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As you where presenting you where open and respectful when showing us your website. Your letter was amazing as well as your petition.

Something you should work on for next time is to possibly make palm cards because when presenting you ere lost of words.

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Wow! You had amazing facts and really strong points! I can see the effort you have put into this. You had a great vocabulary, used great words. You had very interesting photos and you explained quite well. Well done!

Something you could work on, you stumbled a bit and hesitated as if you were stuck. But you seemed really passionate and overall it was really well done!

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Mikayla, I really liked your webstite and topic as I can see you have put a lot of effort. You have used many different descriptive words and you seem to be very passionate about this cause. Good job!!

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Amazing work Mikayla, I also agree that sport can be very beneficial to everyone and we should have to do at least one sport each year. You have a lot of passion on this topic but maybe you could’ve added a reason why you chose those photos in your photo essay. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your website.

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This is an amazing website Mikayla. I especially love your infographic and photo essay.

Amritha :)

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Hi Mikayla, my name’s Grace Likely. I LOVE your website especially the poster on the benefits of sport. I agree that sport should be compulsory for everyone at mlc.

I have a few questions though.
My first question is: why you chose to do your website on the benefits of sport?
My next question is: what is your favourite sport?

Thanks

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Hi Mikayla. I have a question for you. What makes you so passionate about sport, and why did you choose the topic?

-Maddy

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Wow Mikayla, You have such great ideas! You had a lovely website.
-LUCIA

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Great information and ideas, I think you website was displayed well!
Sophia A

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I think your website was really good and I liked the amount of information you had. I also like that you explained your solution really well. I think some feedback is to remember more of your website so you are not just reading of the page.
By Nectaria

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Love the work that you have done so far Mikalyla. You have worked very well independently to produce a great product.

Essay: I think you need more of a range of photos in your photo essay. The photos are similar in that they tell the same story. Perhaps it would be good to show what it would look like, or what could happen, if no-one did sport. You might show people who are overweight or eating bad food or looking depressed. Your photos need to tell the whole narrative of the problem.

Minor thing too, is to think about changing the colour of the words 'Information etc' on that page as it gets lots with the background image. Maybe make it black? Same with the bibliography page, the title is almost invisible!

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I really liked how you are so passionate about making sports mandatory at MLC.I think the students here would really benefit form this change.
Riya Singh

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Love the website Mikayla, great idea.
Chelsea Sumich

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nice!