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🖋Writing Poetry Workshop # 2, Original Poem + Analyze a Poem   

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🖋Writing Poetry Workshop # 2, Original Poem + Analyze a Poem   

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Shall I go to the eye of the storm?

Shall I go to the eye of the storm?

When the sky is blue, and the water is still, a storm can still brew in the skys.

I sail these waters, and survive on this ship.

Most of my days are calm, but on this day  I see something approaching.

The beautiful white clouds became a dark hellish color.

The ocean's water is no longer calm, but rather they are treacherous and deadly…

The boat began to sway side to side, and my movement became unstable.

Water began to enter the ship, I frantically scooped the water out the boat.

But my efforts were in vain, I slowly  raised my head, I looked ahead, and realized this.

The worst was yet to come, for the eye of the storm was straight ahead.

I tried to pull away, but it was far too late, I was already being dragged into the center.

Shall I face the deadly storm?

Or shall I try to escape my fate?

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Sonnet 69:Those Parts of  Thee That The World's Eye Both View. By William Shakespeare. 

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Sonnet 69:Those Parts of  Thee That The World's Eye Both View. By William Shakespeare. 

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Those parts of thee that the world’s eye doth view

Want nothing that the thought of hearts can mend;

All tongues, the voice of souls, give thee that due,

Uttering bare truth, even so as foes commend.

Thy outward thus with outward praise is crown’d;

But those same tongues, that give thee so thine own,

In other accents do this praise confound

By seeing farther than the eye hath shown.

They look into the beauty of thy mind,

And that in guess they measure by thy deeds;

Then, churls, their thoughts, although their eyes were kind,

To thy fair flower add the rank smell of weeds:

But why thy odour matcheth not thy show,

The soil is this, that thou dost common grow.

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Sonnet 69:Those Parts of  Thee That The World's Eye Both View. By William Shakespeare. 

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Sonnet 69:Those Parts of  Thee That The World's Eye Both View. By William Shakespeare. 

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Modern version: Those parts of you that the world can see leave nothing to be desired. Everyone says so, granting you that without reservation. They’re only speaking the obvious truth – even your enemies agree. And so, your outward self is rewarded with public praise. But those very people who give that well deserved praise to your beauty change their tune when they look beyond the superficial. They examine the beauty of your mind and gain insight by taking note of your deeds. Then, although they’ve been kind about the beautiful fragrance of your looks, they churlishly insist on the rank smell of the weeds of your actions. So if your deeds don’t match your looks, this is the reason: that you’re surrounding yourself with common companions.

Analyzing: Sonnet 69, the main theme was of one's own self , and how others view you. Specifically the parts of you that are not so desirable, but those parts of you are able to be seen by all. Even your enemies agree with that statement, and people only reward your outward self. But those people who reward/praise you can and will change their attitude/ way of looking at you. They will look at the true you, they will look at your mind, and all the good actions you have taken. But there's one problem, if your actions do not match what you portray, then they will discover your disgusting lies. So if one's actions do not match their outward appearance, then they will surround themselves with people that are like them. People that are liars about how they act, and how they portray themselves.

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My Favorite Poem: Fire and Ice by Robert Frost 

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My Favorite Poem: Fire and Ice by Robert Frost 

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This poem may have had very few words, but those few words had a large impact. The main point of this poem is fire and ice. Now what does that even mean? To understand the poem, we have to understand what fire and ice mean on a deeper level. Fire, it’s a element that is abundant in our world and it has many qualities. For one, fire can bring pain, but it can help life, cause without, life as a whole would not exist. So better said, fire can bring life, but it can also bring death and harm to those who indulge it. Ice is the other main point of this poem, ice is slow,beautiful, and calm. But at the same time it’s deadly, the slowness is the worst part of it, ice brings death, by stopping all life, but in such a way that is gut-wrenching. Near the end of this poem, Robert Frost uses the word “destruction,” which leads me to believe that the words, fire and ice are used to explain the destruction of the world. I say the world because in the first line he says, “Some say the world will end in fire.”  When he uses the word fire I think of the bible, and how it’s said that the world shall end in flames. Not to make it religious, but  see some similarities between how he uses fire, and the way that it’s used. As well the uses of the word fire would mean that in this post-apocalyptic scenario the world would end fast, and very in a very painful way. Before Robert Frost uses the word ice he says this, “But if it had to perish twice.” This implies that ice would come after fire had ravaged the world, and when it was on the brink of the end of things then ice would come. Ice would go against fire, it would slow it down, but with that comes many forms of suffering. How I see it, since ice is slow, then ice would make the suffering of the word slow and pain full. To revise it in a better way this is the message that Robert Frost poem, Fire and Ice gave. First fire destroys the world, this can be seen in many ways, but the simplest way is that the fire would be painful and fast. Because those are the attributes of fire itself. Then after that before the world ended, Ice would come, and that too would bring pain and suffering. It would be slow and pain full, because those are the attributes of ice. But in both cases the outcome would be the same, and that would be the end of the world.

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I woke up to the warm sun touching my face, I could hear the birds sing their beautiful music. My mother soon woke up as well, she had told me the week before that she had a small job and she wanted my help. "Mom what's the job that would like me to help you?" "Well Hugo we have to go feed some dogs that someone asked me to take care of. We have to go every day to the owner's house, we have to walk and feed the dogs, I know you're good with dogs so you will be very helpful." Over the week my mother and I took care of two dogs, a small shy dog who was named Milom, and another that was outgoing and loved people by the name of Camila. Over my Spring Break I took care of these dogs, this was really the only activity that I did over Spring Break. Two other activitys I did over Spring Break was playing video games with some of my friends and finishing my homework for Mrs.Morales class.

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My take: The thing took most from this story was the lesson that someone's story is made up of many stories. And no one story can encapsulate, nor can it represent all of the person who wrote it. And it can not show the writer culture, childhood, friends, etc. But rather it only shows a small piece of the person

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My Favorite Poem: Fire and Ice by Robert Frost 

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My Favorite Poem: Fire and Ice by Robert Frost 

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Some say the world will end in fire,

Some say in ice.

From what I’ve tasted of desire

I hold with those who favor fire.

But if it had to perish twice,

I think I know enough of hate

To say that for destruction ice

Is also great

And would suffice.