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Hi every body . To day I talk about my hobbies .I have many hobbies but my favorite hobby is cooking. I started my hobbies 2 years ago . I usually share my hobbies with my family and friends . They really like my hobby and they find it interesting and I so do .In our free time, my mother and I went to the supermarket to buy ingredients for cooking and my mother and I watch the internet videos to learn how to cook .To cook I need to have a lot of money to buy them . In the future , I continue my hobbies ,I felling happy every time I cook , I love my hobbies

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Minh Khánh .                                 My hobby is playing games. However, I’m not addicted to the game at all. I only play games when I’ve done my work. The game that I often play is League of Legends. This is a game that requires high strategy and flexible finger manipulation. I often play games with my friends. We split into teams and fight each other. When we play the game we become closer. Playing games helps me forget about the pressures in school. In order to play a healthy game, I only play 1 hour a day. My parents also know my gaming goals so I agree. On my 15th birthday, Dad bought me a computer set for my study and entertainment games. I like to play games but I also know the balance between playing time and studying. If you can do that, the game is not bad.   

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Minh Khánh .                                 My hobby is playing games. However, I’m not addicted to the game at all. I only play games when I’ve done my work. The game that I often play is League of Legends. This is a game that requires high strategy and flexible finger manipulation. I often play games with my friends. We split into teams and fight each other. When we play the game we become closer. Playing games helps me forget about the pressures in school. In order to play a healthy game, I only play 1 hour a day. My parents also know my gaming goals so I agree. On my 15th birthday, Dad bought me a computer set for my study and entertainment games. I like to play games but I also know the balance between playing time and studying. If you can do that, the game is not bad.   

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my hobbies is playing badminton. I have this hobby since 4 years ago, it helps me relax and good for health. I always spend 3 hours playing badminton with my friends. I usually finish my homework quickly and my parents always encourage me to play it every day. Sometimes, i go to matches and chat with many people this sport is good for health so i will continue this hobby in the future.

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I have hobbies, such as : traveling, cooking,listen to music. But i like reading the most. I think, i (have) liked reading since 5th grade and the person who shares this hobby with my is my father . In my spare time, my father often helps me learn and collect good and useful stories and books.
I like reading comics like conan, doraemon,...and some books about history, science...
Comic books help me relax reduce stress after shool hours. Books about history , science help have knowledge to serve my study and help me have more understanding of the world...
I will spend at least 1 hour every day reading stories or books.
I think maintaining the habit of reading books will bring us a lot of interesting things as well as bring a lot of useful knowledge in daily life.
In the future i will try to maintain this hobby and will collect a lot of good, meaning and useful books. I will share hobby with my brother and my friends

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I have many hobbies such as watching pottery,playing doll or cooking with my best friend,... But the one i like the most is collecting teddies and reading books.
I love teddies so much. I often arrange them on my bed so it is very untidy. My friends always say :" you are so rich because the teddies are very expensive " , but they are not. All of my teddies are present . My father always gives me teddies on the special occastions. When i am angry at home, i'll play with the teddies,it helps my feel come down and it makes me feel happy too. In my free time, i and my younger brother often play with them and you know, he loves it so much. Sometimes, i read books. My favorite writer is Nguyễn Nhật Ánh. His books are very nice, i love it. Now, i  have read more than 15 books by him. It helps  me write the story better than last one.
Hobby is very important in my life.  In the future i will sell books and many teddies   in the big and popular shop. I love my hobbies . Thanks for reading

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My favorite hobby is watching TV. I have watched TV since I was three years old. I watch TV after I finish homework and watching TV makes me happy and relaxing. I usually watch TV with my brother. When I watch TV, I need a quiet space. Watching TV helps me relax after stress lessons at school. It also helps me learn something about game, history, english, animals, nature, . . . Watching Tv is exciting because it has many joyful programs. They are very funny and interesting. I very / really like my hobby (very much) and maybe I will continue my hobby in the future and do it with my friend or my family. And you ? How about your favorite hobby ? Bye bye and see you again.

