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Arlo Penton had been a soldier and had fought in a war.

His mind had been damaged by the noise of loud explosions.

So quietNESS and silence was very important to Arlo.

Natalia Freitas. DT11.30

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Arlo had met Maria at the hospital; she was one of the nurses who cared for him. She supported Arlo through tough times and ensured he took the necessary medication to stay calm.

Sadly, Maria passed away due to cancer, and they didn't have any children.

Eulàlia Barrera

DT923

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Miss De Cruz (Eva) was the head of Teckno-Toys. She was 25 years old and was the daughter of Diego De Cruz, the creator of the company. Everything about Eva was businesslike and her goal was to make the company a market leader because she thought it must HAD TO change with the times.

DT923

Maria Campañá

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I hate the snakeS, because they are very dangerous and a lot of them have poison.

I didn´t know that they are completely deaf and they depend on their highly sense of smell.

The snakes lives without noise, and that it´s a very good quality of LIFE live.

Note:

Use the plural with no article to talk in general

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This is the factory where Arlo's works.

This factory made electronic toys for children.

Arlo's is the chief designer of radio-controlled toys for example like cars, aeroplanes.

The Tecno-Toys FACTORY was quite separateD from the place where Arlo's worked and got quality WORK.

Maria Pallicer

9Dt

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Arlo Penton as a young man had been soldier and had fought in a war.

He had problems with different noises and loud SOUNDS after fighting in the war.

Sometimes had forgotten HE FORGOT to take his pills.

Arlo had a job in a company called Techno-Toys, which made electronic toys for children.

Aina Bosch DT11:30

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Arlo had a wife in the past her name was Maria. They met at the hospital, when Arlo was a patient and Maria was his nurse. She always took care about the medication and saved him from madness. Maria was the big suPport in Arlo's life.

But/HOWEVER, the problem was that she had cancer, and at IN the end she passed away. They didn't have children so Arlo only could focus on his job.

Daniel Mallorquín

DT1130

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Arlo was a men of 59 years old, hi HE was of overage height and HAD hair grey

His face taken no a more HAD A troubled look since María (his wife) had died of cáncer.

•After that, His work was his life.

•Arlo couldn’t stand loud noises because inmediately he was STARTED sweating and shaking.

•Arlo was killed by the prisión POISON of Susie his snake. Arlo’s world was finally silent.

Scarleth 9:30 DT

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Arlo and Diego had been in the army during the war and had become friends.

Diego wanted to help Arlo to put his broken mind back together and had promised him that he could HAVE a peaceful place to work.

In return, Arlo was the most greatest designer of electronic control toys at Techno-Toys, Diegos factory.

That is how the friendship WAS born and GREW grow, but the new generation have HAD different values, and money has HAD become more important.

Roman LE

DT11.30

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Arlo can´t bear the noise, because he had fought in the war and this remember REMINDED him OF the explosions. He lives in a house in absolute silence near the factory with a snake. There he works making electronics toys.

When this situation changeS, his order was IS broken and his revenge will be awful, but IN THE END he got WAS ABLE TO restore the silence.

M.Esther Rodríguez

9DT

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Arlo had post traumatic stress because he had been A soldier. So FOR THIS REASON he was a person who felt the noise more than the others. And this induced him to a nervious state MADE HIM EXTRTEMELY NERVOUS and to HE reminded the bad thoughts.

He had taken medication until his wife DIED was death. He had problems in the HIS job/AT WORK and without the pills he couldn’t be calm and he did that. (did what?)

Cristian

DT 11:30

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Use "so" at the beginning of a sentnece, when you are speaking

-Be careful with translated sentences. First find the structures that you knoe, then, adapt your thoughts to it

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Arlo is an interesting and special man. When he was young he was a soldier and he lived terrible explosions. Now, because of that, he hateS the noise. For him IT is very important to live in a quiet area without people, cars or anything that makes noise. The Silence is essential for Arlo.

Isabel Muntané DT11:30

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Arlo Penton is a middle-aged man who was a soldier and fought in the war.

He has been traumatized so he’s a lonely man and he didn’t have HASN'T many friends. His friends ARE were: Diego de la Cruz, Bernie Dimaggio, Chico the gardener and his pet Susie.

Susi 11:30DT

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be carefula and coordinate your tenses: presnet with future/ past with conditional