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I liked your short and specific title.
Your use of text evidence supported your argument and you used the parenthetical citations perfectly.

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good job Grace!
1. i really like your text evidance
2. your reasons were good.

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I think you did a good job making it clear what you three reasons are.

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Grace,
You did a really nice job stating your 3 reasons, and then adding even more detail to the paragraphs.

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Grace,
You did good giving reasons then adding good detail to your argument essay.

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I think that grace did really well she had a loud voice so we could all hear and I just really liked her body paragraphs.

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round of applause 10\10

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I liked how the resons were clear

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I really liked the acknowledging the other side paragraph and i think you did good linking that back to why he should quit.

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That's good Grace
you gave three reasons and you did Amazing!!!

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grace i really liked how you proved your point and you put hard effort in to it and i really liked it

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Grace you did a great

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Nice job i really liked it she did good editing and it wasnt short like mine

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I liked how you used a lot of text evidence.

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Nice job grace

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I really like your reasons, and how you used your own words

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i like the details i give it a 10/10

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I really like the words and the reason she used!

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I liked how you had many reasons for the other side of the argument.

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I liked it you did good and did it well and it wasnt short like mines

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Dima,
You were reading pretty fast so it was a little hard to understand, I think you should work on fluency, and practice on reading at one pace for the entire piece of text your reading. I heard descriptive words in your writing, and they sound like you used them correctly, and in the end your sentences sounded neat and clear.

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Dima,
I enjoyed your introduction. You did a very good job giving text evidence and using parenthetical citations. When you talked about the other side of the issue it showed that you could see their side with out agreeing. That is a great skill.

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Dima it was hard to hear you if you would talk a little louder

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Good job Dima!
1. good transitions
2. stayed on topic
3. didnt mess up
4.good lengh of the essay
5. great conclusion

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I liked the story I liked the intro

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I liked the words that you chose to use.

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i really like it it was very good

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Dima,
It was nice text evidence that was being stated in your paragraphs.

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i like the info that you put for the reason i give it a 9.5/10

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I like how you persevered through even when you made a couple of mistakes.

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I liked the transitions that you used that made the essay flow better, I also liked that you gave text evidence even for the other side.

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you did good feedback 10\10

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Dima you were awesome

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I really like your reasons why he should stick with the saxophone

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you gave good feedback

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Great job Dima!
You did AMAZING with the feedback and your reasoning!

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Good job Dima, your story was really good i like your intro.

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I think that how he said his three reasons was good.

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you did a good job

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I thought it was okay i do agree tho about the money cause could have been a lot

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Trevon,
Your sentences that made up your body paragraphs were detailed, which made the paragraphs sound neat and clear.

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Trevon, I liked the way you introduced Alex and his situation. It was very clear and easy to follow!

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I really liked his 3 reasons.

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I liked your reasons for why he should and shouldn't quit.

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good job Tevon! you did good and you stated reasons to why he should and should not quit

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Well Done

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i like that he explained both sides.

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trevon good job

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Trevon you were super awesome

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You did a good job

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You wrote a really good essay

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You did a really good job on your story .

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Peyton,
Your transition words were used correctly, and made the paragraph sound clearer and more detailed. The final sentence of your conclusion sounded detailed and kind of like you are actually in a debate.

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Peyton,
1. you gave three reasons
2. You gave text evidence
You are a good writer

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good job, you did well on:
having why Alex should quit and should not quit you had great reasons and good transition words and i feel like you could work on being louder and feel more confident but over all it was really good.

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Good job peyton you gave a lot of good reasons and how you explained it well good job P.S.

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I liked his word choices, it made the story even better.

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You did a great job introducing 13 year old alex and his situation.
Your written transitions were very smooth and they helped to keep the paper organized and engaging. You also had strong examples and excellent text evidence.

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good job

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I liked your introduction paragraph and your reasons. I also like some of the words that you used.

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alot of information good details i give it a 11/10

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i liked that you said in some situations you should quit in your conclusion and in one of your body paragraphs.

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You did a good job

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Peyton,
This argument essay was amazing, outstanding reasons and very good details stated.

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sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh

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Good job you gave specific details

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delanie, your essay is great you are confident in your essay and fast but not slow and you say it clearly and you have more fancy words then other words and you could be a real writer to write a book because of your reasons and you persuade me for Alex to quit the saxophone your essay was professional   and you put why Alex should and should not quit. good job!

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it is good it was a long story and that meant there was a lot of details and that is good i liked all the details you gave good job

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I think you did a good job making your voice loud and clear. I think it was good how you introduced the three reasons and when you addressed the other side.

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Nice job!!!!!

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Great job!!

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I like how you had quotes and I also liked how you used different words. I think you did a good job on speaking loud and clear.

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I like that you were very detailed and the details weren't boring at all like for example the quote

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I really liked your essay i think everything is very well explained you were a little fast, but it was reaaly good, great gob!

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DR.
The quote you started with was a very effective hook. Also all of your points were well stated and then backed up with additional information. Well done!

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goodjob it was really good a lot of good reasons and it was long good job

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I really like how detailed it is

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Everything was done right in this argument essay.

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I like how you said the words loud and clear.

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Your story was amazing.

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Delanie you were super duper awesome

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you did a really good job explaining what could happen if he quit or did not

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very nice

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good job.

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nice work

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great work

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awesome work