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I am a 13 year old girl.I have a very simple hobbies is listening to music. I started listen to music when I was 9 years old . In free time, I usually listen to music alone and I love headphone and dance hot trending on TikTok. I can listen to music anytime, anywhere even when I washing dishes and doing homework. I listen to a lot of music.For example,when I’m sad I listen to lofichill music and I happy, I listen to remix music.And I usually listen to music with my friends and brother.In order to good and useful music I have to go online to research a lot. And I love listening to music because it can make me more comfortable. In the future, I will continue to listen to music because it is my traditional hobby.

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I have many hobbies such as cooking watching movies and traveling but in those hobbies. I am very thick with reading is my passion. Reading books helps me relax after  stressful school hours 2 tiếng . In books it has all the knowledge and  it í  can help you to unbderstand more Dell about the world it can help you to be good students too in my free time. I usually take out books ti reading you guys or say that reading is boring but it's not it's fun reading books it will help you tell about the world history or something so please read trỵ The book because it can be very helpful for you bye!!! ❤
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Stamp collecting is an interesting hobby . you can learn many things such as the geography of a country  from stamps . postal stamps are a source of interesting facts and important dates about every country in the world . it makes stamps collecting become very popular
As you look at the pages of a stamp album , you can learn intersting details of foreign customs , arts , literature , history , culture , ........ Thier colours can make you feel relaxed and happy
Collecting stamps can become a business . If you are lucky in finding a special stamp , it will bring you some money besides knowledge and pleasure . I think i can't continue this hobby in the future . How about you ? What do you think about my hobby ?

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i have a hobby that is collecting Conan comics , i have ( had ) this hobby since 3 years ago .When i watch Conan on TV ,the movie has some bloody scenes , so i only read Conan manga.In my free time ,i often read Conan stories with my brother to avoid boredom.I know buying a lot of money but i only read a little ,so i only buy 1 book per month (or more than 1 month)to save money . This hobby helps me limit watching TV and helps me kill my free time.UnU

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My hobby is reading book, I like reading books all about the things in the world. I stared this hobby when I was 7 years old. My Mom often takes me to the book store and buys some book for me. Books are always my friends. I usually read book in my free time. In my room, there are a lot of interesting books on the shelf and I collect many books . If somebody comes into my room,they'll suprised because there are many books. Reading books makes me fell relaxed after many long stressful hours at school. It helps me know more things all about the world. Reading books is very useful for my future, it makes me a good student. There for you should read books, it's very helpful for your future . BYE

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My hobby is playing games. I started 1 year ago . However I only play games when I’ve done my work. The game that I often play is Arena of valor. This is a game that requires high strategy and flexible finger manipulation. I often play games with my friends. We split into teams and fight each other. When we play the game we become closer.

Playing games helps me forget about the pressures in school. In order to play a healthy game, I only play 2 hour a day. My parent also know my gaming goals so I agrre. I like to play games but I also know the balance between playing time and studying . I like playing game

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Hi my name is Huong. In my free time, I often draw mood pictures. I started pursuing this hobby when I was nine years old and now I am thirteen years old. I have been pursuing it for four years now. Painting help (helps )me relieve sadness and pressure. Pencil, eraser and paper are what you need to draw a simple picture. I don’t usually draw with anyone because I often draw pictures of my life. If you want to pursue this hobby, you have to be creative and patient. Up to now, I have also drawn about thirty to forty different pictures. I think in the future, I will continue this hobby and will participate in some more big and small competition.
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hello my name is Dung today I will tell you about my hobby.My hobby is basketball,I like to play basketball because it makes me taller and faster.I used to be afraid of basketball. , but my brother is the one who leads to basketball. Since then, I have learned to play basketball, but I have to spend money to buy the ball. As for the place to play basketball, we rent it, whenever I have free time, my brother and I go. I go out to the field to practice basketball to improve my skills. And if in the future I will become a professional basketball player

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hello my name is Dung today I will tell you about my hobby.My hobby is basketball,I like to play basketball because it makes me taller and faster.I used to be afraid of basketball. , but my brother is the one who leads to basketball. Since then, I have learned to play basketball, but I have to spend money to buy the ball. As for the place to play basketball, we rent it, whenever I have free time, my brother and I go. I go out to the field to practice basketball to improve my skills. And if in the future I will become a professional basketball player

