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add more conncted word between each slide.

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1. More explanation of limitations

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1, the voice should be high and low, not too flat
2, Don't read from the PPT, you should say it in a different way
3, Manage the allocation of time well，

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1.add more detail in every section of methodology.
2. add more connectors
3.explain the justification more clear and more detail in every section

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1.Manage my time
2.Use more connectors
3.There needs to be more effective transition between the parts

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1. manage the timing, and cut down the background.
2. critiques need to be improved
3. methodology part needs to clarify clearly with explanations.

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1. add more critiques of key literature.
2. more justification for research benefits.
3. add more connections and transitions.

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1.explain the reasons for choosing mixed method
2.compare previous research to explain the research gap
3.add more linking words

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1. pay attention at the time
2. add literature review outline
3. add academic significance

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1. Use more connectors between each slide.
2.  Add more academic benefits.
3. Outline first before literature review

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1. Speak with enthusiasm
2. add critique for the literature review
3. use different linking words

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1. Explain the connection between major and research
2. make cohesions between aims and approaches

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gfharlqNvxuOyMNOw3Hzo_dmow2fZpFI/view?usp=sharing

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Try to use more connecting words, keywords should be used to emphasize the tone, lift the tone accurately, so that the whole display more clear and accurate.
add more details in methods and research design
manage the timing of each section

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1. I need to add academic significant part.
2. change my tone and pace and add linking words.
3. add critique of individual sources.

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1. Add more evidence of ethics
2. Manage my time, it is over too much
3. Make the research question, aim and objective more clearly

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1. Cut down the background and literture review part
2. Need more justification
3. Using more connecting words during the presentation

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1. Explain more on rationale for research, e.g. more justification on methodology choice
2. Add the critique points for literature review parts
3. Needs to discuss about the potential significance of the research

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1. Keep practicing, adding more linking words to make it more fluent.
2. make focus very clear to listener
3. more in-depth critique of 2 or 3 individual sources

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3 ways for YOU to improve your presentation score ( see grading criteria) 

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3 ways for YOU to improve your presentation score ( see grading criteria) 