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After I ate lunch I have a nap. She finish the homework after the deadline. After the exam everyone looks very dismay. My mom put my lunch on the desk. I sit on the seat and listen to the music. He is lying on the sofa and reading comics. My home is in front of the river. Your book is in front of my phone . There is a big snake passing in front of us.

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1. When I was available, I went shopping with my mom last week. Unfortunately, it was raining.
2. One day, I looked an old women who was walking across the road, so I gave her a favor.
3. I wanna control my life within my hands, since this is my life, I desire to escape other people who control it.

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1.(1) Before this July, I'm still 19 years old.(2) Before i go to bed, i usually brush my teeth. (3) Before i kick the bucket, I want to travel in Maldives.

2 .(1)Now, I'm a student. (2) Now, i'm learning what is preposition. (3) Now, my neighbors are having a fight and it's noisy.

3. (1)After this July, I will go to do the internship in a company. (2) After i win the first prize of lottery, i will able to buy a Ferrari. (3)After finish this class, i will go to bed.

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Today, I have learned about many countries cultures. Teacher also give us play the little game.

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Date:4/10/2021
In class today, we learned the culture about Zimbabwe and some gammer's.

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Today,I have learned about two countries culture.These countries have interesting musical culture.One country love creates music in there work to enhance work effectiveness.But I think there music got a little noisy.

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(Name, Date)

Today, I have learned…

In class today, we learned...

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1. Many people didn't know this color in the ancient. (Ancient what? Ancient civilization? Ancient people? Ancient world? Be as specific as you can) 2. We don't see any food without blue. (The phrasing is a little bit awkward) 3. Butterflies exhibit blue on their wings because of a reflection of light. (Butterflies exhibit blue on their wings "as" a reflection of light. The sentence is technically correct, but a little bit awkward to read) 4. People consider blue as black. (People consider"ed" blue as a shade of black. It's a past thing. People today can tell between shades of blue and black... at least in our culture.) 5. Blue is a rare color. (good sentence)

Many people didn't know this color in the ancient world. We don't see many foods colored blue. Butterflies exhibit blue on their wings only as a reflection of light. Many ancient civilizations considered blue as a shade of black. Blue is a rare color in the natural world.

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Chris:

1. Because the ancient people rarely see “blue” this color. (Great attempt to jumpstart the topic, but it's always a little awkward to start a completely new essay with the word "Because". The word "because", doesn't have much "bite" to it. Usually when starting a writing, people tend to use words that can stand stronger on their own. It's technically not wrong, but it's definitely an improvement to be made.)

2.The blue color was considered as Black. (Blue was considered as a "Shade of" black)

3. Most of the ancient people didn’t know the color. (Most people couldn't recognize the color)

4.Our ancestor can not see recognize blue and green. (Remember from the video, that they could actually see the color, but they would have a harder time recognizing the difference? So the sentence should be: Our ancestors (we have more than one ancestors) had a hard time recognizing the difference between blue and green)

5. Blue color is a color made by people recently along with human improves. (A more professional way to write this would be: Blue is a made up concept as language and civilization improves. Writing blue twice in a row in a short span of words is considered to be a little bit weird. Especially when there are no commas and periods inbetween the phrases yet.)

Correction: The ancient people rarely see the color blue, and actually considered the color to be black. Most people didn't know the color, and many of our ancestors could not recognize blue and green. Blue is a made up concept as language and civilization improves.

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Dear Eric J. Furda C'87 Dean of Admissions

I am sad to gain this result , I really desire to admit this university. But no matter why you rejected me, I still thanks for your information.

Sincerely,
Rola

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Dear Northwestern University

Thank you for your reply. Although this news is very regrettable, I will ask again and continue to work hard. I believe I will have a good result and success pursue my education.

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Dear Harvard college,

Thank you for accept me in the college

I’ll do my best!

Never let you down

Sincerely

Candy

Candy Tsai

09xxxxxxxx

st97305@gmail.com

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Chris Hong, College Acceptance USC 3/29/2021

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Chris Hong, College Acceptance USC 3/29/2021

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Dear Edward Pan,

Thanks to provide me such as a good opportunity to do something for the University of Southern California. This is my honor to study in this University. I will try my best to prove that you will never regret to admitted me. Thanks again and hope you and your family full of wealth and health.

Best wishes,

Chris Hong

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Today, we learned about African culture, I was interested at "music". I feel that the worker do his work with music is really cool. and about languages of Africa, I was so surprised. There are 16 kind of languages.

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In class today, we learned a lot of information about Africa and we learned how Africans ruined their environment.

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When I open my eyes on my bed, my room is dark. So I wake up from my bed and go to open the curtains. As (I was) opening the curtain, the light (went) from dark to light in my room. The sunshine...

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In my opinion, I think allowing citizens to have a gun or more than one gun is necessary. For example, in some big countries like China or the USA, their lands are too big to keep safe by the government, citizens have the right to keep themselves from dangers. However, a bullet can not only save a life, but also can take a life. Governments should take the responsibility to teach people how to use their gun property (properly) and prevent people from use guns to do bad things. So, basically, I am against gun control.

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1.re (review) -
2.pre (prepare) - Pre (before)
3.im(impossible) - im (not)

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unbelievable - Un (not) Beliable
foresee - Fore (future) See
import - (In) Port

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By the end of this course, I hope to speak out English bravely and improve my English skills, including reading ,writing ,and so forth. And passing the TOEFL

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By the end of this course, I hope you all will have had fun learning proficient English

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By the end of this course, I hope I can learn more to talk to other

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Candy:

It’s be regarded as another black. (When we bring out the subject for the first time, we use the actual verb. So for this sentence, you should start with: Blue is often regarded as another shade of black)
Less thing is blue. (It's a little weird to read, this is a very short incomplete phrase. Try writing out longer sentences if you can! There are less blue things in the world. Or maybe: Blue things tend to be harder to find)
A person who can't respectively blue and green. (I'm not quite sure what this sentence means. But I'm guessing that you meant there are people who can't respectively tell the difference between blue and green?)
Blue is uncommon. (Same idea as sentence #2. But it's not awkward to read. Straight to the point.)
It is not named. (It's ok, sounds a little lazy with all these short sentences/phrases.)

Blue is often regarded as another shade of black. (Less thing is blue?) There are not as many blue things in the natural world. (A person who can't respectively blue and green?) Many people couldn't respectively tell the difference between blue and green. Because blue is so uncommon, it is not often named in many cultures.

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By the end of this course, I hope I can improve my English ability a lot, no matter speaking, writing, and so on.

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My goals at the end of this course are to pass the TOFFL, and improve my English skills. Hope one day I can talking with foreigners smoothly