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My hobbies are traveling and listening to songs.  I loved traveling and listening to music since I was 8 years old.  At that time, my family and I went to Ha Long Bay to play there were many scenic spots such as Yen Tu mountain, Quan Chau island, .... Since then, I have loved to travel.  I think my hobby is very useful because I can know more about my homeland Vietnam through each of my travels and it is also quite difficult because if I want to travel what I need is money.  And why do I like listening to music?  Because I am a person who gets angry easily as well as sad because at such times I often sit in my room to listen to music to calm my emotions.  Through the songs I can know more languages ​​such as: English, Korean, ..... and because this hobby is quite easy, we just need to have a phone in hand.  I think I will still go between these two hobbies because it helps me have a good time and relax.

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Hello everyone, my name is Hoàng Anh. Today, I will talk about my favorite hobby .
My favorite hobby is playing football.Since i was a child , I watched football programs and football matches with my father on television.I started my hobby 7 years ago, when I was 6 years old. My father shared this hobby with me . I often play soccer with my friends in football field near my house twice a week , I usually play as a striker. We buy the same sportswear together.I think this is a difficult sport because  before play football we must have to good feel for the ball. Playing soccer helps me train my fitness and team spirit. In the future, I will definitely join a certain team . I am very happy and excited to play football. I think football is a sport that any man likes it

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Helle  ,My name is Hoang Huy .Today I speak with us about my hobby .my hobby is Playing football . I started 6 year ago. I play football with many friends , classmate in the playground .It helps me have time is relax ,intertaning ,funny .In the free time I usually play football seldom I play chess for advecnded and play football for advanced healthy .I like watch football in TV It helps advanced lever football ‘s me . Feelings about the hobby is fantastic and good healthy I wanted everyone praticipate in more sports because help for us have a good healthy In the future I Will  football player .
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My hobby is listening to music . Everyday, I have to go to school to learn a lot of knowledge. It makes me stressed and tired. Therefore, in my free time, I love to wear headphones and enjoy good songs. I don't know how long I took up this hobby, maybe it started when I listened the soundtrack of a Korean film. I spend 1 hour a day listening to music. When I do it, I feel very comfortable. Music helps me forget the pressures. I often listen to songs with a deep melody. My favourite song is " Stay with me ". I also listen to music when I do homework at home. I really need music to concentrate on my studies. My elder sister likes it too, so we usually share good songs and listen together. I think it's a interesting hobby. I believe that listening to music will help me see some part of my life and I really enjoy it. I will try to be active and do more useful things by listening to music everyday.

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Hi, my name is Quyen and I am 13 years old. Today, I will tell you about my hobby. I have a simple hobby, that is drawing 🎨✍️ . After school, I usually go home and draw pictures. I don’t know how long I started this hobby, I think maybe about 4 years ago. I spend half hour a day drawing.When I draw, I feel very relax. I often have drawing contests with my best friend. Those drawing contests are very fun🤗. In the future, I will continue this hobby because it’s very interesting. You can use your pictures as gifts for your family and your friends.  💁🏻‍♀️ To do this hobby, you just need colors, pencil, erasers and papers to draw. So get your confidence, your pencil and start drawing !
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Hello, my name is Chi. Today I will tell you about my hobby. My hobby is listening to music. (Two )2 years ago I was surfing tiktok and there were a lot of good songs and since then I ( have  liked) listening to music. I often listen to music with my friends. I like lofi music the most because I find it very good and makes me feel relaxed. After school, I usually stay in my room and listen to my favorite songs. When I go to sleep I often listen to songs without lyrics. Listening to music helps me relax and be happy after a long tiring day. In the future I will continue my hobby. and you? Can you tell me about your hobby?

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I have many hobby,but my favorite hobby is listening to music and watching TV.I started my hobby when i was 6 years old.I like Pop music very much,i always listen to Pop music when i feel tired or stressed because Pop music helps me to relax.I ofen listen to music with my friends.We sing along to them and dance to the music.When i'm bored,i usually watch TV.There are a lot of channels for kids but my favorite channel is HTV3.My younger brother and i watch the movie Doraemon together.This movie is very popular.It is about the blue cat from the future named Doraemon to help a boy named Nobita.My younger brother and i really like the character Doraemon because Doraemon has a lot of treasures.I find these hobbies very interesting.

