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Look at this puny mortal in front of me. It cowers in fear. What happened to the  Luchd-dìon, the guardians of old? The world is mine for the taking! With a flick of his wrist, the  Ainmhidhean conjured a sword of pure darkfire, but then heard a 'riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing'...
Alban woke , his body drenched in sweat and hit his alarm clock, making the cacophony cease and put on his tunic, grabbed his swordbelt and prepared for a whole new day of training.

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The goldfish hovered in front of me in its glass bowl. Surely, no mere goldfish would dare to stare at me like that-- it should cower in fear at the sight of me! I decided to have an impromptu staring competition with the goldfish.

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What, the cat thought, is this small orange blob in front of me. Is it alive? Can it be eaten? Does this small scaly ball has feelings like a cat?  Most importantly, is it tasty? If I ate the blob, would Mama cat approve? WHAT IS THIS BLOB?

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The little kitten stared at the fish intently. It had been staring at it for hours, wondering whether Mama cat would approve of it eating the fish. Its tail twitching, it tilted its head, wondering if his owners would let it eat the fish.
The kitten could not stand it any longer. It was hungry and needed something to eat. Without hesitation, it stuck its paw in the water, tail flicking vigorously. The fish dodged to the side, missing its claws by an inch.
The kitten lifted its paw out of the water in disappointment. Its belly rumbled loudly. How I wish I could catch fish as well as Mama, it thought sadly. I might as well give up. But Mama cat would be so proud if it caught that fish!
With a piercing yowl, the kitten plunged its claws into the water. It would never give up, not ever.
After a few tries, the kitten purred in pleasure. It had finally gotten hold of the fish! Mama will be so proud, it thought, as it padded away with the fish in its jaws.

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I stared at the golden blob in front of me. Was this all there was in this place? After all the other nice cats I used to play with, now I only have a random shape moving in front of me! Can it even come out of this bowl? What use is it? I might as well go and explore something else...
Wait. I just realised it is a fish! What is a fish doing in this bowl. Maybe it is for me to eat. Yum!

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My heart pounded. We were racing against time in a bid to save this man's life. We only had one hour left to remove the tumour from the patient's brain, and it was not going well. An eerie silence echoed throughout the operating centre as I tried to figure out the precise location of the tumour. My hands worked quickly as time slowly ticked away.

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A high-pitched ringing filled my ears. I blinked my eyes to welcome the bright lights staring down at me as I reached groggily across my  bed to shut off that infernalnoise maker known as the alarm clock. What a nuisance! My body ached as I tried to sit up, the effects  of lack of sleep seeping through my bones as a voice inside me longed for a couple more hours of rest.

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I only have ten minutes left... I thought. Only ten minutes left to save the patient. I have somebody's  life in my hands, so I must make the most out of the time and experience I have. I must keep calm, and not be too nervous, as that may affect how I operate. As the head surgeonfor this operation, I must ensure that a life is not lost just because my team and I are incompetent!

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A high-pitched noise rang in the man's ears which made it clear to him that it was time to get ready for work.  Do I really need to work?  Can't I just resign?  However, him being the sole breadwinner in the family made it even clearer that he had to wake up and get to work.
With that, he reluctantly reached across the bed and shut off the irritating noise

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The cat's luminous green eyes gazed into the clear globe in front of him. He had been like this for hours, head slightly inclined and ears perked.
A whoosh of orange circled around the globe, and the cat continued to study it. A pink tongue darted in and out of his mouth as he followed the orange flutter's movements avidly. Back, forth, back, forth. His tail twitched along to the rhythm.
At this point, the cat's eyes were crossed and the outside world was a blur. His felt his heart beating fast and his tail twitched faster still, his nose pulsing and jowls damp. The orange swirled about. His belly rumbled, and he grew increasingly restless. Would the orange swirl really disappear if he just reached in and ate it, even just a tiny bit?

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A loud, seemingly perpetually ringing noise made it clear to the man that it was time for him to arise. He felt tired. Unprepared to start the day. He reluctantly slammed the machine, putting the incessant ringing noise to an end. He slowly rose up from the comforts of his bed, sighing as he thought of the events that lay ahead for the coming afternoon. Each day was the same, instilling a sense of boredom and pointlessness in him. He found not much point in that daily, never-changing routine of his.

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James felt a drop of sweat fall from his chin. Luck was not on their side. The smallest mistake could result in catastrophe. Gritting his teeth, he wondered what he was going to tell the patient's parents if something went wrong.

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Oh no, this guy only has 10 more minutes to live if I don't get this right Quick, I have to get his heart moving. I felt my heart thumping faster as every second passed. This patient's life was at stake. I tried to calm down, but to no avail.

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I lay on my bed, staring up at the ceiling as the alarm clock rang. Did I really have to get out of bed? Could I not just lay here till nighttime? But today was the day of the examI had to go to school...

