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Hello everyone! Today, I'll talk about my trip to Sydney, Australia. I came here with my family. I want to see the Opera House and the Harbour Bridge. I'd like to walk across the Harbour Bridge. I'm hoping to eat kangaroo steak. I'm going to eat meat pie. I'm looking forward to eating meat pie. That's all! I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone!

Yesterday, my family and I came to Florida, USA, with my friend.

The weather is sunny and warm.

I want to see the beautiful scenery and go fishing by the sea.

I also want to eat a delicious hamburger.

I’m really looking forward to fishing and having fun here!

Thatis all

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Hellow everyone!

Today ago, my friend and I arrived in Tokyo, Japan.

We are going to visit the Konica Minolta Planetarium and the Sumida Aquarium near Tokyo Skytree.

We will observe constellations in the planetarium.

We wanted to try expensive food in the Sky Restaurant, but we ate ramen and sushi because they looked delicious.

I'm really looking forward to the winter event.

That all thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone!

Three days ago, my friend Jeong Woo and I arrived in Tokyo, Japan.

We are going to visit the Konica Minolta Planetarium and the Sumida Aquarium near Tokyo Skytree.

We will observe constellations in the planetarium.

We wanted to try extensive food in the Sky Restaurant, but we ate ramen and sushi because they looked delicious.

I'm really looking forward to the winter event.

Thank you for listening.

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hello everyone. I'm yeongto.

I came to Tokyo in Japan with my family.

Let me tell you about my travel plans.

I'm going to visit Science Museum and Zoo in Ueno Park, because I like animals and fossils, and then I plan to see animals and fossils.

I'm going to eat pudding. Pudding is my favorite dessert.

I'm looking forward to seeing animals and fossils, because I love them so much and I always enjoy learning about them.

Thar's all, Thank you for listening.

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Hello ereryone! I'm sihyun today l'll take about my trip i traveled to iondon in Uk ​I watched Westminster and Tower Bridge.

I'm going to sing and take lots of pictures.

I want to eat fish and chips. I heard they are the best here!

I'm looking forward to my trip.

That's all. Thank you for listening I hope you enjoyed my trip

Story.

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Hello everyone!

I arrived in Mongolia now

The thig to see here is the Gobi Desert

Horsebac riding and horse racing

The food is traditional Mongolian food

I'm going to the gobi Desert, I'm looking forward to going to the Gobi Desert

Bey

That's all

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Hello everyone,

My name is Jea, and today I’d like to share my travel experience in Canada.

Yesterday my family and I came to Alberta in Canada. We went to Calgary and also visited Banff National Park, and the mountains and the emerald-colored Lake Louise were beautiful.

I’m going to snowboard and eat pizza at Bear Street Tavern. I’m also looking forward to Lake Louise.

I really had an amazing time in Alberta. It was one of the best trips in my life. I learned so much, saw many beautiful places, and created wonderful memories with my family.

Thank you again for listening to my story, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed sharing it with you!

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Hello everyone! Hi I’m Dana. Today l’ll talking about my trip plan to Cairns in Queensland,Australia. I will go there with my dog. First I’m going to go to Great Barrier Reef and see the coral reef and turtles. And I’m going to enjoy snorkeling and scuba diving. It will be fun. After that I’m going to eat meat pie. It will be delicious. So I’m looking forward to going to Great Barrier Reef and eating meat pie. It will be a trip I'll never foget. That’s all.Thank you for listening.I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone. I'm Yeongto.

I came to Tokyo in Japan with my family.

Let me tell you about my travel plans.

I'm going to visit Science Museum and Zoo in Ueno Park, because I like animals and fossils, and then I plan to see animals and fossils.

I'm going to eat pudding. Pudding is my favorite dessert.

I'm looking forward to seeing animals and fossils, because I love them so much and I always enjoy learning about them.

That's all, Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone! Today, I'll taik about my trlp to Italy, Venice.

I came to Venice in Italy with my family. I want to see the Rialto Bridge, and I'm going to ride a gondola and I want to eat tiramisu. It sounds really delicious. I'm looking forward to traveling and would be fun. That's all! Thank you for listening

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Hello,everyone!How are you,I'm good because my trip was funny.Today,I'll talk about my trip to America.I came to Arizona in America, with my family. We visited Grand Canyon.The Grand Canyonis very beautiful.I plan to go hiking, and I am going to see the views.I will eat a hamburger.I'm looking forward to rafting.It will be exciting.Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone

I came to Shizuoka Prefecture in Japan

I'm going to Shiraito Falls

I'll take some photos and go for a walk

I want to eat yakisoba

I'm looking forward to seeing Shiraito Falls

That's all.