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Cooking is my hobby . My grandmother taught me how to cook my first dish when i was 8 . My family enjoyed it so much so that is when i started this hobby . Some people say cooking is a waste of time but i find this hobby very interesting and meaning ful (meaningful). I really love trying new food and cooking for my family  happy with my food is amazing . I often collect recipes from my mother and my grandmother . Sometimes i also get recipes from the internet . Then i write them in a notebook . I hope i will become a good chef and have my own cookery book in the future .
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Cooking is my favorite hobby. I started my hobby 3 years ago. Me and mother usually cook dinner for my family. My mum taught me how to cook my first dish when I was 9. My family enjoyed it so much so that is when I started this hobby. I share my hobby with my mother because she like cooking too. In the free time, we practice making new dishes. On Sunday, we go to the supermarket to buy cooking ingredients. Sometimes, I also get recipes from the Internet. Then I write them in a notebook. I hope I will become a good chef and have my own cookery book in the future.

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I like (listening to music most )the most is listening to music and it is my hobbies.I stated listening to music since 2 years ago.I listen to music anytime , everywhere. I listen (to) it when I do my homework,cooking and I don't have anything to do.I love all kinds of music:pop,lofi... and other kind of music.Whenever, whatever i do, when I feel sad or happy the music is always with me.I can say that music is my best friend. It usually help me relax . In free time,Ioften listen to my favorite songs from my phone .Of the famous pop singers, I prefer BTS, Sơn Tùng -MTP. They have many songs and it (they) can be a happy song  (happy songs) or sad songs . I just love listening to music so much. It’s like my daily hobby and I don't know what I'll be like when the music is gone.

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I have many hobbies such as playing roller-skating, watching TV, playing game,... But my favorite hobby is reading comic (comics). I started this hobby 4 years ago. That day, my father bought for me a wonderful comic, name(named) "Doraemon". This book had many lively pictures. It really attracted me. From that, I (have )collected many different comics. In the future, I will try to collect more different comics to continue my hobby.

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Of all hobbies .I like watching TV most . There are many kind of programs on TV such as: game show, news,...So it is a popular hobby in the world. I often watch cartoons because(they) are funny ,help me relaxa (relaxed)and exciting (excited).it (It) take (takes) me half an hour to watch it with my brother.  , I will continue this hobby in the future.

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Of all hobbies .I like watching TV most . There are many kind of programs on TV such as: game show, news,...So it is a popular hobby in the world. I often watch cartoons because(they) are funny ,help me relaxa (relaxed)and exciting (excited).it (It) take (takes) me half an hour to watch it with my brother.  , I will continue this hobby in the future.

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I spend half an hour watching it with my brother

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I have many hobbies but my favorite hobby is collecting model  (models). I started it last year . I always talk about some model (models)with my friends.I can use them as my bedroom decorations . I think you can collect model but you must spend some money on it . In the future ,I’ll continue my hobby and get more models . So   (Therefore,) I think collecting model(models) is interesting.

