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Hello group 1,
Please write about your dream jobs. Find a job and match it with your abilities and skills.

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I want this job because I am good at using computers and I also like working with computers and I can work long hours with computers. Atif Shahzad

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Feedback- well done Cristian! Hourly rate is in £ not  in $. Check again.

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Correction: Chef’s  job is the most interesting job. It has the most longest hours.It is the most dangerous job.

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Correction: Chef’s  job is the most interesting job. It has the most longest hours.It is the most dangerous job.

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Vlad
Chef job is the most
Interesting.
Is the most longest hours.
Is the most dangerous.
Is the most stressful.
Is the safest.

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I would lik to be an Engineer because I am good at maths and I like to work for a long time and  this specialty is qualified with high technical lessons to develop designs or supervise their development.

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Engineer job is the most interesting.
Engineer job is the most stressful.
Engineer job is the most well-piad.
Engineer job is the most complicated.
Engineer job has the longest hours.
Engineer job is the most safest.

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Well done Dawada. Correction- I would like to work outdoors.

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A good salary.
On-the-job training.
A good boss.

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A good salary.
Holiday sick pay.
Friendly colleagues.
Correction- Three most important things

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I like to Cook and I'm punctual.
And not manny people can cook.
I'm pretty good at cooking.
I'm friendly, and I like to sport.
Feedback-  well done you used some good sentences.
Vlad

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Mansour l would like to become Taix driver

Feedback, use full stop at the end of the sentence. Correction - I would like to be a taxi driver.

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l like bradford like. Like English. I want to be a driver.

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hello. my name is aland Aqeel .l would like to be police man.l am from syria.l live in bradford.my favourite colour is black.l like play football.

Feedback- Please use capitals at the beginning of the sentence and for names. Well done for trying hard.

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Mahamadou
a good salary long holidays sick pay

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Mahamadou

I would like to bee accountant because I,m good at maths a,m helpful a,m punchual a,m friendly a,m good at compeuter

Correction- spelling of computer and be. You have use comma (I,m) instead  of apostrophe.  I’ m - use of apostrophe( when we miss one or more letters) I’m friendly, I’ m ...

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Correction-  use are for more than one except with you.  You are
All the students are...
Please use capitals for (nouns) names Bradford, Alan’s, Syria

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My name is Simon  Beraket.  l am from Eritean and I live in Bradford. I am learning English at Bradford college. I wolud like to be lawyer
Feedback- please use full stop at the end of  each sentence. Correction-I’m from Eritrea. I would like to be a lawyer.

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Shouldn’t speak loudly

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I would like to be pilot, it's my dream job, I love travelling and this job give me pleasure to travelling, I'm good at math and computers.

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pilot is the most interesting is the most relaxing Pilot is the most well-paid pilot is the most complicated pilot is the most interesting Pilot is the safest

Excellent work, you have added a photo.
Correction- Pilot’s job is the most interesting, well paid and safest.
Target- Use of punctuation

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Mansour l would like to be Taix driver because I like to holp people and l want to work for long time

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Mansour my job is Taix driver is the most interesting this job is the most stressful

Correction- Taxi driver’s job is the most interesting job and stressful job.

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About psychologist...

Is interesting;
Stressfull;
Well-paid;
Complicared;
Safest;
Be paciente;
Calm;
Pontual;
Have very attention.

Correction-  patient, calm , punctual are skills

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I would like to be a psychologist in the future. Because is my favorite profession; And  I am calm person; I am patient; I like to listen to people; I like to help; I am punctual.

I would like to be a psychologist because is a good job and I will be able to help people with their "big psychological problems" . And I will have a good teaching about my mind too. I think this is really good.

Feedback- Well done for trying hard. You can talk about your skills. Avoid using translator all the time.

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Correction- Please use full stop at the end of each sentence.

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Correction.Shouldn’t speak loudly in a job interview

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Correction- I would like to be an artist.