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Hello everyone,
My name is Seoyul, and I want to talk about my trip to Spain.

I went to Madrid with my brother. It was my first time visiting Spain, so I was very excited. The weather was nice and sunny, and the city was really beautiful.

We went to the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium. It’s the home of the famous soccer team, Real Madrid. The stadium was so big and cool! I took many pictures and bought a small souvenir there.

We also visited Latino Park. We walked around, enjoyed the view, and even rode a boat. It was very fun and relaxing.

I also tried paella, Spain’s traditional food. It has rice, seafood, and vegetables. It looked colorful and tasted very delicious!

I had a great time in Spain. I learned many new things and made many good memories. I really want to visit again someday.

Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! Hi l'm Ji-hwan Today l'll take about my trip

I arrived in Tokyo l'm going to Disneyland and see the parade

I also rode a scary ride

And l also had Arlene mochi and olaf lcecream so

I'm looking forward to having fun

That's all Thank you for listening l hope you enjoyed my trip story

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Hello everyone!

l'm seoyeon

I come to Moscow in Russia with my family

I'm going to see Saint Basil's Cathedral

I'm going to ride a bike

I'm going to eat bread and drink tea

I'm looking forward to seeing Saint Basil's Cathedral

That's all! Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone! Today,I'll talk about my trip toCappadacia,Turkey
I came here to travel alone.
I'll visit an underground city.
I'm going to take a hot air balloon
And, I will take photos of the sunset view.
I'll also try pottery kebab because I’m definitely going to break the pot and eat it.
I'm really looking forward to traveling alone
because I enjoy the freedom and independence

That's all.

Thank you for listening!

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Hi, I'm Minwoo.
I came to Otorohanga in New Zealand with my mom.
I’m going to visit the Waitomo Caves, because I like sparkling lights.
I’m looking forward to bungee jumping, because I’ve never tried it before.
I also plan to eat lamb, since I really like it.
So, I’m excited about visiting the Waitomo Caves and eating lamb.

That's all! Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! Hi, i'm kyuhwan! Today, i'll taik about my trip. I came to Salisbury in the UK with my friend. We watched Stonehenge and large buildings. I'm going to ride the London Eye. I'm going to try Sunday Roast.This trip is fun, so l want to come again. I'm looking forward to riding the London Eye. That's all. Thank you for listening! I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hi, i'm eunseo I came to Ile-France in France with my friends and we are having a great time I`m going to visit a palace of versailles because i want to see the Hall of Mirrors I enjoy running in the palace of versailles garden,so I’m excited to run there I`m looking forward to visiting the king residence I’m going to try foie gras Thank you for listening

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Hello everyone, I'm Juha. Today, I'll talk about my trip.

I came to Scotland Glasgow in UK with my friend.

I'm going to visit the Kelvingrove Art Gallery and Museum.

I'm going to look at the paintings and see the exhibits.

I will eat haggis, tatties, and neeps — local food here.

I'm looking forward to seeing the beautiful art.

This trip feels very exciting and I feel happy and excited

That's all, Thank you for listening.

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Hello everyone! I'm jenna. Today, I'll talk about my trip

i came to Berlin in Germany with my best friends. I'm getting excited.

We can see the night views, also at East side Gallery, i will see the arts.

I'm going to visit Museum Island to see other art works.

And I will try new foods in Germany. You know, Chicken or a sandwich.

I'm looking forward to see new people in Germany.

That's all. Thank you for listening! I hope you enjoyed my trip story.

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Hello everyone! Today, I'll talk about my trip to Taipei, Taiwan.

I came here with my dog.

I'm going to go to Taipei 101 observatory and look at the view.

The building is very tall, so i can see the whole city from the top.

I'm going to fly a lantern. It's special tradition and I will write my wishes on it.

I'm going to eat Din Tai Fung. I think it's going to be delicious

I'm looking forward to going to Taipei 101 observatory and look at the view

That's all.

Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone! I'm Yerim Today I'll talk about my trip

Yesterday, I came to Tromsø in Norway with my friends.

We visited the Tromsø Bridge, and it was very beautiful. I'm going to ride a horse and go fishing, and the views are so blue, but also very cold.

I want to eat the Horn of Africa Sharing Plate for 2, so I'm very excited.

I also want to see the night view because Tromsø’s night scenery is amazing.

I’m so happy because I'm looking forward to the Northern Lights tour.

That's all Thank you

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Hello everyone! Today I'll talk about my trip.

I came to Easter Island in Chile.

I'm going to tropical diving and it is fun.

I enjoyed taking pictures of the moai.

Easter Island speciaty is pisco sour pisco sour is a little sour.

I'm looking forward to diving.

Thank you for listening!

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Hello everyone!

Today, I'll talk about my trip.

I`m Sydney in Australia with my friend.

I`m going to visit Opera House, so I`m going to watch opera.

I`m going to try snorkeling.

However, I`m scared of the sea.

I plan to eat Lamington.

I think it will taste great.

I`m looking forward to riding the ship.

I’m afraid of getting seasick.

That's all.

Thank you for listening

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Hi Dad,

I am in the USA, in Kansas City, at the Kansas Speedway with Mom and Grandma.

I want to see the attractions that are available.

I’m going to join a Whiskey Ghost Tour and watch a performance.

I also want to eat sushi at a sushi restaurant.

I’m really looking forward to enjoying my time here.

Goodbye Dad, see you soon!

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Hello everyone!

I'm Paris in France with my family. I want to see the Eiffel Tower. I'm going to visit the Palace of Versailles. I’m also excited to cooking class. I am looking forward to eating a baguette and some macarons, and I can’t wait to walk through the beautiful streets of Paris.

That's all! Thank you for listening!

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Hello, jenna

I arrived in Mongolia now

The thig to see here is the Gobi Desert

Horsebac riding and horse racing

The food is traditional Mongolian food

I'm going to the gobi Desert, I'm looking forward to going to the Gobi Desert

Bey

your friend soyoung

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Dear Dad,

I came to Scotland Glasgow in UK with my friend.

I'm going to visit the Kelvingrove Art Gallery and Museum.

I'm going to look at the paintings and see the exhibits.

I will eat haggis, tatties, and neeps — local food here.

I'm looking forward to seeing the beautiful art.

This trip feels very exciting and I feel happy and excited

Love,

Juha

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Hi mom and dad

I'm in Naples with my Sister. The view of the coast of Naples was fantastic!I had fun and explored the Bagnidella Regina Giovanna Also we went scuba diving in the morning, and in the afternoon we tried fishing and we ate lunch at a restaurant called Trattoria Pizzeria Nardones Naples pizza,Ziti pasta, Croquettes and a Steak was delicious

I'm going to go on a cave tour tomorrowI'm looking forward to going on the tour.

Miss you❤

Love,

Siwon

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Hi Sumi,

I'm in Vancouver, Stanley Park of Canada with my friend.

The lake is my favorite place, so I'm going to take some time to enjoy it. I also plan to ride a bike, because I really like biking.

I'm not hungry, but I'm eating a burger.

I'm really looking forward to riding the bike around the park.

Your friend,

Lawon

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좋아요! 아래는 네가 쓴 글을 바탕으로 힌트만 제공하는 피드백이야. 실제 수정은 하지 않을게요. 😊

1) 문법 · 철자 힌트

시제 확인: 첫 문장의 시제가 현재형인데, 도착했음을 말하는 과거 시제가 어울려요. 확인해 보세요.

고유명사 대문자: 도시 이름, 사람 이름, 음식 이름, 랜드마크 이름은 첫 글자를 대문자로 써야 해요. 예: “mongolia” → “Mongolia”.

복수형 확인: "The thing to see"가 맞는지, “things”가 되어야 할지 생각해 보세요.

철자 오류: “HorsebacHorseback”는 오타처럼 보이네요. 단어가 중복되거나 철자가 빠졌을 수 있어요.

I 대문자: 문장 안에 있는 “i'm” → “I'm”으로 바꿔야 해요.

문장 끝 마침표: 문장 끝에 마침표가 빠져 있어요. 문장부호를 확인해 보세요.

