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Just read your paper out loud you'll hear the mistakes

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Ask a friend to read your paper

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don't worry about being perfect because that isn't going to help. focus on getting other perspectives if you feel lost. use your resources like the teacher, a friend, the writing center, someone will always be willing to help

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It's okay if your paper sucks, no one is a perfect writer on their first try. Just keep coming back to it with fresh new ideas.

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Have someone else review it. Or go to the writing center! Remember you all have to go at least once!!

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Look at it from different perspectives

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dont be afraid to take a break and come back with fresh eyes. Maybe watch a trippy music video.

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Go to the writing center

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I believe in you don't dive up

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Take a break and re gather your thoughts

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Use the peer review feedback

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have a friend/roommate/peer review it

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just take a deep breath

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Use grammarly

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keep going

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Don't be afraid to ask for help

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In the library or the Union

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7. Give a tip to your fellow classmates who may be struggling to revise their current paper.

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quiet place with lo fi music

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Anyplace away from people and away from your phone to distract you.

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The library or class

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Library or balcony of the U

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My room

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the union

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class

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My dorm

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I have to go to the Murphy Library to focus

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Writing center

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library

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writing center

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6. Where are places that help you revise to the best of your ability?

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Read the entire paper. Tell them their strengths and weaknesses

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Read the paper several times and only look for one aspect to improve on at a time. First gloss then look at word choice, then flow etc.

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By being honest as a peer reviewer

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Be honest with the person who wrote the paper, and offer changes to help improve their writing

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Don't just "read" it, actually read it and critique them on their claims, transitions, grammar, evidence, etc.

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You should actively try to help the writer. Giving detailed feedback and offering suggestions for what they can change is helpful.

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Don't be afraid to be mean

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You want to give the amount effort that you would expect to receive on your paper

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Give them suggestions of things to add or remove.

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Use constructive criticism to dive deep into their paper to really look for how this could be changed

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make sure you give both positive and constructive criticism so they know what they can improve on

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Be honest and if there’s a problem tell them and then try to figure out a way to help them fix the problem.

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Look closely at transitions

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Giving detailed feedback and examples/suggestions of what to say instead

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offer changes

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5. How can you be an impactful peer editor?

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How will this help my paper and will my audience understand what is going on?

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should I watch trippy music videos after this?

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How can I make my paper better, does it make sense, do I like how this is worded, have I spent too much time thinking about how to make this better?

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Do my sentences make sense? Is my purpose and arguments clear to the audience? Do I use good transitions?

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What can I add to make it easier to understand?

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ask yourself if this topic sentence effectively summarizes my main idea in my paragraph

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are my claims supported with evidence? Does this transition make sense?

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Is this the best paper I can write?

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Does this make sense to the intended audience/reader

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Does this make sense? Who will be reading?

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Are any of these words unnecessary?

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should I change this?

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Whether it serves the purpose?

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Am I getting my point across?

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How can I make my point stronger?

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Any time. I make revisions in the process of writing my paper and even when it's finished

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Does this make sense?

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4. What questions should you ask yourself while revising?

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I think revising is meant to happen more than once. you don't just read over your paper after a peer review and then turn it in as a final draft. give yourself time to look over it again and again and then if you think you are done keep revising because there is always room for improvement

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You should revise after everytime you step away from your paper and come back to it. So you get a refresher on what you’re writing and your Original intent of the paper.

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People should always revise, a paper is never really done

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Since revision is a continuous process, an individual can revise his writing piece at any point of time.

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after a free write so yiu don’t lose your train of thought. If you have to write down ideas about revisions later and come back to them

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yes

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When they wrote something down. It doesn't have to be at the end. You can revise in the middle of a sentence if need be.

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People shall revise when they see an opportunity for improvement

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They should revise perhaps after getting some review from others. That way, they at least have something to start with when going back to revise their work.

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Everyone needs to know how to fix their mistakes and help improve for their next papers. I use a lot of repetition so by revising my paper I'm able to cut out unnecessary sentences.

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whenever necessary

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Usually after the rought draft is finished but as many times as necessary there can always be improvement

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All the time.. never enough revision

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whenever, and as many times as they deem necessary

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People should always be revising their paper

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As much as possible! In the middle, the beginning, after every paragraph, and most importantly at the end for one final time

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They should revise through out the paper, not just when they have written the whole thing

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all the time

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3. When should someone revise?

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It makes the paper better, and it helps you learn from your mistakes to enhance your writing overall

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It will help to make the writing piece more concise and meaningful. Help to convey the message to the intended audience more effectively.

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To become a better writer

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revising helps you to improve your paper as a whole. it allows you to correct mistakes get your point across better and are more likely to appeal to your audience in an effective way

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Everyone should revise because it can fix mistakes they didn't notice the first time and improve their writing

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Revision is where the real writing happens, most people won’t have a great first draft.

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To make sure they are getting what they want across, and leaving whatever message was intended with the reader

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Everyone should revise to learn your mistakes, correct your mistakes, and become a better writer and person.

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The reason everyone should revise, is to become a better writer by learning through revisions and striving for constant growth.

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To make their paper better and make themselves  a better writer

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Because it makes us look smarter than we actually are

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To make their writing the best it can be and catch little errors

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To make the piece better.

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you gotta revise

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Everyone should revise their writing to improve their clarity and effectiveness