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Second one because it used more imagery

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I liked number two better because of the scenery presented in the answer is really nice and how the rat was considered something sad other than disgusting or horrible to be around.

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I like one bc it eases into it and it gives me feelings when I read the second one I felt nothing. In the first one it’s also the POV that is drawing me I like that we kinda know what she is feeling before.

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i choose #1 because I like the fear. The description doesn't matter to me as long as the story is good.

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This one speaks to me the most. I think that the couple have a problem with communication which was ironic because even though they are together if he feels like she will leave for something like that especially after wanting to settle down with him its almost like you dont know the person at all. And what is a good relationship with no communication. Its ironic that a dove represents love and peace while this couple feels like they are drifting apart.

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i like the second one better because it seems to have more description and sounds way more academic like.

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i like the second one more because it uses more details than the first one and it shows imagery

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i feel like the first one doesn't have as much details as the second one.
it basically paints a picture as you are reading so you can see what is happening and how to story is being told

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I like the second one more because it showed us imagery

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I like #2 because the rat probably had a bad day too. She also adds some imagery.

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the second one is better because it seems like you are apart of the story and it has really good imagery. it kinda feels as if im you are dreaming

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The second one give a more detailed story and overall it's a better story

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second one. i like how it didn't come out of nowhere. There was a slight introduction with "when the sun began to set". The second one felt like I was in the narrator's shoes. It felt like I was experiencing it first hand due to the imagery.

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i think the second one because the details in it really set a mood for the whole thing and made you picture it.

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I like the second one more because it sounds better, has more imagery, and the animal being used actually relates to the speaker. The use of first person POV makes it better too.

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I like the Second one better , mainly because the imagery set the mood. The imagery made me as the reader feel what he was saying. It described the setting . The imagery in this one made it more descriptive then the first one

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dante the second one is better with imagery and its more descriptive

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dante the second one is better with imagery and its more descriptive

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I think number two is better because it used more literary devices.

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i like #2 because it has more of an explanation which connects to imagery.

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i like the second one because it is more detailed

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The second one is better because you can sense and see what she is trying to describe.

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I personally like the first one because I liked the POV it's being written from and the story it shows is very realistic and I'm sure it's happened many times before. Although the lack of identification and how the story had no real beginning makes it less better, but #1 is probably the best.

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I like the second one because it puts more details into setting and description. It also adds to the mood and aura of the scene and how us and characters are feeling at this moment

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I like The second one better because It gave me more imagery

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When the sun began to set, I strode to the subway; I couldn't stand to be stuck in that house with its old smell and the old man and the old dog. All of it was old, which apparently gave everything the right to judge me. Despite his life being a series of mistakes, my dad felt the need to weigh in on my life and dreams - of course they were never enough. How was I supposed to learn to dream when he always kept my reality small? Not to mention that no one seemed to understand me. I needed to get on the sub and get off by the park. I needed to walk and clear my head. When I finally sat down, the melodic strum of the cart moving forward helped my shoulders drop. There was hardly anyone there; it was so quiet I almost let my eyes close. I sat up straight as a shadow flashed across the floor. All the way on the other side of the cart, a rat cowered in the corner. He didn't appear brave or menacing; instead he seemed sad all alone.

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The couple walked down the small street holding hands. They had just finished dinner and were heading home after a long week. The man had a lot on his mind, but he didn't tell his wife that he might lose his job. He didn't know how to tell her that he failed - just like she had always feared. When they started dating, she worried that he was too unreliable and too unrealistic. A white dove rested in the tree - it was random. But he couldn't shake the bad feeling that was coming. He was convinced this woman who he was committed to would leave him as soon as she found out that he couldn't provide for her anymore. She'd tell him he wouldn't be able to support a family, and she desperately wanted to buy a home and have children. Why couldn't she see he was trying? That some things were genuinely out of his control? The hand he held felt cold and the connection felt tenuous - like a breeze could break it apart.