인사 표현: “Helld”는 오타 같아요. 어떤 말을 쓰려고 했는지 다시 확인해 보세요. 아마 "Hello"일 수도 있겠네요.

끝 인사: “bey”도 오타처럼 보여요. 어떤 말을 쓰려고 했는지 떠올려 보세요. 아마 "Bye"나 "See you"일 수 있어요.

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작-중간-끝 구조는 간단하게 되어 있어요. 다만, 시작 인사가 인상 깊게 보이진 않아요. “Hello, Jenna” 다음에 한두 문장으로 현재 상황을 자연스럽게 소개하면 좋겠어요. (예: “I just arrived in Mongolia. It’s really beautiful here!”)

중간 부분은 보고/할 것/먹을 것이 간단하게 나열돼 있어요. 조금만 더 설명을 추가하면 글이 풍부해질 수 있어요. 예: “Horseback riding is very popular here.”

끝 부분에 인사와 이름이 있지만, “I hope you’re doing well”이나 “Talk to you soon” 같은 자연스러운 마무리 문장을 넣어보는 것도 좋아요.

3) 표현 힌트 (반복 표현 대체)

“I'm going to” / “I'm looking forward to”가 **같은 장소(Gobi Desert)**에 반복돼 있어요. 한 번은 다른 표현으로 바꿔보는 건 어때요?

대체 표현 예:

“I plan to go to the Gobi Desert.”

“I can’t wait to visit the Gobi Desert.”

“It’ll be exciting to explore the Gobi Desert.”

4) 체크리스트 확인

항목 상태 힌트

나라, 도시, 랜드마크 ✅ 있음 (Mongolia, Gobi Desert) -

볼거리 ✅ 있음 (Gobi Desert) -

할거리 ✅ 있음 (Horseback riding, horse racing) -

먹거리 ✅ 있음 (Traditional Mongolian food) -

“I'm going to” 1회 이상 ✅ 있음 -

“I'm looking forward to” 1회 이상 ✅ 있음 -

and, but, because, so 중 한 개 ❌ 없음 “and”나 “so” 같은 연결어를 한 번 써 보세요. 예: “The food is traditional Mongolian food, and it tastes amazing.”

첫인사, 끝인사, 받는사람, 보내는사람 ✅ 있음 (Hello, Jenna / Your friend Soyoung) 다만, 인사 표현이 자연스럽지 않아요. 오타 주의

필요하면 이 힌트를 바탕으로 네가 다시 쓴 글도 봐줄게! 언제든 붙여줘. 😊

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Hi mom and dad
I'm in Naples with my Sister. The coast of Naples view was fantastic!
I had fun and explored the Bagnidella Regina Giovanna
also We went scuba diving in the morning, and in the afternoon we tried fishing
and were eating lunch Siwon at a restaurant called Trattoria Pizzeria Nardones Naples pizza,Ziti pasta, Croquettes and a Steak was delicious

I'm going to visit cave tour tomorrow
I'm looking forward to tour. Miss you❤
Love,
Siwon

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받는사람: Hi Jiho

여행지 도착: Three days ago, my friend Jeong Woo and I arrived in Tokyo, Japan.

볼거리: We are going to visit the Konica Minolta Planetarium and the Sumida Aquarium near Tokyo Skytree.

할거리: We will observe constellations in the planetarium.

먹거리: We wanted to try extensive food in the Sky Restaurant, but we ate ramen and sushi because they looked delicious.

기대표현: I'm really looking forward to the winter event.

끝인사: Bye, my friend.

보내는 사람: Yeijun

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1) 문법·철자 힌트

시제 확인: "We going to…" 부분은 시제가 빠진 것 같아요. be동사 확인 필요.

철자 확인: "firend" → 철자 점검 필요. "conicaminolta olta plantarium"도 철자가 여러 군데 틀린 듯해요.

문장 구조: "Three days my friend jeong woo i came to tokyo…" → 시간·주어·동사의 순서를 다듬으면 자연스러워져요.

대문자: 도시·나라 이름(Tokyo, Japan)은 항상 대문자로 시작해야 해요.

