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There are two centers of attention, but good way to demonstrate your idea

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There are two centers of attention, but good way to demonstrate your idea

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-CS

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I like how the city looks stretched out. IT's cool because it makes it feel bigger than it actually is. Maybe you could improve this by making the image brighter, because it's colors are all so pale, the city looks like it's fading.,
EC

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Off to a great start, keep adding images and edit them some more

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Off to a great start, keep adding images and edit them some more

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-CS

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I like the message behind it. The bottom half doesn't look like its on the brick background. Change the filter so it blends in with the bricks.

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I like that you added the statue of liberty into this but there could be more blending done with the bricks RM

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I like that you added the statue of liberty into this but there could be more blending done with the bricks RM

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I think it cool how you made it look like the person was on T.V, yo should add more images to go along with it. RM

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I think it cool how you made it look like the person was on T.V, yo should add more images to go along with it. RM

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Very well blended and put together, maybe make it more clear what the lines are supposed to draw your eyes to

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Very well blended and put together, maybe make it more clear what the lines are supposed to draw your eyes to

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-CS

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I really like how well done the guy is and how it looks like it literally was spray painted onto a brick wall. You may want to use your brightness and contrast on the person to make him stand out a little more because it is difficult to make him out against the brick wall. ZK

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I think this a really cool idea. The American flag background really pulled me in. I think that it is too dark, so maybe try adjusting the lightness. Also try to integrate the gymnasts better because they look out of place.
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I like the idea of money and current events. The images of money are cool but maybe you could add some stuff to the middle of the collage to fill empty space RM

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I like the idea of money and current events. The images of money are cool but maybe you could add some stuff to the middle of the collage to fill empty space RM

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I really like how the words really seem like they were spray painted onto the brick wall. Maybe try to use your photo gallery on the dollar bill so it really seems like graffiti. ZK

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Interesting idea, really sowed it well, the colors look very good together and nothing looks out of place 

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Interesting idea, really sowed it well, the colors look very good together and nothing looks out of place 

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-CS

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I like what you did wth the edited fire on the left part of the picture. You could try using the eraser tool and make the line between the two picture less of a factor in the picture.m

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I really like the theme of the photo and the ladder that shades into the city. You may want to use your brightness and contrast to sell the idea that the ballpark was really spray painted onto the brick wall. ZK

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Used line techinique very well, maybe add something to go in the background

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Used line techinique very well, maybe add something to go in the background

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-CS

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This looks cool because at first glance i though that Fenway was an alien ship. I think that maybe you should increase the opacity of the boats because they are almost fading away. And you could use the eraser to erase the bottom half of the ladder if you dont want it overlapping your grass. Just make sure you select the ladder layer first.
EC

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this is a creative theme. I like it. i suggest you make the brick background more visible. Try a different layer filter.

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I really like the color scheme because the green ties everything together really nicely. Kyrie could be brightened more so he is focused on. -EA

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I like that there is a good amount of images and they all relate to each other, i think you should make the image in the middle brighter RM

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I like that there is a good amount of images and they all relate to each other, i think you should make the image in the middle brighter RM

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I like the theme of the picture. You should experiment with other layers to make the drawings look like they're actually on brick.

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Very creative, good blending, maybe add more background detail
-CS

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I like how all of the images relate to Boston and it has a graffiti look. I would brighten Ortiz so he is more of a focal point. -EA

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I love the theme of this one. Guy Fieri is so funny and definitely deserves a brick. Maybe you should add some orange though because the red doesn't really seem like it goes with the color scheme he sets for himself. You could adjust the color of the flames probably by increasing the yellow. Really good job!
EC

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I really like how the player blend in with the background of the brick wall. one way to enhance the effect that it is spray painted on is to use the eraser tool and turn down the opacity and go around the edges to make it stand out more. ZK

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I really like how the person looks like it was really spray painted on to the the wall. I also really like the background. You may want to make the person stand out more or the background less because the first thing that my eye goes to is the background which I don't know is what you want. ZK

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I like the flag overlaying the picture. The person in the bottom right corner seems a little out of the picture. you could bring her more towards the middle to make her a bigger part of it.

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I like this because it looks like the brick is actually the wall and the lightning is creeping over the wall. But maybe you should make the lightning cover the brick, and have the wall show through. You could do that by lowing the opacity of the lightning.  I also like your theme too.
EC

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Person(Lebron James)

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The blending fits very well, maybe make boat less bright so it is not the center of attension

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The blending fits very well, maybe make boat less bright so it is not the center of attension

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-CS

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I like the statue of liberty. you can really tell that this is the main focus of the picture. you should try to connect the ocean to the sky. it looks unnatural to have that gap.

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I like the color scheme of this one. It looks like something that one would actually see in real life. I think maybe you could increase the opacity of James Murray so that He's not as faded. Also the framing in this is really good.
EC

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I really like the how detailed the picture is and how realistic is. You may want to try to make the picture blend in more with he brick wall by using your photo gallery and maybe use the eraser tool around the edges. ZK

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Rule of thirds

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person- lil yachty

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(tile,not a brick)
Lines

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Person
Lines

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person (framing)

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Rule of thirds

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Place
Lines

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City Life

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Rule of thirds
person

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Statue of Liberty

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Boats and boating--Equipment and supplies

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Rule of Thirds
Person

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framing (people/person brick

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Line
Person
Adding person alone with protest sign later

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Rule of Thirds

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Framing

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Person using cropping

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Place
Rule of Thirds