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Explain how the economic crisis in Japan contributed to the outbreak of World War II In Asia Pacific.              							          

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Explain how the economic crisis in Japan contributed to the outbreak of World War II In Asia Pacific.              							          

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There were a shortage of land, food and a rapid population growth such as shortage of rice which were worsened by traditional farming methods.The great depression also affected Japan's economy, other countries such as Britain and USA, began to protect their own economies from external imports. Japan was unable to export their products to other countries caused and economic depression in Japan. Therefore it cause economic crisis in Japan which contributed to the outbreak of world war II in Asian Pacific.

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Feedback from group 9: Junyu, Sabrina and Vani

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Feedback from group 9: Junyu, Sabrina and Vani

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answer the question how economic crisis lead to the outbreak of ww2 what u talking about is just economic crisis

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Group Members: Nicholas, Jun Kai and Peik Lim

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Group Members: Nicholas, Jun Kai and Peik Lim

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Explain how the social crisis in Japan contributed to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific. 

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Explain how the social crisis in Japan contributed to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific. 

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Explain how did the rise of militarism in Japan contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific.

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Explain how did the rise of militarism in Japan contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific.

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The political climate in japan was becoming unstable due to the rising militarism. The military powers were trying to gain more power in the government and the nationalist were also fighting for the power. In that period of time, assassinations and coups were carried out. Prime minister Tsuyoshi Inukai was assassinated and the parliamentary rule ended, Martial law was declared. The military then took up major roles in the government under the new minister admiral Makoto Saito.
Militaristic ideas began to drive the governments actions. This was due to japan looking outwards for solutions to their economic and social crises.

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Feedback from Group 2: Nicholas, Jun Kai and Peik Lim

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Feedback from Group 2: Nicholas, Jun Kai and Peik Lim

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u guys did not elaborate about how japan militarism let to the outbreak of world war 2 in asia pacific

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The political climate in japan was becoming unstable due to the rising militarism. The military powers were trying to gain more power in the government and the nationalist were also fighting for the power. In that period of time, assassinations and coups were carried out. Prime minister Tsuyoshi Inukai was assassinated and the parliamentary rule ended, Martial law was declared. The military then took up major roles in the government under the new minister admiral Makoto Saito.
Militaristic ideas began to drive the governments actions. This was due to japan looking outwards for solutions to their economic and social crises by expanding and conquering other lands. Japan invaded other countries and claimed it as their own, to solve their internal problems. This caused the outbreak of world war 2 in asia pacific

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Group Members: Bao Ru, Roshini and Randy

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Group Members: Bao Ru, Roshini and Randy

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Explain how did Japan’s expansionist foreign policy contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific

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Explain how did Japan’s expansionist foreign policy contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific

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Japan's expansionist foreign policy was where Japan wanted to expand and invade other countries as they were running out of resources and land. Japan's aggressive expansionist policy came into conflict with the western powers as japan was liberating the southeast asian colonies from the western countries many saw this as a step towards independence as they were discontented with colonial rule. The countries they chose to invade were under the control of the European countries. Hence, leading to tension and the break out of word war two. Not only that, Japan had to import resources such as oil from other countries, the Great depression led to to several restrictive trading practices which made trading more difficult in achieving raw materials.

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We feel that u can elaborate further on why they were running out of land. also u spelled world wrongly
U also forgot japans policy to make "Asia for asians". And wat type of resources were thye running out and where did they get it.

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Explain how the Mukden incident and the invasion of Manchuria contribute to the outbreak of WWII in Asia Pacific

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Explain how the Mukden incident and the invasion of Manchuria contribute to the outbreak of WWII in Asia Pacific

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The Mukden incident , the appeal of manchuria to Japan led to abundant raw materials, a market for Japan to sell their goods, allowed Japan to defend their interests in Korea and also allowed a good base for future expansions into China.
On 18th September 1931, a bomb exploded near a Japanese- owned railway near Mukden, Japanese army blamed the Chinese nationalist and wanted action to be taken. China refused to acknowledged Machukuo, and criticised Japan for their actions.The League of Nations, which was suppose to stop aggressive countries,failed to stop Japan.Japan could continue their aggressive policy without hindrance.These conflicts also led to World War 2 in the Asia- Pacific.

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Feedback from Group 4: Bao Ru, Roshini and Randy

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Feedback from Group 4: Bao Ru, Roshini and Randy

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We feel that there is a lack of usage of connectors such as 'because' and 'therefore'.They managed to make a connection and explanation on to how the connection as made.