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I have many hobbies such as watch pottery,play doll or cook ( những hành động là sự việc phải chuyển V-ing ) with my best friend,... But (the one )i like the most is collecting teddy (teddies) and reading books.
I love teddy so much. I often arrange it (them )on my bed so it (is) very untidy. My friends always say :" you (are )so rich because the teddy  (are )very expensive " , but (they are)is not. All of my teddy is present. My father always give(gives ) me teddy on the special occastions. When i (am )angry at my  home, i'll play (with)the teddy, it help(helps) my feel came (come )down and it make me feel happy too. In my free time, me and my younger brother often play (with)them and you know, he love it so much. Sometimes, i read books. My favorite writer is Nguyễn Nhật Ánh. His books (are)very nice, i love it. Now, i read ( have read )more than 15 books by him. It help me write the story better than last one.
Hobby (is)very important of my life. Mabe in the future i will sell books and many teddies   on the big and popular shop. I love my hobbies 3000. Thanks for reading
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I have many hobbies such as cooking watching movies and traveling but in those hobbise I am very thick with reading because reading is my passion. Reading books helps me relax after stressful school hours 2nd is in books it has all the knowledge and in it can help you to unbderstand more deelp about the world it can help you to be good students too that in my free time i usually take out books ti read you guys or say that reading is boring but it's not it's fun reading books it will help you tell about the world history or something so please read try the book because it can be very helpful for you bye
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MY hoppy is playing games.when I was 12 year old (câu này thiếu ý ). However I only play games when I've done my work.  The game that I often play is Arena of valor. This is a game that requires high strategy and flexible finger manipulation . I often play games with friends.  We split into teams and fight each other. When we play the game we become closer.
Playing games helps me forget about the pressures in school. In order to play a healthy game, I only Play 2 hour a day my presents also know the balance between playing time and studying . I like play game

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i have a hobby that is collecting Conan comics ,i have (had) this hobby since 3 years ago,because when i watch Conan on TV ,the movie has some bloody scenes , so i only red the manga . when i have free time ,ibring it outb.Read with your brother on read alone.Because this hobby is more expensive than spending money,i only buy 1 book a math. This hobby helps me limit watching TV and helps me kill my free time.
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Hi , now I will talk about my hobby. My hobby is listening to music . I started this hobby 3 years ago . When I have free time , I usually listen to music . Music is always a new thing because it changes each day . Some my favorite types are K-pop, rock and roll, and other kind of music . I do have some favorite my hobby singers , and I usually download their whole album to my phone . Music help me relax and in the future I think I will continue my hobby . Thanks for reading
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Hi, my name is Giang. My hobby is watching TV after school. I started this hobby 5 years ago.I often share this hobby with my sister.I think what is needed in   (for) a hobby is time. You may find that watching TV is not good, but I don't think so. When I'm tired I can watch cartoons. I can know more about other animals and understand more about the outside world.My hobby is fun and happy.I think I can continue this hobby in the future.How about you? What do you think about my hobby?

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In my free time i usually listen to music. I like almost (most ) of kinds of music, especially US-UK and lofi music. My hobby started when I (started learning) learned at Ngo Gia Tu Secondary school. I usually listen to music with my phone, wear(wearing) headphones and listen(listening) to my favorite songs. I often listen to music with my friends and share my favorite playlist with them. I spend much time on it. I usually listen to music when I do my homework, when I do housework, when I read comics, when I sleep or whenever i want. I can learn English vocabulary when I listen to English songs. Music makes me relax after tiring school days. I think it a good hobby and I never stop it. And how about you? What's your hobby? Can you tell me?

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Stamp collecting is an interesting . You can learn many things , such as the geography of a country from stamps . Postal stamps are a source of interesting facts and important dates about every country is the world . It makes stamp collecting become very popular
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My hobby playing sport.My favorite sport is socer Since.I was a child ,I watcher football program with my father on TV.Now that I get oder ,I can play socer with my friend . Iwill play twice a week at a football field near my home , I usually play as a striker . Playing socer help me train my fithers and team spirit . My friends and I get closer after every football match . We buy the same sport wear together . We usually have small parties after each game . I like football and you guys should find your shell a foworite sport to pratice 

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My hobby playing sport.My favorite sport is socer Since.I was a child ,I watcher football program with my father on TV.Now that I get oder ,I can play socer with my friend . Iwill play twice a week at a football field near my home , I usually play as a striker . Playing socer help me train my fithers and team spirit . My friends and I get closer after every football match . We buy the same sport wear together . We usually have small parties after each game . I like football and you guys should find your shell a foworite sport to pratice 

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My hobby playing sport.My favorite sport is socer Since.I was a child ,I watcher football program with my father on TV.Now that I get oder ,I can play socer with my friend . Iwill play twice a week at a football field near my home , I usually play as a striker . Playing socer help me train my fithers and team spirit . My friends and I get closer after every football match . We buy the same sport wear together . We usually have small parties after each game . I like football and you guys should find your shell a foworite sport to pratice

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My hobbies  is playing  badminton. When  I  was 9 years old, my  mother saw I   (me )play games a lot, so she taught me to play badminton so that I would play less  games. This  is a very  easy sports  to  play, but  to play  well, you need enough practive.Every morning,
I  play   badminton  with   my  mother and  my  brother .  When  play  (playing) it, we must  prepare : racket, shuttlecock,...
It  can help  me  to  be  heathier  and closer  to my  family. In the  future, I  will  become  a  player  badminton.

