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very emotional

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really emotional

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Has a beginning, middle, and end.

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Has lots of details

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lt has a good tittle

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Has emotion

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Uses good punctuation for each sentence

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she added details about the main characters

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she   shows  feelings

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She has details and she also she put some words in capitalize.She also shows emotion to the people that read the story. She also has a beginning ,middle, and end. She makes the reader want to read more about it.I love that writing.At the end,she made a clift hanger. She also uses good word choises. It also seemed realistic

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she has a good ending

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the story included good details about where the story took place.LOVE IT!!!!

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she included beigining /middle/end.all had good details

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She has capitals and periods.She has capital letters when she is yelling.She put a good ending.The story had lots of good deatails. She shows feelings.The story has a begining,middle ,and end.It feels real.

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realistic ending
good ending when she got introuble

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every sentence has a capital letter.

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made it feel real when you read it.

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she had a good beginning

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she did good on expressing her feellings

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she has good deatails
and emotions.
and capitalization when yelling
and a good ending.

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she has detales and it has  expreshon it is realistic.

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She shows good emotion and evidence.

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she used good words.

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Includes an interesting title.