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I did not know what to do. Looking at the revolting blob of mass, I felt hopelessly helpless. It has been 12 hours, and the patient's condition has only seemed to worsen. The swelling in his brain does not feel like stopping itself. I wiped the sweat out of my eyes, which were getting blurry from exhaustion. With someone's life in my hands, and one of the weirdest situations I have ever seen, the odds are against me. I know that if were to fail, this would tarnish my reputation as the best brain surgeon around. My heart thumped, as my hands worked frantically, desperately trying to save the man's life.

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My head swam as I attempted to understand the confusing words in the book I held in my hands. I felt like throwing it down and giving up, but I knew that if I did, I would fail the exam, which was taking place the next day. I reluctantly flipped the pages

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Henry stared at the magazine, his eyes widening. This, thought Harry, was definitely the cutest fox he had ever seen.

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A high-pitched sound woke me up from my deep slumber. Must I really have to wake up? I felt tired but I have to go to school. I don't have a choice. How I wish I could just sleep in for the day. I rubbed my eyes, stretched a little bit and reluctantly got out of bed. I slammed the alarm clock, stopping it from ringing.  What a nuisance of an alarm clock!

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Oh no, the teenager thought, " This...is definitely as bad as it can gets". Little did he know, that the ball had just started rolling and things were going to get worse before it hits rock bottom.

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We had no more time to save his man. His time on Earth was definitely the end I thought. This surgery was much harder than I thought and the chance of survival is too low. I knew that as a fact. My heart thumped faster and faster. I knew I had to get this surgery perfect.

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It was there, darting around.  The cat watching it, alert with wonder. What was this? What is it for? Is it delicious? There was only one way to find out.

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Already in high school and yet I still cant't do simple algebra? It is so embarrassing not to know how to do a simple question. When will this day ever end? Thomas thought as he tried but to no avail to concentrate on his reading.

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"Sigh..." I thought, staring blankly at my thick stack of scientific notes. How was I supposed to memorise all this in one day.
I crammed the endless lines of mitosis and meiosis as throngs of people walked pass...

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The teenager's felt feverish, pores streaming with sweat opening on his skin. He thought to himself, "He had to finish this, he had to! Only three more weeks till the exams, yet he was less than halfway through with his revision... His eyes swam as the constant throbbing of his head increased.

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I like the stuff you wrote and think that it is a good way to describe a surgeon's thoughts when he is unable to save a life and has no hope. I think that you could just add a tinge of desperation and copy a bit from Ender's Game: He would have to be brought into space and put him in stasis  to wait while we try to find a cure on Earth... (see: Shadow of the Giant,  by Orson Scott Card for reference

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I like Sean's thoughtshot.
It is very descriptive and captures the main idea of the photo.

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I like Gracie's thoughtshot.
Reason: it is short and easy to understand. I also like the ending of it as it implies that the cat is going to eat the fish without actually saying it.

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I like Hui En's thoughtshot.
Reason: It is descriptive and makes the story feel like the characters are real. It gives it a layer of depth.

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this is because her thoughtshot effectively conveys the cats thoughts about the fish which it cannot  think of what it is

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When you put it in thoughtshots form, it makes the story more interesting and more descriptive as there are more ways to describe that one scene. Good Job

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Hui En, you have a nice long thoughtshot but try to shorten it

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I like Zi Yang's thoughtshot because it was very descriptive and interesting to read.

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Sun Yi's thoughtshot looks good because it is quite long and has various details that make it interesting.

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I like Conan's thoughtshot as it gives both a description of the environment and what the surgeon is thinking and feeling. I also think it fully explains why the surgeon thinks and feels this way.

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I like Ivan's thoughtshot as it expresses the longing of the character and is very descriptive

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I like Tristan's as I find it descriptive and interesting

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I like Tristan's post as it clearly displays the character's fear and annoyance of not being able to complete  or understand his last-minute revisions.

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John's
He said exactly why the person in the picture was very stressed. It is also quite relatable to most students. (I think most students do think like that.)

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I liked Conan's thoughtshot, as it is very descriptive, and is extremely intriguing.

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I also like Conan's thought shot. It creates an eerie feeling and sort of foreshadows something bad happening soon after.

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I liked Sean's thoughtshot as it was descriptive and very well-executed in terms of the man's feelings.

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Megan, your thoughtshot is very interesting, and it displays the feelings and actions of the cute cat, as well as paints the scenario vividly with much description. It's a bit long though.

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I like Sean's thoughtshot as he described what the narrator thought with detail as well as some physical features of the narrator.

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I like John's as it clearly describes the thoughts of the character. He also used good vocabulary to bring out the feelings of the character and make it easier for the readers to understand.

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I like Pranav's thoughtshot.
It puts the reader in suspense, keeping him/her on the edge of his/her seat and also lets the reader understand how hard it is for the doctor in this story, James, to conduct an operation.

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I like Zi Yang's thoughtshot as it is very descriptive and shows the man's feelings in detail. It is also very captivating and makes the reader want to read on.

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I like Hui En's thoughtshot as it has many details in it. The actions are also slowed down and described in more detail. For example, the cat's eyes were green and the tail of the fish was described as "back forth back forth"