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Explain how the second Sino-Japanese War contribute to the outbreak of WWII in Asia Pacific

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Explain how the second Sino-Japanese War contribute to the outbreak of WWII in Asia Pacific

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The second Sino-Japanese war started by a conflict that broke out when China began a full scale resistance to the expansion of Japanese influence in its territory. The war ,which remained undeclared until December 9, 1941, may be divided into three phases: a period of rapid japanese advance until the end of 1938, a period of virtual stalemate until 1944, and the final period when the allied counterattacks, principally in the Pacific and on Japan's surrender.
For much of the early 20th century, Japan had exercised effective control of Manchuria, Initially through the terms of the twenty-one demands and later through its support of Chinese warlord Zhang Zuolin. However, a serious conflict was developing, and the Chinese in Manchuria were especially restive under the privileges held by the Japanese. Chinese citizens formed the vast majority of the population, and the legal title of the region was held by China. Yet Japan controlled much of south Manchuria through  its railways and its leasehold on the Liaodong Peninsula and in other ways that compromised Chinese sovereignty. Therefore, These conflicts also led to the start of World War 2 in the Asia-Pacific. Also Japan began to look outwards for solutions to their economic and social crises. So they expanded to other countries and militaristic ideas began to drive the government's actions.

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Explain how did the changes in American foreign policy contribute to the outbreak of World War II In Asia Pacific.

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Explain how did the changes in American foreign policy contribute to the outbreak of World War II In Asia Pacific.

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Feedback from Group 5: Darshan and Hafeezur

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Feedback from Group 5: Darshan and Hafeezur

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We feel that ...everything was good and all the information is there except the fact that you forgot to explain how this led to War.How did the league of Nation failed to stop Japan and what did further lead to?

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Explain how did the war in Europe contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific 

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Explain how did the war in Europe contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific 

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The war in Europe provided a distraction of the Western Powers(U.K., U.S., France) from the events in their colonies in the Asia-Pacific. It reduced the Western Powers defences on their colonies, prioritising their firepower and manpower defending or attacking Hitler instead. This provided a perfect opportunity for the Japanese to invade the Asia-Pacific countries without much resistance from the Western Powers.

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We feel that their description can be clearer. I think the part on the 'distractions' could be elaborated more. It would be better if you could elaborate and describe the factor more clearly. There is no explanation as well.These are all factors. You did not link back to the question.

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The changes in American foreign policy is that americas isolationism encouraged the japanese to invade china because they believed that america would not interfere. therefore the america sided with the chinese and saw the importance of stopping aggressive countries. the trade embargo further encouraged japan to occupy more oil rich countries to obtain these resources as japan needed those resources for their war in china.these actions maade america appear as japans enemies.

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We feel that there could more elaboration and the grammar abit the rong.

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Explain how did the attack on Pearl Harbour contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific.

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Explain how did the attack on Pearl Harbour contribute to the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific.

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At first USA was not involve in the war but because America trade embargo and demands for them to stop the war by not supplying resources such as oil. Since the american pacific fleet was docked at pearl harbour, Hideki Tojo who was the new prime minister of Japan planned an attack on pearl harbour so that they can takeover southeast asia successfully and at the same time prevent america from being involved in the war in asia pacific with the successful bombing of pearl harbour , USA declared war on Japan and because of that Japan became more aggressive in her action and began to invade into other asia pacific countries triggering war int that area.Futhermore, Japan's action towards USA eventually brought USA into the war in the asia pacific on the Allies' side

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we feel that they stated the factor and used detailed examples,however they need better connections between factor

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Apart from internal economic problems, Japan also faced problems of overpopulation. As the population grew larger , the demand for housing, goods and products also increased. This problem fed Japan's growing expansionist ambitions, as occupation of more territories meant access to more resources and resettlement of japanese into other countries would resolve their overpopulation problem.For example, many Japanese were resettled in Manchuria to resolve the problem of overpopulation

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The Mukden incident , the appeal of manchuria to Japan led to abundant raw materials, a market for Japan to sell their goods, allowed Japan to defend their interests in Korea and also allowed a good base for future expansions into China.
On 18th September 1931, a bomb exploded near a Japanese- owned railway near Mukden and Japanese army blamed the Chinese nationalist and wanted action to be taken but China refused to acknowledged Machukuo, and criticised Japan for their actions.However, The League of Nations, which was suppose to stop aggressive countries,failed to stop Japan.Moreover, Japan could continue their aggressive policy without hindrance, and so it caused Japan to be more in power and building their army.Therefore,These conflicts also led to World War 2 in the Asia- Pacific.

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Feedback from Group 1: Felicia and Wanxuan

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Feedback from Group 1: Felicia and Wanxuan

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We feel that group 2 made an effort  to address the resettlement of Japanese into other countries to resolve overpopulation and also giving examples. They did not use connectors such as 'therefore' and did not link back to the question.

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There were a shortage of land, food and a rapid population growth such as shortage of rice which were worsened by traditional farming methods. In 1900, Japan's population jumped from 45 million to 64 million in 1930. Rice was Japan's staple food, however the agricultural land was already fully exploited. There were years when Japan did not have enough rice to feed it's people.The great depression also affected Japan's economy, other countries such as Britain and USA began to protect their own economies from external imports. Japan was unable to export their products to other countries and caused economic depression in Japan. Japan began to look outward for solution to their economic and social crisis , such as expanding into other countries and also their militaristic ideas began to drive the governments actions, therefore economic crisis in Japan contributed to the outbreak of world war II in Asian Pacific.