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My hobby is playing badminton. I have this hobby since 4 years ago, it helps me relax and good for health. I always spend 3 hours playing badminton with my friends. I usually finish my homework quickly and mu parents always encourage me to play it every day. Sometimes, i go to matches and chat with many people. In summary, i really enjoy playing badminton because it not only brings physical benefits but also mental benefits
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(Đào Thục Quyên )                                                          After school , I usually use my free time for a hobby , that is watching TV . There are a lot of good shows but I like watching cartoon and a little comedy . Watching cartoons and comedies make me happy , love life . There are very meaningful lessons in every smile of these programs . Besides , I also like to read books each little story in it helps me relax and expand my understanding . Every weekend night, my family often gathers in the living room to watch new comedies. Funny stories sometimes make people laugh. At that moment, my family was very close to each other. Perhaps in the future, I will let comedy be my companion to share with me useful lessons with laughter.

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(Đào Thục Quyên )                                                          After school , I usually use my free time for a hobby , that is watching TV . There are a lot of good shows but I like watching cartoon and a little comedy . Watching cartoons and comedies make me happy , love life . There are very meaningful lessons in every smile of these programs . Besides , I also like to read books each little story in it helps me relax and expand my understanding . Every weekend night, my family often gathers in the living room to watch new comedies. Funny stories sometimes make people laugh. At that moment, my family was very close to each other. Perhaps in the future, I will let comedy be my companion to share with me useful lessons with laughter.

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My hobby is reading comics. I started it 3 months ago, while I was surfing tik tok, I saw a very popular comic, it name’s "Tokyo Revergers" since reading that comic, reading comic has become my hobby I . I share my hobby with my friends, we often talk about the content of those comic . The content of the manga I read is very good, the characters are very beautiful and cute. sometimes we even accept these characters as husbands and wifes, it's crazy right . Reading comics is fun, but there are times when it's sad because a character dies. It makes me feel more comfortable and happy after long tiring day . In the future I will never stop my hobby , i like my hobby very much

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I have many hobbies such as : soccer , watching tv , playing basketball , ... but my favorite is football . Football keeps me healthy and agile. I usually play soccer with my friends after school or when I have a break. Because I like to play football, I also like to watch football and I am a fan of L.Messi player and there are many very good football clubs such as: MU, PSG, Real Madrid, Manchester City, Chelsea, ... . But my favorite is FC Barcelona. Because football is a king sport, I hope to grow up to be a soccer player.( WHEN DID YOU TAKE UP THIS HOBBY ?)

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MY HOBBIES

In my free time, I often go swimming as a leisure activity to help me relieve boredom.  Six years ago, my sister and I took swimming lessons at Ho Sen swimming pool.  I often go swimming with my family on hot summer days and in my free time.  1 family of 4 four of us swimming in the water is very fun, everyone has their own swimming style and technique, no one is the same.  It is important that every time you go swimming, you must arrange the necessary things for that such as: swimming goggles, swimming cap, swimwear and bath oil and a towel at the end of the activity.  Every time I go swimming with my family and play with everyone, I feel happier and healthier.  Ending a day of swimming with the family is a fun meal with loved ones.  No matter how busy I am with school or housework, I continue to do this hobby with my family.  Who knows in the future I will be a professional swimmer and compete with countries.  It is my hobby and also what I do in my free time with my family to be healthier.  How about you ?  What do you usually do in your free time or what are your hobbies?  Can you tell me?

