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tourism

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Should we remove any words/phrases/sentences that doesn't make sense?

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I admit it . I hate shopping. In fact, I hate it ever so much I only go shopping for clothes once a year. I wait for the customer sales to start and then go into town to buy all my clothes for the year. I always look for the cheapest bargains rather than the things I like them best. I try  them on and, as long as they fit , I buy them . I don’t bother for keeping the receipt, because I know I won’t go back to the shop if there’s a problem.  I always pay cash , as I don’t want to get a huge credit card bill at the end of the month. And if I would really need some new clothes later during the year, I order them from a mail-order catalogue. It’s much more easier - while you can look through it at home and make your decisions without a shopping assistant hanging around trying to get with you to buy something you don’t want.

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My home town is a small village in the southern Alps of France called Montpasse. In the past days most people were farmers but today people earn their living from tourism and small businesses. Montpasse is being a pretty town with an old castle and wonderful views of the mountains. The sun shines the most days, even in winter when the weather is perfect for skiing. It is a wonderful place how to grow up as a child. There are fields of corn where children can play and beautifully clear streams and rivers just outside the town where do you see fish jumping out of the water. On a hot summer’s day the cool water of those streams and rivers is looking like an oasis. My favorite childhood memories are of such afternoons with my friends. The winter sports are fantastic too and a pair of skis is all you need for hours of fun. I haven’t been back to my village for over a while but all I do is think of home. I can taste the fresh air and feel out the gentle wind. I am living in England often now because of my job. I would love to go home this summer and spend long carefree days by the river. I have not the money; it’s a question of finding the time to get away. I suppose we all miss the place we grew up in and we even want to go back some time.

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Taekwando class, a tournament
accidentally happened
opponent apologise

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went to taekwando
got into a fight
was kicked at my face
I cried

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last year , I went to a taekwondo  competition. During the fight, I was kick by my opponent at my face. There were bruise and I cried. It hurts so bad.

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last year , I went to a taekwondo  competition. During the fight, I was kick by my opponent at my face. There were bruise and I cried. It hurts so bad.

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The wolf tried to trick the pigs so that he could eat them, but he failed because the pigs tricked him.

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The three little pigs set out to build houses of their own.

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The big bad wolf was never seen again, and the pigs lived happily for many years.

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The first two pigs went to live with the third pig in his home made of bricks, which was too strong for the big bad wolf to destroy.

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The wolf fell into the cauldron of boiling water, and the pigs quickly put the top on it.

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The first pig went to live with the second pig, whose home was built of sticks, until the big bad wolf blew it down also.

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The big bad wolf got mad about the pigs tricking him, so he decided to go down the chimney of the pigs’ brick house and eat them for dinner

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The first pig built his house of straw, and the big bad wolf came and blew it down.

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Let's watch this short video of the famous story 'The Three Little Pigs'. Pay attention to the events in the story.
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Take a look at the paragraphs below. Let's try and revise the paragraphs together!

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A Monday afternoon, after school hours

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Essay title: It was the most embarrassing day of my life!

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Essay title: It was the most embarrassing day of my life!

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Using the ideas from our brainstorming session just now, let us complete our own plot diagram!

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Match the events (in yellow boxes) of the story to its suitable plot elements.

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it was a Monday, afternoon
finished class
was on my way home
fell down at school
tripped over a small bench
was very embarrassed
scraped my knee
the students at the scene laughed

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1. Look at the topic.
2. Type as many ideas related to the topic that you can think of.
3. Be quick! I'll only give you 3 minutes.