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Apart from internal economic problems, Japan also faced problems of overpopulation. As the population grew larger , the demand for housing, goods and products also increased. This problem fed Japan's growing expansionist ambitions, as occupation of more territories meant access to more resources and resettlement of japanese into other countries would resolve their overpopulation problem.For example, many Japanese were resettled in Manchuria to resolve the problem of overpopulation.which resulted in japan going to war to look outwards for solutions to their economic and social crisis by expanding into other countries.Therefore this encourage japan to begin expanding to solve their internal crisis.

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Japan's expansionist foreign policy was where Japan wanted to expand and invade other countries as they were running out of resources such as land and oil. Japan's aggressive expansionist policy came into conflict with the western powers as japan was liberating the southeast Asian colonies from the western countries many saw this as a step towards independence as they were discontented with colonial rule. Japan promised to create an "Asia for Asians" and remove the European influence from Asia, the countries they chose to invade were under the control of the European countries. Hence, leading to tension and the break out of world war two. Not only that, Japan had to import resources such as oil from other countries, the Great depression led to to several restrictive trading practices which made trading more difficult in achieving raw materials, this shows that they were running out of resources.

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Japan's expansionist foreign policy was where Japan wanted to expand and invade other countries as they were running out of resources such as land and oil. Japan's aggressive expansionist policy came into conflict with the western powers as japan was liberating the southeast Asian colonies from the western countries many saw this as a step towards independence as they were discontented with colonial rule. Japan promised to create an "Asia for Asians" and remove the European influence from Asia, the countries they chose to invade were under the control of the European countries. Hence, leading to tension and the break out of world war two. Not only that, Japan had to import resources such as oil from other countries, the Great depression led to to several restrictive trading practices which made trading more difficult in achieving raw materials, this shows that they were running out of resources.

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Hence the expansionist policy led to the outbreak of world war 2.

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The second Sino-Japanese war started by a conflict that broke out when China began a full scale resistance to the expansion of Japanese influence in its territory. The war ,which remained undeclared until December 9, 1941, may be divided into three phases: a period of rapid japanese advance until the end of 1938, a period of virtual stalemate until 1944, and the final period when the allied counterattacks, principally in the Pacific and on Japan's surrender.Japan began to look outwards for solutions to their economic and social crises.
For much of the early 20th century, Japan had exercised effective control of Manchuria, Initially through the terms of the twenty-one demands and later through its support of Chinese warlord Zhang Zuolin. However, a serious conflict was developing, and the Chinese in Manchuria were especially restive under the privileges held by the Japanese. Chinese citizens formed the vast majority of the population, and the legal title of the region was held by China. Yet Japan controlled much of south Manchuria through  its railways and its leasehold on the Liaodong Peninsula and in other ways that compromised Chinese sovereignty. So they expanded to other countries and militaristic ideas began to drive the government's actions. The League of Nations, which was supposed to stop aggressive countries, failed to stop Japan and They could continue her aggressive policy without hindrance.This caused the Japanese to be more motivated in expanding their country.Therefore, The conflicts stated above led to the start of World War 2 in the Asia-Pacific.

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Europe was pre-occupied with the ongoing war against Hitler.Most of their troops in southeast asia were sent to Europe to aid in the war.This led to a weak defence in Southeast Asia as it was neglected.This provided an opportunity for Japan to invade the defenseless Southeast Asian countries without having to face much resistance.This led to the invasion of Singapore,Malaysia and Indonesia.Therefore, the outbreak of World War II in Asia Pacific was because that Japan never had a problem when invading Southeast Asian countries because Europe was facing its on war against Hitler.

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The first change in americas foreign policy is Americas isolation, this encouraged the Japanese to attack and invade China because they believed that America would not interfere. The Americans then sided with the Chinese after  seeing the importance of stopping aggressive  countries so America begin to provide military support to China. The next American foreign policy changes is that the trade embargo further encouraged japan to occupy more oil rich counties to obtain these resources because Japan needed these resources  for their war effort in China. Therefore, in conclusion, these actions made America appear as one of Japans enemies and this concluded the Japan to attack pearl harbour and this made America to relaliate causeiing ww2 in asia pacific

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At first,USA was not involved in the war but because America trade embargo and demands for them to stop the war by not supplying resources such as oil. Since the american pacific fleet was docked at pearl harbour, Hideki Tojo who was the new prime minister of Japan planned an attack on pearl harbour so that they can takeover southeast asia successfully and at the same time preventing america from being involved in the war in asia pacific with the successful bombing of pearl harbour.USA declared war on Japan. Futhermore Japan became more aggressive in her action and began to invade into other asia pacific countries triggering war int that area.Therefore, Japan's action towards USA eventually brought USA into the war in the asia pacific on the Allies' side