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1. Read the sample essay attached below.

2. For each segment of the essay, add in TWO words from the vocabulary lists given to you to enhance the content of the essay. Construct a new sentence or sentences that make use of the vocabulary words and post it in the respective segments.

3. You may change the sentence structures in the essay if necessary.

4. Be sure that the vocabulary you used in the essay enhance the development of the story and not distract the readers from the plot.

5. Your sentences should NOT change the content of the essay

6. Please put your FULL NAME at the top of your post

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1. The sun shines brilliantly through the window panes

2. I yawned a lazy yawn and stretched

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Students to practise using words from the vocabulary lists (adverbs, verbs, adjectives) across different categories to enhance the story development of a narrative essay.

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1. <Type in sentence number 1 with vocabulary word 1>

2. <Type in sentence number 2 with vocabulary word 2>

Eg. The afternoon sun was blazing hot, beating down on the scorched basketball court like it had a personal grudge.

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1. Thick dark clouds overcasted the azure blue sky. Thundered roared. It started raining cats and dogs.

2. The sun shined as bright as a diamond. It felt as hot as an microwave.

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1.the mountain erupted with blazing hot fires coming out of the chamber

2.after microwaving the food ,the ceramic insides of the microwave felt like the Dubai desert and fingers were glazed

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1. The room was fully painted black, the dark colour in the room together with no window or lights on, felt like a dark abyss

2. The freezing aircon and the ice the in skating rink, felt like as if we were in a freezer

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The afternoon sun was brilliantly up, beating down on the basketball court

like it had a personal grudge. My shirt clung to my back,like I showered in sweat, and the air felt like it had stopped moving.

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the afternoon sun was blazing hot on the basketball court,my shirt was drenched in sweat and it felt like there was no air around me

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The afternoon sun was up, overwhelming the basketball court like it had a personal grudge. My shirt clung to my back, soaked in sweat, and the air felt like it had frozen in time.

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1)The afternoon scorching sun was up, beating down on the basketball court like it had a personal grudge.

2)That was when Jason came running up to me, huffing and panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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1. “Sorry, man,” I said. “I really can’t. I’m genuinely tired.”

2. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen aimlessly.

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The afternoon glorious sun was up, beating down on the basketball court like it had a personal grudge. My shirt clung to my back, soaked in sweat, the air felt like it had stopped moving.It was the last Friday before the relaxing June holidays, and all I could think about was getting home, turning on the fan, and doing absolutely nothing. That was when Jason came running up to me, panting like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the forth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs felt like pudding. “ It’s so far” I said, melodramatically. I looked at my watch—2.50pm.

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1)The afternoon sun was up, beating down on the basketball court like it had a monstrous grudge on me.

2)that was when Jason came up running to me panting exhaustedly, like he had ran the whole way from the canteen.

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1. The afternoon sun was searing, beating down on the basketball court.

2. My shirt was soaked through with sweat and it felt like there was no air around me.

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The afternoon sun was glazing up, beating down on the basketball court |

Like it had a personal grudge.my shirt drudge to my back, soaked in sweat like I had just showered, and the air felt like it had stop moving

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1.everyone was scrambling for shelter as the volcano erupted vigorously

2.fingers were scorched as I was rushing to pour cold water

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"Bro, I need your help me instantly please?," he said, his face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

"What happened?" | asked worriedly, half-expecting it to be another prank or one of random dares.

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1. The sun shines intensely, casting sharp shadows and creating a noticeable warmth on the skin.

2. My shirt was soaking wet, clung on to my back

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The blistering sun beat down relentlessly. Walking in the scorching sun I sensed something strange

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The next Monday, everything felt oddly strange. Firstly, Jason did not show up for recess, which was weird. He normally joined us for the chicken rice and milo. Where the aroma of the chicken rice filled the air every time. I found out later from a classmates that Jason got into serious trouble with Mr Lim.

He missed the deadline for the Math project and was punished twenty percent off his grade. Worse, his mum had gone to the doctor because she was feeling gloomy and not her usual self—and it turned out to be something serious. That was why he was in such a rush that day.

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It was a scorching hot afternoon and the afternoon sun was shining through the window.

The majestic ball of fire made its entrance.

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1)”what happened”, I asked , half expecting it to be another one of his foolish pranks or one of his random dares.

2)I shook my head, spinelessly avoiding his eyes, “Next time , okay?”

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The sun was shining like a majestic bright yellow lightbulb,that any dark place could be lighten up

It was a extreme scorching hot afternoon,that my whole t-shirt was drenched in sweat

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1. As for 1 unlucky person,he accidentally got scorched by the molten lava from the volcano,as he couldn’t move ands got melted

2. It ws too late, as the fingertips have been burnt into ashes

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"Bro, I need your help-please,'

" he said, his face flushed and his

school bag bouncing against his side.

"What happened?" l asked, half-expecting it to be another annoying prank or one of his random dares.

"I forgot my Math file in class. Mr. Lim's gonna kill me if I don't hand it in before 3 p.m. He's still in school but leaving soon. Can you help me go get it? I need to meet my mum at the clinic-urgent appointment."

I paused. Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs felt like jelly. I looked at my watch—2:50 p.m.

"Sorry, man," I said. "I really can't. I'm super tired."

Jason stared at me, blinking like he could not believe it.

"Just grab the file and pass it to Mr. Lim's staffroom pigeonhole. It's on my desk. Please?"

I shook my head, avoiding his eyes. "Next time, okay?"

He did not say anything. Just nodded sadly, turned, and walked off.

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1. The sun shines brightly through the window panes.

