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'Rain' 2 Hours of Heavy Rainfall and Thunder Sounds | High Quality Sleeping Sounds

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Sit back and relax to the soothing sound of 2 rainstorms at the same time. One from inside a tent and the other of rain and thunder.

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The setting is an island with big tall dead trees that hang 10 feet above your head, with seagulls squawking in the distance as thunder roars throughout the sky, and huge gusts of wind come towards.

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Cole Matthews is being attacked by a White Spirit Bear, after the attack Cole is so destroyed theres a cole encounter with death.

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ripping, struggled, nauseating, flooded, gasped, deep, thick, blood, dripping, churned.

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Merciless

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Defeated

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Terrifying

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Hopeless

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As the Spirit Bear is destroying Cole he grunts and tries to move his hopeless body out of the Spirt Bear's claws and mouth as theres seagulls squawking in the distance in the dark gloomy sky.

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