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Congratulations Aiden, Lucas and Aliya on making this informative poster. We think it is very informative, and we think it is the best as it shows what you want to do in a very short and easy manner. It is very engaging in a very simple way, and sticks out to everybody, and includes everybody. Well Done! We are proud of you!

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Hi Jake, Levi, and Siena.
We liked how you have talked about how you've convinced the audience to donate by telling us that we can make a positive impact on those families we donate to. You guys also you have included great photos and persuasive language. We just think that maybe tell us what Vinnie's is so then when other people that don't know about Vinnie's can read and know about it. Other than that your poster looks really good and really persuasive. - Akshaj, Udhay, Ralph

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7. Jake Valdes, Levi Liddicoat, and Siena Rhayem

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Something we really loved was the color scheme, it was very bubbly and present and had such a playful presentation. The message was displayed in bold letters and the message was very clear. We loved the presentation but maybe you guys could have added a bit more information about the actual cause and why you support it and be more organized, you couldn't really see the information as much so next time maybe make the text bold and bigger so it makes a bigger impact on your audience apart from that we really enjoyed your presentation.

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Good Job Aarush and Gurleen, your text does stand with its colour and font as well as informative language that has power. However use appropriate language and use nicer lanuage to promote this. Don't use ugly and poor because your not being kind and respecting to others. Also try to use images and colours to brighten your poster. We like how you use emotional language so more people can be apart of this, maybe add information about the campaign instead. Everything is neat and clear which great for a poster.

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3. Aarush Patibandla and Gurleen Kaur Hundal

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Hi Aditya, Ruben and Jiya. first off, we really like how you drew many images which captured our attention. We also like the color scheme and how it blends in with the Christmas aesthetic. Our feedback to you is that you should add more information and edit your spelling because we spot some minor errors. We would also recommend spending out the pictures more so they make sense. Overall, This is a great poster and we really appreciate your effort!

Sincerely, Isaiah A, Declan T and Kanishk

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Hii Aarna and friends,
Thank you for making this lovely poster. We like how you added reasons for why we should donate and our time limit to donate. Maybe you should rearrange the pictures to be neat and clean as the photos are in the middle of the poster and the text is kind of on the side. It would be better if you could be the flower borders around the whole poster instead of the pictures only. We love your colour scheme and fonts! We love your amazing poster!!

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Hi Armit & Maison, Amazing effort! This poster is a very interesting poster. Something lovely about this poster is you created a fantastic and catchy slogan so when the readers look at this, they will be captivated. One wish for you both Armit & Maison is to add more colour to make it engaging and explain why you want us to make this day unforgettable and what the Christmas hamper appeal is. Overall, You did a great effort in making and adding the pictures of the candy canes and a photo of a man which is relatable to this topic. Well done with your amazing effort you have put into this.

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Hey Alessandro and Zara,
We love how you made your poster so clean and neat. The way you chose your colours made your poster really aesthetically pleasing. It's amazing how clear your poster is but we think you could add a bit more detail as someone who doesn't know about Vinnies may find this a bit hard to understand. We love how precise and to the point you are when it comes to why we should donate and how we can help. Your design is really great especially the text, it stands out and conveys your message. The images help depict the message you are conveying. As amazing as it all is, we wonder if you could add some more persuasive devices. We also feel that the colours could be a bit more Christmas themed. We love the gradient though so maybe you could have a Christmas themed gradient. In conclusion, we think you could add some detail but overall we love your poster, close to perfection :).

Oliver, Sudeep, Ocean

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Hello Jayant, Verma and Maryam. Thank you for this wonderful poster that you have made. We like how you made it a christmas theme which is very eye catching. Maybe you should add more information on what to do, because what if someone that has no clue on whats happening and just finds this poster. All he would know that he just needs to donate food. Although we like the colours that you have used, it makes your christmas theme more better. Maybe making the "donate food" text colour to another colour becuse it does not contrast well with the background. Everything else you have done a good job.

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I love this! This is great that how you are talking about milo donating only a true aussi will do this and its very creative of milo because no one has talked about milo in a long time! But it will be nice if you could've added more description about it and more images of explaining further in the event. You have used various elements of colours and have made it decorative in order to cater to the general audience and we love it!!!! Good job!-Atharv, Bheeshmer and Gurlal!

