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The most challening experience that I had have faced (WT) until today (WW) so far was when I move moved (WT) to Spain.

It was the first time that I’ve been (WT) had been so far from my home and my friends. I remember that I was curious but a bit worried to about how I would fare there. I was also sad about leave for leaving (G) my friends and my girlfriend, wich (Sp) (WW) with whom I ended up (WW) broke up with for obviously (WW/G) obvious reasons (My father always told me: love from afar, love from assholes ¿? Do you mean something like “long distance love is for fools”?).

But when I came to live to Zamora, I meet (WT) met amazing people, who gave me a hand in everything. I also found bad people that I prefer to stay away from.

After being accepted at the University of Castilla La Mancha, I found myself again in a challenging situation. Studying a double degree sounded really stressful, but I knew it was an opportunity I couldn't pass up. Until today, I won’t regret about (WT/G) haven’t regretted my decisions and I would do everything (WW) the same again. I thank Spain for everything. I have enjoyed, I have learned, I have changed.

Wow! Big change for a person your age!

This is a bit long and the deadline was 5th December!! Be careful with tenses and some wrong grammar structures.

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The most challenging experience is happening now by far. My wife resigned from her job last year, (P) after more than 16 years working as an accountant  at the same company (WO) as an accountant and she has already achieved her main ambition, (P):to become a (P) Tteacher (when?). I used to encourage her to make this risky decision and she made it eventually. However, it hasn’t been a bed of roses, (P) after all. Her first destination has been Yunquera de Henares, in Guadalajara province, (P); it is more than 3 hours from here and we couldn’t help living separately. But, so far, so good. The point is that I have a really demanding and a kind of stressful job that usually deprives me of the (G) energy that I really need at home now. As far as I’m concerned, a good work life balanced (Sp) is crucial nowadays and should be respected and enacted by regulators. Generally speaking, fathers have been pushed into the background in terms of bringing up and I totally disagree. I would like to spend more time with them (no clear reference) my kids because they need me now more than ever but it’s complicated. It seems like I have to choose between work or and (WW) family and it’s pretty unfair, (P) for both men and women. I don’t want to convey the impression that I’m complaining about my new position but I just want to show that work life balance has a misleading meaning because this is not a trade off game. In order to make a long story short, I would like to finish by saying that both sexs should have same rights and opportunities at labour market without any (G) exception. (P)

It must be really hard! Thanks!

I’m afraid this is too long, the content does not correspond exactly to what is requested in the task and the deadline to post it was the 5th December!! (Please, read the instructions for the tasks). Pay attention to punctuation mistakes.

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One of the challenging experiences that I admire the most is about my mum (WW- you don’t admire experiences) My mum is the person I admire the most, because she had to face a really challenging experience. The (G) Doctors diagnosed my mum (rep) her with a physical disability when she (Sp) was a child. Despite (G/WW) Despite the fact that/ Although she has a hard (WW) painful recollection of going very often (WO) to hospital very often and have had ,with a significant impact on her life, she decided to cope with her situation and have a positive attitude. Due to her disability, she was unable to carry out physical tasks like (WW) as other children. However, her situation wasn’t an obstacle in order (G/WW) to study a vocational training degree and she can (WT) could go/has gone about her life as normal (WW) everybody else.

She must be really determined! Be careful with wrong words (especially linkers- despite), literal translations and some tenses or grammar structures.

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When I finished Bachillerato, it was the moment to choose the studies that I wanted to course (WW) I had to choose a higher education course. However, I remember I didn’t really know what to study. In (WW) At that moment I was already interested in English and in teaching, but I became obsessed with studies related to the (G) health, so I chose a 2-year degree in Diagnostic Imaging. The challenging situation came (WW) I found myself in a challenging situation when I realised that I really didn’t like the (WW) that degree. Therefore, I decided to talk with my parents, and in spite of being afraid of that decision, they were very empathetic with (WW) to me, and they approved my decision. Finally, I’m here studying a degree in Primary Education, ; (P) something that I really love.

Better late than never! Pay attention to some wrong words and avoid literal translations.

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One of the most difficult situations (G) I have lived, (P) was the day where (WW) when I achieved my first destination posting (WW) as a teacher. (P- only one paragraph) On the one hand, I was very excited because my dream was going to come true. I had a good position in the list as a result of hard study. (P- only one paragraph) On the other hand, I was terrified when I was saw (WW) in on (WW) Google maps where the village was. As you can look at (WW) see in the image, there were a lot of bends (it was a winding road), and I did'nt (Sp) didn’t have much experience whit (Sp) with the car (didn’t have much driving experience). Even the (G) lorrys (Sp) lorries overtook me. (P- only one paragraph) Despite (WW) In spite of this, it was the best year I remember. The working environement (Sp) was incredible and I made good friends.

Quite an experience! I’m sure your driving improved a lot. Thanks

Check some words in the dictionary and try to avoid literal translations. Be careful with spelling as well.

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When I was in my twenties, one day that I arrived late to a medical appointment I started to run in order to be punctual (WO/WT/WW) / One day, when I was in my twenties, I was getting late for a medical appointment, so I started to run in order to be punctual . Unfortunately, I sprained both of (G) my ankles at the same time. At the beginning (Sp) I didn´t notice any pain, . (P) h However, some hours later I couldn't stand the pain and or (WW) walk anymore. (P, same paragraph) Consequently, (P)I it was so difficult to go to the toilette or having have (G) a shower that I started to appreciate to be (G) being able to do the (G) little routines that you mechanically do without much thinking. (P, same paragraph) Besides, I had to take almost a month of rest / a month’s rest to get over it, so I learnt to be patient as well.

Thank you! Wow! Your two ankles at the same time! That must have been really painful.

Pay attention to grammar structures!