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Nguyễn Vũ Phương Anh (my hobbies)            

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Nguyễn Vũ Phương Anh (my hobbies)            

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I have many hobbies: reading comics, swimming, gardening, cycling,...but cycling is my favorite hobby. I think cycling is interesting because it's good for health. I often cycle to school because it's faster than walking to school and i don't have to bother my parents to drive me. And it helps us to have more health. I love this hobby and started it at 8 years old and 4 years ago.
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I am a 13 years  (year) old girl. I have a very simple hobbies.It  is listening to music. I started listening  to music when I was 9 years old. In free time,I usually listen to music alone and I love headphone and dance hot trending on TikTok.I can listen to music anytime, anywhere even when I am washing dishes and doing homework.I listen to a lot of music. For example,when I’m sad, I’m listen to lofi chill music and when  I’m happy,I’m listen to music remix. In order to listen to good and useful music (+ câu này em thiếu nửa vế nhé ). I had to go online to research a lot.And I love listening to music, it can make me more comfortable.In the future, I will continue to listen to music because it is my traditional hobby.
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My hobby is listening to music. Everday, I have to go to school to learn a lot of knowledge. It makes me stressed and tired. Therefore, in my free time, I love to wear headphones and enjoy good songs. I don't know how long I took up this hobby, maybe it started when I listen the soundtrack of a Korean film. I spend 1 hour a day listening to music. When I do it, I feel very comfortable. Music helps me forget the pressures. I often listen to songs with a deep melody. My favourite song is " Stay with me ". I also listen to music when I do homework at home. I really need music to concentrate on my studies. My elder sister likes it too, so we usually share good songs and listen together. I think it's a interesting hobby. I believe that listening to music will help me see some part of my life and I really enjoy it. In the future, I will try to be active and do more useful things by listening to music everday.

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I have many hobbies , but the hobby that my parent support the most is playing rubik. For everyone, Rubik's Cube is very difficult, but for me, I just need to be patient and I will solve it my by myshelf. I started this hobby when I watched Rubik's Competitions. Currently I have solved nearly 20 rubiks eg : megamix, 2×2 , 3×3, ... I usually play it with my neighbourhood. When I play, I alway need a high concentration so I can slove them. When After school , I alway play rubik so I relieve stress. In the future, I will solve more Rubik's Cube. 

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I have many hobbies , but the hobby that my parent support the most is playing rubik. For everyone, Rubik's Cube is very difficult, but for me, I just need to be patient and I will solve it my by myshelf. I started this hobby when I watched Rubik's Competitions. Currently I have solved nearly 20 rubiks eg : megamix, 2×2 , 3×3, ... I usually play it with my neighbourhood. When I play, I alway need a high concentration so I can slove them. When After school , I alway play rubik so I relieve stress. In the future, I will solve more Rubik's Cube. 

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My hobby is reading book, i like reading book(books ) all about the thing(things) in the world. I stared this hobby when i was 7 years old, my mom often takes me to the book store and buys some book for me . Book(books ) are always my good friend(friends). I usually read book in my free time. In my room,there are a lot of interesting book (books) on the shelf and i collect many book (books). If somebody come(comes ) into my room , they'll be  surprised because there are many book (books). Reading book (books) makes me feel relaxed after many long stressful hours at school. It helps me know more things about the world too. I really like looking for the interesting thing(things) all about the world. Reading books is very useful for my future, it makes me a good student. So (Therefore )you should read book(books) , it's very helpful for your future. BYE.
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I have many hobbies like (such as ) traveling, cooking, listening to music and many more. But I like reading the most. Books have always been a good friend to me. First, reading makes me feel relaxed after many stressful hours at school. I really like the story because it has very colorful and interesting pictures that help me relax. Second, reading is a good way to review vocabulary and grammar. Besides, reading books tells me about world history, learning about the structure of the human body or knowing the story of Harry Potter I think reading is the most interesting hobby.
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My hobbies are traveling and listening to songs.  I love  ( loved )to travel since I was 8 (.)At that time I went with my family to Ha Long Bay to play there (,)there were many scenic spots such as Yen Tu mountain, Quan Chau island, .... from that time I loved to travel because I could know  More about Vietnam my homeland every time I travel, why do I like listening to music because I'm a person who gets angry easily as well as sad because at such times I often sit in my room to listen to music ? I think I will still keep this hobby because it helps me have a good time and relax.
( Bám vào dàn ý để thêm nội dung và chú ý những chỗ cô sửa nhé )

