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someone new to a country not necessarily beach v city

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someone new to a country not necessarily beach v city

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You big ugly. You too empty. You desert with your nothing nothing nothing. You scorched suntanned. Old too quickly. Acres of suburbs watching the telly. You bore me. Freckle silly children. You nothing much.

With your big sea. Beach beach beach. I´ve seen enough already. You Dumb dirty city with bar stools. You´re ugly. You silly shoppingtown. You copy. You too far everywhere. You laugh at me. When I came this woman gave me a box of biscuits. You try to be friendly but you´re not very friendly.

Ania Walwicz

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The lose of connection and community comes through in the last line

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The lose of connection and community comes through in the last line

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Hard relate as someone who grew up near the beach then moved to the 'big ugly' city

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2nd person perspective writing is always thought provoking

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2nd person perspective writing is always thought provoking

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A distinct voice that makes me think of someone living in an undesirable location. Self conscious

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I'm wondering in the first paragraph who the writer is talking to and about. I thought it might be a metaphor for how they see themself.

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Shifts in location indicate the vastness and differences in peoples' experiences of the Australian landscape and 'way of life'

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Shifts in location indicate the vastness and differences in peoples' experiences of the Australian landscape and 'way of life'

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I'm not sure yet if this describes cityscape or country

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Frustrated repetition of 'beach beach beach' sounds a lot like another 'b' word..

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Frustrated repetition of 'beach beach beach' sounds a lot like another 'b' word..

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The change in tone reveals that this person feels angry and disconnected.

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It feel childlike and playful. The 'you' is powerful in potentially personifying place

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I thought it was about a person until I saw someone else's comment

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evocative discussion of landscape juxtaposes with the harsh, unforgivign personal description

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evocative discussion of landscape juxtaposes with the harsh, unforgivign personal description

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Love this repetition of 'friendly' - use of diacope and epizeuxis create strong voice

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writer seems an outsider, trying to fit in. 

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writer seems an outsider, trying to fit in. 