2) 글 구조 힌트

시작-중간-끝 흐름은 대체로 있어요. (인사 → 여행 설명 → 끝인사)

다만, 여행 도착 문장이 매끄럽지 않아서 시작 부분을 조금 더 명확히 하면 좋아요. (언제, 누구와, 어디에 도착했는지)

중간 부분은 볼거리/할거리/먹거리 모두 언급했지만 연결이 조금 끊어져 보여서, 문장 사이에 and, so, because 같은 연결어를 넣으면 흐름이 더 자연스러워져요.

3) 표현 힌트 (반복 대신 쓸 수 있는 표현)

"look at" 대신 → see / visit / check out

"eat" 대신 → try / have / taste

"desire" 대신 → want / would like / hope to

4) 체크리스트 확인

나라, 도시, 랜드마크: ✅ (Tokyo, Japan, Skytree 있음)

볼거리: ✅ (planetarium, aquarium)

할거리: ✅ (observe constellation)

먹거리: ✅ (ramen, sushi, sky restaurant 언급)

'I'm going to' 1번 이상: ❌ → 문장에 "We going to…"는 있지만 "I'm going to"가 꼭 한 번 필요해요.

'I'm looking forward to' 1번 이상: ❌ → "I, looking forward to winter event"에서 be동사 빠짐. "I'm looking forward to…"로 수정 필요.

and, but, because, so 중 한개 이상: ❌ → 아직 없음. 꼭 하나 추가해야 해요.

첫인사: ✅ (Hi Jiho)

끝인사: ✅ (bye my friend)

받는사람: ✅ (Jiho)

보내는 사람: ✅ (yeiun)

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Dear Mom

I came to Shizuoka Prefecture in Japan

I'm going to Shiraito Falls

I'll take some photos and go for a walk

I want to eat yakisoba

I'm looking forward to seeing Shiraito Falls

your daughter

Subin

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✅ 1) 문법·철자 힌트
• 문장 시작은 대문자:
→ "the coast of Naples view..." → The로 시작해야 해요.
• 전치사 확인:
→ "I'm Naples in Italy..." → "I'm in Naples"처럼 장소 앞에는 in이 필요해요.
→ "lunch at Trattoria Pizzeria Nardones of a restaurant" → at a restaurant called Trattoria Pizzeria Nardones처럼 자연스럽게 바꿀 수 있어요.
• 시제 통일:
→ "I enjoyed and expiored..." 과거형 좋았어요!
→ 그런데 이어지는 "I do scuba diving..."은 현재형이라 시제가 맞지 않아요. 과거형(do → did)으로 바꿔야 자연스러워요.
→ "we're eating lunch..."도 마찬가지로 과거형(were eating) 또는 완료형(have eaten)을 써야 앞 문장과 시제가 맞아요.
• 단어 철자:
• Italy (지금은 "Ltaly"라고 오타 있음)
• explored ("expiored"는 오타)
• forward to (띄어쓰기 필요: "forwardto" → "forward to")

✅ 2) 글 구조 힌트 (시작-중간-끝)
• 시작:
→ "Dear mom and dad" 인사 좋고, 장소 소개도 괜찮아요.
→ 하지만 "I'm Naples"는 도시 이름이 사람처럼 들려요. "I'm in Naples"가 더 정확해요.
• 중간:
→ 활동, 음식, 장소가 잘 나와 있어요!
→ 다만 너무 한 문장에 너무 많은 내용이 들어 있어요. 문장을 2~3개로 나눠보는 연습을 해보세요.
→ 그리고 "also / and / and" 식으로 반복되는 연결은, 다양한 접속사(so, because, then)로 바꾸면 더 좋아요.
• 끝:
→ "I'm looking forward to tour" 문장에서 tour는 명사로 쓰였지만 어색해요. 예: "the next tour", "the rest of the trip"처럼 구체적으로 써보세요.
→ "Miss you ❤ Love Siwon" → 좋아요! 하지만 'I'm going to' 문장이 하나 들어가야 해요.