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My hobby is playing games. But I'm not addicted to the game at all. I only play games when I'm done with homework and work. My game is a game that requires high strategy and player ('s) flexibility. I usually play games with my friends. We play happily and often compete with each other
As we play games, we become closer. Playing games helps me forget the pressure of studying. To play games in a healthy way, I only play 1 hour a day.
I still remember clearly. On my birthday, my dad gave me a computer for study and entertainment. I love playing games, but I also know how to balance play and study time. If you guys can do it, I think gaming isn't bad. In the future, I will continue this hobby

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I have many hobbies, but my favourite hobbies is going fishing. I started going fishing 3 year ago. I usually go fishing in the morning when  I don`t go to school: Tuesday, Thursday, Saturday, Sunday.
And I go fishing with with my younger sister and my neibourhood friend. But it is dangerous when you swim in river and lake, the most of children will drown. It is fantastic and it is exciting when you can bring some fish home for dinner. And I aslo share my hobby with my two cousins. I find my hobbies is very interesting. I think I will continue my hobbies in the future.
I love my hobbies very much.

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I like many hobbies such as reading books,playing games and stuff. But I like drawing the most.I take up this hobby...uh...Oh yeah!When I was a grade 1 student.Drawing helps me relax after stressful day of school.Drawing is not easy as you think it is,you need skills and time (Sometime I just give up ;-;).The world I'm seeing now won't be colourful without art,it makes me more creative and it helps my hands more skillful.Will I continued this hobby in the future?Heh,it depends.Uhhhhh I don't think there's anything else to say about my hobbies :P
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I have many hobbies like traveling, cooking, listening to music and many more. But I like reading the most. Books have always been a good friend to me. First, reading makes me feel relaxed after many stressful hours at school. I really like the story because it has very colorful and interesting pictures that help me relax. Second, reading is a good way to review vocabulary and grammar. Besides, reading books tells me about world history, learning about the structure of the human body or knowing the story of Harry Potter I think reading is the most interesting hobby.

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I have many hobbies like traveling, cooking, listening to music and many more. But I like reading the most. Books have always been a good friend to me. First, reading makes me feel relaxed after many stressful hours at school. I really like the story because it has very colorful and interesting pictures that help me relax. Second, reading is a good way to review vocabulary and grammar. Besides, reading books tells me about world history, learning about the structure of the human body or knowing the story of Harry Potter I think reading is the most interesting hobby.

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My hobbies
My hobby is reading comics. I started this hobby 4 years ago. My comic books are in many different genres such as: love, school, detective, jokes, ... I usually spend 1 hour reading them every day. I usually read comics alone when I have finished my homework. I find this hobby very interesting because it helps me relax after tiring hours at school but sometimes they also give me a headache because of the tricks in detective stories. (The )Old books(which ) after I have (already) read are sold (then ). So I have a little bit of saving money. (savings )I also often help my mother with housework to get much money. I usually spend that money buying new books. I think I'll countinue this hobby in the future.

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Drawing is my hobby. I think my life would be less colorful without painting. I've loved drawing since I was 6 years old. I never get bored when I have colors by my side. However, drawing is not easy. It takes a lot of sincerity as well as a set of actions. When I draw I need colored paper, ink, and eraser. I imitated how to draw everything from that book like rivers, hills, trees, faces of people, clouds and animals. It helps me to be less bored and tired. I have decorated my house with a lot of drawings. I think in the future, I will continue this hobby
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My hobby is watching movies. I started my hobby when I was 10 years old. I have watched more than 50 movies. I usually watch movies with my sister on computer. When I watch movies (I)need (a )television, (a)smart phone or (a)computer. Watching movies helps me relax my mind after stressful classes at school. There are also a lot of fuuny scences in the movies. There are many famous actors in the movies I watch like:(such as) Lee Min Hoo, Lee Dong-wook, Moon Ga- young, IU,.... Maybe in the future, I will continue to enjoy this hobby.