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When I was ten I remmember (Sp) that a I went to going to (G) Alcalá del Júcar with my parents. Although I have had (WT) already visited this village with the school, I really enjoyed the trip. (P-same paragraph) However, the problems arrived (WW) started when we took the car to come back. Unluckily, it had no battery (it had run out of battery/the battery had gone dead), so Iit (P) could not start. Despite of (G) being a normal situation, I was quite worried since I thought we were going to sleep outdoors (WW). I have had (WT) never lived this circuntmstance (Sp) before,. so Therefore, (P/WW) my mother bought me an ice cream in order to calm me down. (This sentence was to long). (P-same paragraph) We had to wait for (G) almost two hours until another car could share with us battery (WO) their battery with us. Consequently, we did not return home until 2 a.m, but at least we had gone (WT/WW) came back.

Quite an adventure for a ten-year-old! Thanks!

Be careful with tenses, some grammar structures and punctuation mistakes. You only needed one paragraph!

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A few years ago, while I was commuting home from my job (WW) work, and being late at night (as I´d been working overtime), well, I was driving my car through a secondary road and, suddenly, a herd of wild boars crossed by (WW) so that the last of them crashed my car, (despite (G) I had (WT) tried to avoid them in order not to get hurt. I couldn’t (Sp) , though).

I’m afraid this paragraph is too long. You cannot just use commas and brackets. You need to connect shorter sentences using linkers accurately. Problems with punctuation and wrong use of “despite”- it’s a preposition!

A few years ago I went through a challenging experience while I was commuting home from work. It was late at night, as I’d been doing overtime. I was driving my car through a secondary road when suddenly, a herd of wild boars crossed my path and the last one crashed into my car. I tried to avoid them in order not to get hurt, but I just couldn’t.

Nevertheless , everything ended up reasonably well, as I got out of my car harmless. and, (P). As a result of the incident, there was only a little dent in the front side of it (no clear reference) the vehicle, (P) (because of the small size of the boar I crashed with (WW) into).

Unfortunately, the boar couldn´t say so.(WO)

Fortunately, everything ended up reasonably well, as I got out of my car harmless-the boar couldn’t say so. As a result...

Thank you! You were certainly lucky (it was a narrow escape). Try to write shorter sentences and pay attention to punctuation.

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The first challenging experiences (G) I have had (WT) in (WW) at my work was the first project which  I worked in / in which I worked as a project manager.

It was the first time with I had a big responsibility: to build in real size what was written on a paper:  The municipal garage (WW) parking lot (for cars that are not well parked). (P) (this sentence is too long and you shouldn’t use : twice) / It was the first time I had a great responsibility; I had to build the municipal parking lot from the blueprint.

I (WW) It was a stressful experience due to the problems we found during the civil works. For example: , (P) seeing that the measures we have (WT) had at the project couldn´t fit correctly, we had to call the municipal truck crane to make a simulacrum (WW) run a simulation and consecquently (Sp) we had to change the length of the parking places in order to have more free distance. ?

As a result, I learnt to work under pressure seeing that almost ever (WW) always it´s possible to find a new solution! (literal translation) / since you may almost always find a new solution for a new problem.

Thanks!! It does sound like a really challenging project.

Pay attention to punctuation and tenses. Some of the sentences are too long and a bit confusing. Avoid literal translations and check some wrong words.

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Through our lives we have to face some challenging and difficult situations which tend to be tough to overcome (redundant information). However, they are necessary in our lives (repetitive) as they also make us stronger and help us learning (G) (to) learn from our mistakes.

Last summer i (P) I went to a camp for 15 days in Salamanca (WO) in Salamanca for 15 days/ I spent 15 days in a camp in Salamanca. I was really excited, (P) although/but i (P) I was also a bit nervous because i (P) I didn't know people very good (WW) well and i (P) I had no friends.

At first it was very hard due (WW) since/ due to the fact that  i (P) I didn't have anyone to speak to, as (P).I am quite shy as well, and i (P) I missed my home too (repetitive). But right away we started to do activities in which i (P) I had a lot of fun and i (P) I finally made lots of friends and learned lots of useful things, (P) as how to build a tent or tie knots. I finally ended up being very happy and i (P) I appreciated every day (Sp/ WW) everyday stuff. I also felt in some way proud of myself for not giving up and grateful to my parents for letting me go.

To sum up, i (P) I hardly (SP) strongly? believe that going away for (WW) two weeks out was quite challenging, although it has (WT) helped me to become more independent and lose the fear of being alone and talking to new people.

Thank you for sharing! I’m afraid this is too long (only 90 to 100 words). You only needed one paragraph; in fact I would get rid of the introduction and the conclusion and focus on the experience itself. Content is a bit repetitive. Pay attention to punctuation mistakes and the use of some linkers (due!!!).

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One of the most challenging experiences I have ever faced is related to my studies. I am studying a Double Degree double degree/major (P:don’t need capitals) in Early Childhood and Primary Education and, this year, I had to choose a minor, where (WW) I chose English language (repetitive)(I would say"and I opted for English Language"). Despite accomplishing (I would say “undertaking”-better collocation) all my secondary education studies in English, I’m finding harder to face (repetitive- WW) subjects this year (I’m finding my subjects harder this year), as I’m not studying (G) I haven’t studied in English since I was sixteen. However, I have always been good at the language, and I know that it is all about time, because (P). I have been attending these classes only (WO) for only one or two months, (P). Consequently, I am not used to it, and it takes time. Moreover, I’m also attending classes at “Escuela Oficial de Idiomas” so as to practice English more and improve my level/myself (G).

Thank you! I'm sure you'll find it easier soon. Keep working! Be careful with some wrong collocations and punctuation. Try to avoid repetitions. Remember to use Present Perfect to connect Past and Present.