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Strength: Good background and IDK
Weakness: hook is boring

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1. Thesis is weak and not in the right place

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Good overview of the Paper
A lot of Background

Weaknesses
The hook doesn't draw you in to the paper at all.

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weaknesses: not a good hook and its kind of boring
strengths: has lots of body

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bad background info/bad hook

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Areas of Improvement
1. Could use a better hook
Strengths
1.Good Thesis
2. Good background info and details

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-Background Info is very strong
- Thesis
Weakness
-Weak Attention Getter

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Strength: Clearly says what they are going to tell us about and good background info.
Weakness: Stronger thesis

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Strong thesis statement
good vocab

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1. good hook catches attention
2. good background info

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Strengths:
1. Strong thesis
2. good background
Weakness:
1. not a great hook.

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No thesis?

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Strengths:
Good, clear subtopics
Good Intro
Improvement:

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Weakness: It is focused on the climates on the jungle. It needs more variety and body
Strength: good hook

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Areas of Improvement
1. Thesis needs to be argumentative
Strengths
1. Good hook
2. Good background info and detail

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- thesis
- attention getter
weaknesses
- more background info
Brynn, Shiloh, Brielle, Sierra, and Alyssa

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good attention getter
background info

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Strengths:
1. great background info.
2. great description
Weakness:
1. Not a strong thesis