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ubric for writing a Fable   |  TARGET    |  ALMOST   |  MET EXPECTATIONS   |  EXCEEDS EXPECTATIONS
Characters  | Fable has no description of characters.   | Has a good description of the characters.  | It has good description of the characters and their actions.  | Fable has good descriptions of appearance, actions, and thoughts of characters.
Setting  | fable has no information about setting.  | Has little information about the setting.  | The setting is well described.  | Fable contains vivid description of setting,
Plot  | fable does not have the problem and solution.    | It is missing a beginning, middle, or end.  | It has a beginning, middle, and end that makes sense to the story.  | Fable contains a logical beginning, middle, and end, that increase the value of the moral.
Moral  | Story does not teach a lesson.   | It has a moral, but it does not go with the story.  | It seems to have a lesson, but it is not included.  | Moral is stated at the end of the fable and fits well with the action of the story.
Revisions, editing and proofreading  | Did not make corrections on the first draft with more than 5 errors.  | Very few changes were made from first draft with 4 to 5 errors.  | Some changes were made from the first draft with 3-4 errors.  | Many quality improvements were made form first draft there are 2 or fewer errors.

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It is a nice story .

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Lo:  To plan and compose my own fable based on the given moral.

Moral:  What is the moral of your story?
The moral is do not be careless and lost in your imaginederry world

Setting: Where is the story based?
In the out doors

Characters: Who are the characters of the story?
A lion and a dear

Problem/Mistake: Is making fun of others a mistake? What was your character's mistake in the story?
The dear is careless so he got trapped by the lion

Plot: Beginning- in the begening the dear comes to the forest and said  my very thin legs do not mach with my strong body but my horns are amazing

Middle-  the dear so lost in his thouts did not see a lion aprouching him the lion jumped on him he ran as fast as he could

End- when he ran as fast as he can  , his horns got stuck in a tree branch so the lion finally could catch him. His final words were " oh poor me the thing I loved got me trouble. The thing I hated the most helped me

Solution:  Was the problem was solved towards the end? How was it solved? Did he feel sorry for his mistake?
Yes at the end he realized that he made a bigg mistake

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THE UNHAPPY DEAR

Once upon a time there lived a  sad dear in the village. One day he went to the forest and said my very thin legs don’t look beautiful with my very strong body. But my beautiful horns are always looking nice with my structure. The dear  busy in his thoughts did not notice a lion hiding beside him. When the lion jump on him, he got terrified. So he ran as fast as he could. The dear got his thorn stuck in a branch of tree. It becomes easy for the lion to catch the dear. The dear last words were...Oooh poor me, the thing from which I was not satisfied helped me a lot. But the thing that I was satisfied with did not helped me and got me in serious trouble.

MORAL:
ONE SHOULD ALWAYS BE HAPPY, THANKFULL AND SATISFIED WITH THE FEATURES GOD HAS GIVEN US.

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Place : magical world  and forest
Characters: unicorn may and unicorn Katie, lion chiller
Problem: the lion want to eat the unicorns
Sholocen: call the unicorns police and make a trap for the lion

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Once upon a time there was a unicorn named kids she was the nicest Unicorn in the world one day she went to a trip in the forest with her friend Unicorn Maya and when they were hungry my Unicorn my said I am hungry let's go some cook some food cooking the herd sound in the bushes it was the lion Unicorn Maya Unicorn Maya said don't worry my friend I have a good idea I will call the police I mean unikom police and and we will make a trapped for the lion and next you will throw h im in the real Earth so no and can eat a the Unicorn call police and they took as much as chicks and take the lion was falling asleep and hardest with some and stood they make your knees food and there was a servlet and the lion to the noise smell and he was in the track the police came and took the Lion him in the and and Maya and Kate had their happiest trip ever they are and the end thank you

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PLANNER :

Moral:  What is the moral of your story?

Ans:  Don't play outside at night alone.

