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www is that he uses 2 quotes as well as this shows good understanding of the poem.

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www  used a quote to back up her evidance
ebi: vocab to show relatioship  for the son and the mother

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www: they used a range of different quotes such as the use of a secondary quotes with techniques and a strong meaning behind.
also explained the effect on the reader.

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point  and evidence" prise song for my mother"water to me is the easiest place to start – life-giving, flowing, liquid and expressive – and it prompts the poet to describe her mother with three words ‘deep and bold and fathoming’.  To call a person ‘deep’ may now have the sense of complexity or seriousness, but here it summons up deep sea water, ‘bold’ the braveness of waves.  ‘Fathoming’ is slightly nonsensical and all so The ‘fishes red gill’ seems to me to be another image of vitality, since the oxygen-rich gills quickly fade in colour once a fish has been taken out of the water.  this make the reader feel or think that her daughter more important then then every thing around her thats the only hope that she have got it

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Www: use of secondary quote and shown a good knowledge of it

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They have a good understanding of the quote. And used a secondary quote 

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safah

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1)Use high level vocab to show how strong the bond is between the mother and son.

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bout the feeling in the past and won't leave it behind. we learn that the mother cares about the daughter when she mentions the 'moon' and the 'sunrise' to her. Suggesting that the daughter is heart-warming when the sun rises and a moon eye suggest that she has a big innocent eyes to show the love of her mother. Therefore, the Mother describes her daughter and herself as a 'moon' and 'sunrise'  as rise and warm. 

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says i love his mother

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1)  uses secondary quote
2) well used quote and know the understanding of it

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task 1: this show the mother has love for his son which she can't miss her at all that means that she care about the moon so make sense but son is something like a peace for his mother. forgot quote you were.

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Rihaan M

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In praise song for my mother "you were" suggest that the mother miss herself when she was young. The repetition of "you were" suggest that the mother can't forget about the feeling in the past and won't leave it behind. we learn that the mother cares about the daughter when she mentions the 'moon' and the 'sunrise' to her. Suggesting that the daughter is heart-warming when the sun rises and a moon eye suggest that she has a big innocent eyes to show the love of her mother. Therefore, the Mother describes her daughter and herself as a 'moon' and 'sunrise' as rise and warm.

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1)Good understanding of the meaning behind the quote.
2)Used a secondary quote.

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2rd task: Now have a look at how I’ve marked this paragraph. The same feedback can apply to you too!

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2rd task: Now have a look at how I’ve marked this paragraph. The same feedback can apply to you too!

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1. If you've submitted this PEACE paragraph (Title- 03 Praise Song), it is marked so I want you to check my marking and respond to the EBI. Redraft it now, then post it here on Padlet and THEN submit it on GC on a google doc so I can mark it.

2. If you haven't submitted the work for this lesson, then you do not have an EBI to complete because you didn't allow me to mark your work. SO YOUR  TASK IS: Rewrite this entire paragraph that you just marked,  then post it here on Padlet and THEN submit it on GC on a google doc so I can mark it.

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How does the poet present the relationship between the speaker and
the son?

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1st TASK: Mark this descriptive paragraph using the success criteria

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1st TASK: Mark this descriptive paragraph using the success criteria

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Write a detailed WWW and EBI

Point and Evidence: '‘Praise song for my mother
….“You were” means that the mother loved his so much probably when he was young

Analyse: The use of ‘repetition’ in “You were ” suggests that the mother can’t forget the feeling that she had in the past.
We learn/ understand that she love her son more than the moon or anything else

‘Also… ‘’ sunrise to me’’ means that her soul was warming just by looking at her son giving her heppines.

This makes the reader think….that there is nothing in the world that can replace her lovely son.

Evaluate: Therefore…the mother is telling us in many comparisons how much she love her son and what it means to her.