing and butterflies fluttering. Whenever people passed the house, I would notice that they were staring and paying attention to the house, soft chairs and couches, a fireplace, and lamps were the perfection of tempered warmth and illumination, the elegant house full of items created a graceful entourage fitting. My heart was a bird trying to fly from my chest when I saw the house. It's like Barbie finding her dream house! The house shined as a gemstone and blinded the people with its brightness and shininess, I could tell that the house would taste like a cake stuffed with rainbow fillings and crunky skittles.

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As I open my eyes, the sun peered through the window and gives glowing shine in my room. I walked out my house and there was a pearly glow in the sky that caught my eye. I felt the gentle touch of the cool breeze as I walked through the path way surrounded with astonishing flowers full of vivid colors. Seeing the birds singing beautifully gives me the peaceful  mood I've always wanted to feel. As the kids come day by day while laughing hysterically, the more the place gets blissful. When the day ends, I feel the excitement to wake up in the morning to  start an amazing day that gives me  shine.

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words couldn't express how joyous i was feeling, the haunted like house was finally torn down and we made it into a new, modern beautiful house. the freshly planted plants and trees danced in the brease outside, the birds singing in the morning when i was up. the smell of the house smelt like beautiful flowers. all the new furniture was clean and modern, it really was the house of my dreams. im just overjoyed that we took something so blue and scary and made it into something delightful.

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A few blocks down Bumblebee Lane stood the brightest and most colorful city I have ever seen before! It is called The Valparaíso City. The Valparaíso city is quite a large city with narrow lanes in between buildings and houses. It is not crowded most of the time which makes it quite empty, although the bright vivid colours of the city is fairly pleasing to the eye. The houses were as glamorous as gems which gave a positive feeling about the place. Some of the houses there were enormous, you would need a map to find the rooms inside! As I ran down the bare city lane, my hand glided across the smooth feel of the beaming sky blue, bubblegum pink, peachy orange, lemon yellow and forest green paint on the walls of the buildings and the peaceful atmosphere which was filled with the sound of chirping birds. Whilst I cheerfully galloped like a deer from road to road, I got the scent of freshly baked cupcakes from the downtown bakery. The radiantly glowing buildings gave my tongue the taste of crunchy colorful skittles. The Valparaíso City sure is a magnificent place to visit, especially in the summer. The city is full of the sound of bees buzzing and butterflies fluttering all around the place!

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The smell of cherry red roses dancing to the harmony of the breeze embraced the summer air, while entering the house, the statues surrounding the house greeted you as we walked along the stony pathway. You see the beautiful basil green garden with astonishing flowers and trees and hear the birds chirping all around the place. Sunlight bounced off the serene windows and casted an angelic glow, the sight of this old glorified house, made me feel nostalgic. The happy hummingbirds kept on singing and dancing beautifully in the whispering wind like trees on a windy day, sliding my hand through the alarming concave walls. Tasting the watery watermelon from the glorious garden.

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The overgrown vines hung loosely overflowing with little flowers dipped in a deep pink shade and the front lawn wasn’t kept for a while so the plants took over the house instead as they believed they could do better; with large ferns covering the view of the windows which had an overhang that curved itself to compliment the windows rectangular style and bushes that were like a buffet that came in a variety of small little flowers that scented the air with a unique smell as the air mixed itself with the wind that blew towards the house carrying the songs from the nearby village in a gentle manner and the shrubs filled up the lawn with its thick evergreen leaves, so large to fit the palm of your hands. Birds chirp in the background taking cover in the trees that stood quite tall bending in such obscure manners with a musty brown, thick and sturdy bark that lead all the way to the top and branches out towards the cobalt blue sky that had swirls of clouds blocking the sun from coming out. The pathway that led into the house was cracked and shattered; its chiseled stone design was ruined as time grew by leaving space for little water streams and colored in by the moss. The pathway was bordered with a chocolate brown  picket fence that blocked the dense overgrowth of the occupants there.

Time didn’t really ruin the cottage, rather adorned it with the minuscule plants that choked the wall and the chaotic spread of vegetation embellished it.