Setting: Where is the story based?

Ans:  In the Forest

Characters: Who are the characters of the story?

Ans: Mary, Suki, Valeri, Astra, Soul the Witch , Mary's Mother and Mary's Father.

Problem/Mistake: Is making fun of others a mistake? What was your character's mistake in the story?

Ans: Witch take away Mary inside the forest.

Plot: Beginning- Mary and her three friends Suki, Valeri and Astra were playing in the garden. When they finished playing ,they saw it already night. Then they got lost because they can't see anything.  The Soul the witch came and took Mary away. The witch took Mary in the dark forest.

Middle-  All three friend was crying loudly. To hear there crying sound, Mary's parent came there. They listen everything from them. They took them at home.

End-  After they came out to found out their daughter Mary at the forest. Suddenly they hear a sound from the large tree. They saw Mary on the tree. Her father climbed the tree and get down.

He told Mary never play outside at night.

Solution:  Was the problem was solved towards the end? How was it solved? Did he feel sorry for his mistake?

Yes. Parent solve the problem. Yes

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WWW=I have learned about a lot of things story settling moral fabel
EBI=what mean setting I onlay now that it my be the place like forest,school,home.

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Peer checked by Elaiha
Www and Ebi

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PLANNER :

Moral:  What is the moral of your story?
A friend in need is a friend indeed.

Setting: Where is the story based?

Story is based on a mountain,  in a cave and in the forest.

Characters: Who are the characters of the story?
The characters are a Lion and a Jackal.

Problem/Mistake: Is making fun of others a mistake? What was your character's mistake in the story?
My character the lion made the mistake of thinking he would not need anybody else's help.

Plot: Beginning-
It was the rainy season .
Lion had just finished making his home in a cave on a mountain.

Middle-
After a few days jackal built his own house. It rained all day. Lion knocked on the door and said, “Can I live with you my house is flooded “.
End-
After a few days jackal felt sorry for what he did to the lion and saw him in a miserable condition.

Solution:  Was the problem was solved towards the end? How was it solved? Did he feel sorry for his mistake?

After a few days jackal felt sorry for what he did to the lion and saw him in a miserable condition.  He said, “you can come live with me even I will fix your house so rain won’t come in.” Lion said “thanks,  I now realise I was foolish before and should have helped you out.”
Moral: a friend in need is a friend in deed .

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Www : you had nice punctuation and no spelling mistakes
Ebi : you have no mistakes

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WWW: I am happy with how the moral fits in with the story. By the ending both characters realise their behaviour was not good and they made changes.
EBI: I could have used  more description, adjectives or adverbs to make my writing more interesting.

I am happy with my fable. I enjoyed writing my own and I liked reading my friends stories as well.

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WWW: The story is nice and characters are interesting.
Ebi: The plan and compose is not complete and check the spellings.

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www .   Story plot and characters the story was really interesting
Ebi .  You can use more adjectives to make it more interesting.

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I Did it Elliaha

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By JannatOumadan

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Wrong one this is the right one

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www you have little mistakes edi little mistake but good

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www you have little mistakes edi little mistake but good

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Miss this is my work

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For planning my own fable

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WWW : Congratulation! You are an a budding writer. You have employed the structure and features of a fable. Your character description and settings description is also clear. The plot is portrayed clearly with connection to moral.

EBI : I would appreciate if you could visit the tense and check the verbs in the conclusion paragraph.

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Plan and compose

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WWW. I LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE THE STORY AND THE CHARACTERS ROLL IN DRAMA.

EBL. USE MORE ADJECTIVE TO MAKE MORE NICE AND INTERESTING.

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Lo:  To plan and compose my own fable based on the given moral.

Moral:  What is the moral of your story?
The moral is do not be careless and lost in your imaginederry world

Setting: Where is the story based?
In the out doors

Characters: Who are the characters of the story?
A lion and a dear

Problem/Mistake: Is making fun of