✅ 3) 표현 힌트 (반복 표현, 자연스러운 표현)
• "also / and / and" 자주 쓰였어요 → 다른 표현으로 바꿔보세요:
• Then
• After that
• Later
• "great", "fantastic"도 감탄 표현이 반복돼요 → 다른 감탄 표현:
• delicious (음식에 사용)
• wonderful
• incredible
✅ 4) 체크리스트 확인
항목포함 여부힌트

✅ 나라O"Italy" (오타만 수정)

✅ 도시O"Naples"

✅ 랜드마크O"Bagnidella Regina Giovanna"

✅ 볼거리O해안 경치

✅ 할거리Oscuba diving, fishing, white water rodeo

✅ 먹거리ONeapolitan pizza, Ziti pasta, Croquette, Steak

❌ 'I'm going to'X→ "I'm going to visit another museum tomorrow." 같은 문장 하나 추가하세요

✅ 'I'm looking forward to'O→ 띄어쓰기만 고치면 됨: "forwardto" → "forward to"

✅ and, but, because, so 중 한 개O"and"만 사용됨 → "because"나 "so"도 하나 넣어보면 더 좋아요

✅ 첫인사O"Dear mom and dad"

✅ 끝인사O"Miss you ❤ Love Siwon"

✅ 받는사람O"mom and dad"

✅ 보내는 사람O"Siwon"
🔍 마무리 힌트 요약
• 시제(과거 vs 현재), 전치사, 띄어쓰기 주의
• "I'm in Naples"처럼 자연스러운 장소 표현 쓰기
• 문장 너무 길지 않게 끊어서 쓰기
• "I'm going to" 문장 꼭 하나 추가하기
• 다양한 접속사와 감탄 표현 시도하기
필요하면 위 힌트에 맞춰 예문도 만들어드릴 수 있어요. 원하시면 말씀해 주세요!

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안사말 받는사람: Hi Jiho

여행지 도착했다는 표현:Three days my firend jeong woo i came to tokyo in Japan.

볼거리:We going to look at conicaminolta olta plantarium and sumida Aquanium side tokoskytree.

할거리: We observe constell ation conicaminolta planetarium.

먹거리: We desire all food in sky restaurant but we eat Ramen and sushi.

기대표현: I, looking forward to winter event.

끝인사: bye my firend

보내는 사람: yeiun

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Helld, jenna

I arrived in Mongolianow

The thig to see here is the Gobi Desert

HorsebacHorseback riding and horse racing

The food is traditional Mongolian food

i'm going to the gobi Desert, i'm looking forward to going to the Gobi Desert

bey

your friend soyoung

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Dear mom and dad
I'm Naples in Ltaly with my Sister. the coast of Naples view was fantastic!
I enjoyed and expiored the Bagnidella Regina Giovanna
also I do scuba diving, fishing and white water rodeo
and we're eating lunch at Trattoria Pizzeria Nardones of a restaurant, Neapolitan pizza,Ziti pasta, Croquette and Steak was great
I'm looking forwardto tour. Miss you❤
Love
Siwon

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Hi min

I came to Moscow in Russia with my family.

I'm going to see Saint Basil's Cathedral

I'm going to ride a bike

I'm going to eat bread and drink tea

I'm looking forward to seeing Saint Basil's Cathedral

your friend,

seoyeon

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Dear mom

I came to Easter Island in Chile.

I'm going to tropical diving and it is fun.

I enjoyed taking pictures of the moai.

Easter Island speciaty is pisco sour pisco sour is a little sour.

I'm looking forward to diving.

love,

Yul

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Hi, my best friend,

I’m in Paris with my family. I want to see the Eiffel Tower and visit the Palace of Versailles. I’m also excited to try baking cookies. I am looking forward to eating a baguette and some macarons, and I can’t wait to walk through the beautiful streets of Paris.

Your friend,

Mingun

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Hi Mom,

Yesterday, I came to Tromsø in Norway with my friends.

We visited the Tromsø Bridge, and it was very beautiful. I'm going to ride a horse and go fishing, and the views are so blue, but also very cold.

I want to eat the Horn of Africa Sharing Plate for 2, so I'm very excited.

I also want to see the night view because Tromsø’s night scenery is amazing.

I’m so happy because I'm looking forward to the Northern Lights tour.

See you soon,

Yerim

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Hello Sumi,

I came to Madrid in Spain with my brother. I'm going to go to Santiago Bernabéu Stadium, and I also plan to walk in Latino Park and ride a boat. I want to eat Spain’s traditional food, paella, because it looks delicious. I'm looking forward to going to Spain and having a great time.

Good bye, Seoyul

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Hi minseo

I came to Ile-France in France with my friends and we are having a great time

I`m going to visit a palace of versailles because I want to see the Hall of Mirrors

I enjoy running in the palace of versailles garden,so I’m excited to run there

I`m looking forward to visiting the king residence

I’m going to try foie gras

LOVE,

eunseo

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Hi Lucy,

I came to Sydney in Australia with my family.