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12. Sebastian Guerra and Sophia Laroche-Coralie

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Sophia and Yuvan, well done!

We like how you have used pictures and a nice, simple colour scheme. We also like how you have repeated similar phrases to really portray the message you want to send across. Whilst we were reading, we noticed some grammar and punctuation mistakes, which you can easily fix. We wish that you could add more information about the Vinnies Appeal and what people can bring and what people can donate. You could touch on how the St. Luke's community can donate and such. One more thing, try to add more flow to your text, so it is easier to read. Otherwise, we really enjoyed reading your poster!

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Hello Grace
i liked the colours you put because it's bright and looks good.

I also like the slogan

You also are including things that are a good household items that most people have which makes it easier for us to raise donations.

maybe next time make the text bigger and bolder because although the colour selection for the background is nice it doesn't compliment the yellow text.

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Hi basillina and dylan, we really love how you put a lot of effort into your poster it is really colourful and eye-catching. We love the fonts you chose, the poster stand out. One thing that you could work on are the colours and making sure that they contrast properly. Over all we think that your efforts is outstanding!! Kind regards, Isabela and Erina<3

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Hi Asmin and Isha! We really like how you've captured our attention with that picture of that Christmas cake. We also like how your color selection as it fits the Christmas aesthetic as well as how much information you put in, Great work! Our feedback to you is that you should make the picture a bit smaller so that we could see the information more clearer. We also recommend putting your writing together do that it can be easier to read. Overall, this is a good effort and we appreciate seeing this poster.

Sincerely,

Isaiah A, Declan T and Kanishk

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Hi Luxshne and Arulalan,
Your poster was AMAZING!! Thank you for your creative poster, we loved seeing the different eye-catching colours and clear layout of work. We especially liked the pretty image and the decorative title that you included. We love how you have a clear list of what we can bring and how persuasive your title is. We wish you could have introduced St Vinnies to everyone and explained what St. Vinnies is. We also wish that you introduced the Christmas hamper appeal and included why we should donate. Overall, this poster was very engaging and pretty with your image and title included. Keep up the good work! Thank you again!

From,
Chanel, Krystel and Shama

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Hey Sebastian and Sophia,
Great job with making a Vinnies appeal poster. I like how you used images that related to the products that we have to bring in. I liked how you guys tried to make the poster appealing with the use of Christmas colours for your text. I liked how you made the text short and simple, but try to add more writing about Vinnies and their goal with helping people during Christmas. Also, read through your text again for grammar and punctuation mistakes and also make a balance of the text and images with fixing the font size and colours. But overall, I like the effort you put with making this poster and by improving this, you could make it even more better.

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Fantastic Work Diaz and Eliana , we really like your work. Your design is colourful and captivating due to the multiple bright colours and images. We love the message you used because it's meaningful and describes the purpose of the campaign. Next time, try and add images that connect more with the purpose of your posters and add more text describing what St Vinnies is. although we love you drawing, make it more organised so that it can be clear and neat.
From Shreya, Gul and Mishwa

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I like how you had a specific catchphrase that would be easy to remember, and also simple to recall. The use of rhyming and beat would make your poster very memorable, which would allow students to recollect how your poster called them to donate to their local vinnies, to help those people in need. I also like how the layout of your poster was extremely simple, and easy to read. I was able to understand which class donated what food items, and the reason why we should donate to the cause. Something I think you could improve on was a reason to compell the reader to donate. Something such as, 'By donating, you could help a family in need! Donate today to the Vinnies Organisation!'. Other than that, your poster is good.

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Something I really love about your poster is the rhymes. It's very creative and thats very good. I like how you made it really simple but detailed at the same time so the people can understand what you are trying to tell them. Maybe tell them more why we need to donate and what the importance of donating is but you have done a really good job. Good luck

From Mithran

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Hi Edwina,
This poster is very interesting as it has multiple slides. All the slides have a lot of information and is very aesthetically pleasing to us. We like how you clearly shown what to donate and how you added images. We wish that you tell people why you need to donate rather than telling people what you have to donate. Other than that this poster is very pretty and informative!