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I would want people to be sure that I am using correct puncuation

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I would want people to be sure that I am using correct puncuation

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-- Lizzy

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I would want people to make sure that I have some good explanations 

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I would want people to make sure that I have some good explanations 

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-- Lizzy

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I would like it if someone would say something I could work on like grammar

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George: It would be helpful someone could tell me if you need a comma or if i have incorrect grammar 

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George: It would be helpful someone could tell me if you need a comma or if i have incorrect grammar 

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-jason bourne

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I would be helpful and say any mistakes and if the story makes sence

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I would be helpful and say any mistakes and if the story makes sence

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I would like to hear what they didn't like about my paper and how I could change it.

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I would like to hear what they didn't like about my paper and how I could change it.

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Anyhting helpful :)

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I would want someone to be honest and not just say it was great when you know its not. I am not a little child

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I would want someone to be honest and not just say it was great when you know its not. I am not a little child

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-- Lizzy

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It would be helpful because they could tell you what you did wrong and tell you things you could add in your narrative.
Wally

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I would want to here their opinion on my piece and see what they would suggest.

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I would want someone to tell me if any of my grammar is incorrect.

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I would want someone to tell me if any of my grammar is incorrect.

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It would be helpful to know if I should add something or get rid of something.

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Helpful tips

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It would be helpful if they would tell you what you need to work on.

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It would be helpful if they would tell you what you need to work on.

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It would be helpful if they tell me mistakes, ways to make my narrative sound better, and tell me how to make the reader want to continue reading.

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It would be helpful if they tell me mistakes, ways to make my narrative sound better, and tell me how to make the reader want to continue reading.

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it would be helpful if someone pointed out the parts that don't make sense

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It would be helpful if a part doesn't
make sense or a better word choice could be used

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I would like them to give me corrections on how to add more detail

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I would like them to give me corrections on how to add more detail

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--grace

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I would like them to tell me my mistakes or if a part in my story doesn't sound right. Also if I could have used better word choice.

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I would like them to tell me my mistakes or if a part in my story doesn't sound right. Also if I could have used better word choice.

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It would be helpful to know if part of my narrative doesn't make sense.