I want to see the Opera House and

the Harbour Bridge

I'd like to walk across the Harbour Bridge.

I'm hoping to eat Kangaroo steak.

I'm going to eat meat-pie.

I'm looking forward to eating meat pie.

Your best friend,

eugene.

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인사말,받는사람:Hello sumi

여행지에 도착했다는표현:I came to Madrid in Spain withmy bro

볼거리:Im going to go to Santigo Bernabeu Stadium visit will be

할거리:Latino park with go walk gwa boat a ride

먹거리:Spain traditionfood Paella eat

기대표현:Im looking forward to going Spain

끝인사:good bye

보내는사람:seoyul

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좋습니다! 요청하신 방식으로 힌트 드릴게

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좋습니다! 요청하신 방식으로 힌트 드릴게요. 😊

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### 1) 문법·철자 힌트

* **대문자**: 문장의 첫 글자, 나라/도시 이름(예: *Hi*, *I*, *USA*, *Florida*)는 항상 대문자로 써야 해요.

* **시제 확인**: “came to Florida”처럼 과거 시제를 썼으면, 이어지는 부분도 시제를 맞추는 게 좋아요.

* **철자**:

* *scener* → scenery (풍경)

* *play fishing* → 보통은 “go fishing”이라고 해요.

* *I m* → I’m

* *lookig* → looking

* *tto* → to

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### 2) 글 구조 힌트

* **시작**: 인사 (*Hi, …*)는 잘 했어요.

* **중간**: 여행 온 장소, 하고 싶은 활동, 먹고 싶은 음식이 들어있어요. 좋습니다.

* **끝맺음**: “Your friend, zhenglongxi”라고 했는데, 받는 사람 이름도 맨 앞에 썼으니 잘 되어 있어요.

* **부족한 점**: “볼거리(seeing something famous like a landmark)” 부분이 빠져 있어요. (예: Disney World, beach, or famous building)

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### 3) 표현 반복 힌트

* “I want to …”가 2번 나왔는데, 다양하게 바꿀 수 있어요:

* “I’d like to …”

* “I hope to …”

* “I’m excited to …”

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### 4) 체크리스트

* [✔] 나라: USA

* [✔] 도시: Florida

* [✘] 랜드마크: 없음 → **추가하세요** (예: Disney World, Miami Beach, Universal Studios 등)

* [✘] 볼거리: 없음 → **추가하세요** (예: ocean, beach, theme park 등)

* [✔] 할거리: fishing

* [✔] 먹거리: hamburger

* [✘] I'm going to → 없음 → **추가하세요**

* [✔] I'm looking forward to → 있음 (“I m lookig forward tto fishing”)

* [✘] and, but, because, so → 없음 → **추가하세요**

* [✔] 첫인사 → 있음 (*Hi, …*)

* [✔] 끝인사 → 있음 (*Your friend …*)

* [✔] 받는사람 → 있음 (*Iminghan*)

* [✔] 보내는사람 → 있음 (*zhenglongxi*)

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👉 정리하면, **랜드마크, 볼거리, “I’m going to”, 접속사(and/but/because/so)**를 한두 군데 추가하면 더 완벽해져요.

원하시면 제가 빠진 부분을 넣어서 **예시 문장**만 만들어 드릴까요?

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Hi minseo I came to Ile-France in France with my friends and we are having a great time Im going to visit a palace of versailles because i want to see the Hall of Mirror I enjoy running in the palace of versailles garden,so I’m excited to run it there Im looking forward to visiting the king residence I’m going to try foie gras love, eunseo

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hI,Iminghan

Yesterday,my family and i cameto Florida in USA with my friend.i want to see the beautiful scenery.i like go fishing.i want to eat hamburger.I m looking forward to fishing your friend

zhenglongxi

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Hi Yeongto,
I came to Otorohanga in New Zealand with my mom.
I’m going to visit the Waitomo Caves, because I like sparkling lights.
I’m looking forward to bungee jumping, because I’ve never tried it before.
I also plan to eat lamb, since I really like it.
So, I’m excited about visiting the Waitomo Caves and eating lamb.

Your friend,
Minwoo

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