2. I could not think of getting home and turning on the fan and relaxing on the bed.

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1)he was breathing heavily as he had ran the whole way from the canteen

2)turning on the fan,I relax while doing nothing

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1. His face flushed and his school bag rebounding against his side.

2. Half expecting it to be another prank or one of his unpredictable dares.

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1.never go close to a volcano if the lava will erupt soon

2. Always wear gloves before handling scorching items

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1. The exam just ended, my fingers were sore from clutching the pen, my brain felt like air

2. My brain felt like fizzy soda once i saw the first question on the science paper

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The next Monday, everything felt dissimilar.Jason did not show up for recess, which was unnatural. He always joined us for chicken rice

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1.the person melted into ashes due to how hot the molten lava was

2.was immediately sent to the hospital for treatment

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"Bro, I need your help—please," he said anxiously,face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

"What happened?" | asked curiously, half-expecting it to be another prank or one of his random dares.

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My legs were trembling and felt like jelly after the long hours of cca.

“Sorry man, I really can’t, I’m super tired.”I said and I was lying on the floor as my energy was drained.

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1)the next Monday, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess which was bizarre.

2)that was why he was In such a dash that day

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1.the person had a funeral with his family,as his melted ashes has been laid into the ground

2.the fingertips that have been burnt badly could not recover and left a burn mark

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I felt unwell when heard. Not because of the heat or the canteen food, but because I realised I could have assisted. It would have taken me ten minutes.

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The next Monday, everything felt different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was weird. He usually joined us for chicken rice and Milo. I found out later from a classmate that Jason got into serious trouble with Mr. Lim. He missed the deadline for the Math project and was penalised twenty percent off his grade. Worse, his mum had gone to the doctor because she was feeling unwell—and it turned out to be something serious. That was why he was in such a big rush that day.

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1. The next Monday, everyone felt unique

2. It was too late,as the fingertips have been toasted into ashes.

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I shook my head instantly, avoiding his eyes. “Next time, okay?”

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1) I felt horrible when I heard.

2) I just did not want to be bothered.

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1. I felt indisposed when heard.

2. Never go close to a volcano if the lava will detonate soon.

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The next Monday, everything felt weirdly different. Jason did not show up for recess, which was unusually weird. He always joined us for chicken rice

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"Bro, I need your help-please," he said, his face flushed and his school bag bouncing against his side.

1)"What happened?" I questioned, half-expecting it to be another prank or one of his random dares.

2)Our classroom was all the way on the fourth floor, and I had just spent an hour in the blazing sun sweating it out during CCA. My legs felt like jelly.

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1. His face flushed and his school bag, filled with textbooks, notebooks, and various supplies, feels like a burden too heavy to bear, bouncing against his side.

2. Another weird prank or one of his dares.

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1. The person dissolved into ashes due to how hot the molten lava was.

2. Was directly sent to the hospital for treatment.

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Jason did not even hold a grudge. When I finally apologised-really apologised-he just shrugged and said, "It's okay lah." But I know from the back of my head it was not.

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My legs were trembling like jelly.

“Sorry man” I said breathlessly as my energy was all drained.

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”Bro,I need your help-please,”he said while his face was in fear

“What happened?” I asked,predicting it might be another foolish pranks or other idiotic random dares

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I felt horrible and bad when i heard. Not because of the heat feeling as hot as a volcano or the freshly made and delicious canteen food, but because i realised i could have lend a helping helped. It would have taken me ten minutes. I had the energy and did not feel exhausted . I just did not want to be troubled to go all the way back to the forth story to get Jason’s file. I chose myself over a friend who trusted me. I felt horrible.

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The next Monday, everything felt so unfamiliar. Jason did not show up for recess, which was strange.

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Feeling Troubled. I chose myself over a friend who trusted me.

Jason did not hold a strong grudge. When I finally apologised

—really apologised— he just shrugged and said, "It's okay lah."

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I felt extremely sick when I heard. Not because of the heat or the canteen food, but because I realised I could have helped. It would have taken me less than ten minutes. I had the energy. I just did not want to be inconvenienced. I chose myself over a friend who trusted me.

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1) Jason did not hold any ill feelings.

2)when I finally apologised-sincerely apologised-he just shrugged and said,”its okay lah”.

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Jason did not hold a grudge. When i apologised profusely—really apologised—he just shrugged and said, “ It’s okay lah. “ But I knew it was not.”

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I discovered from a friend that Jason was seriously reprimanded from the teacher.

That’s was why he was in such of a hasten that day.

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1)”sorry,man,”I said”I really cannot I am too exhausted

2)Mr Lim is going to send me to detention if I do not hand my homework in before 3pm

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1) Always help a friend in need. You never know what they are going through until is too late.

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1.The next Monday, things were not felt the same. Jason never showed up, which came up to my mind differently.

2. His mother went to the doctor, she was sick.

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1. And I have undoubtedly promised myself that next time, I will not effortlessly walk away.

2. Jason did not hold a grudge. When I finally apologised—really apologised—he just shrugged nonchalantly and said, “It’s okay lah.” But I knew dubiously it was not.

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Ever Since then, I have learned something important: helping someone does not always come at the perfect time. Sometimes, it is when we least feel like it. And that is when it counts the most.

I still remember the heat that day, how the sweat ran down my back, how heavy my bag felt. But more than that, I remember Jason's face-and the silence that followed my refusal.

And I have promised myself that next time, I never ever walk away.

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Since then, I have learned something dominant: helping someone does not always come at the perfect time. Sometimes, it is when we least feel like it. And that is when it counts the most.

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I found out from a friend that Sam has been getting lecture from the form teacher.