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Si esprime in modo sicuro e i contenuti sono esaurienti
Dimostra di conoscere adeguatamente gli argomenti trattati

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In this speech I talk about the spiritual and physical journey I had while I was in Torquay, doing my year abroad as an exchange student.
(I’m sorry for the door bell in the background)

Si esprime in modo corretto sul piano morfosintattico, preciso su quello ortografico, appropriato su quello lessicale e il contenuto è ricco e pertinente
Dimostra di conoscere gli argomenti in modo approfondito e di saper operare dei collegamenti

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I have really appreciated your project which reveals your journey into the nightmarish world of the social media. Despite some grammar and pronunciation mistakes, unfortunately  you did not link your mental and psychological process to the journey of the Ancient Mariner.
Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale e grammaticale, ma il contenuto è sufficientemente chiaro
Conosce gli aspetti degli argomenti trattati nelle loro linee essenziali

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In the 21st century no one has understood the lesson by the ancient mariner.

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Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale,
Dimostra di conoscere adeguatamente gli argomenti trattati
grammar mistakes: carry out commit a crime, In THE last decades, petrol is being depleted, romantic vision view, has entered century ago,. Pronunciation error: undermining, on the other HAND, variation of the word repercussion: impact, effect, consequence, voluntarily

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If only you were able to be ready at English literature as you are in this speech. It sounds clear and effective in its simplicity. Several pronunciation and language mistakes that  do not limit irreparably your speaking.

Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale grammaticale, ma il contenuto è chiaro
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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Guardini Giovanni, connection between The Rime Of The Ancient Mariner and Agenda 2030.

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Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale, lessicale ed il contenuto è pertinente.
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati.

grammar mistakes and vocabulary errors: pronunciation <<. Ancient, one of the most ambitious projectS, Agenda 2030 (twenty-thirty), animalS, don't use etc while making a speech, for describe describing, under the watch of everybody, in everybody's eyes, the rise of sea LEVEL, the  Nature allowS, last sentence unclear.

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Sometimes i think about colours to identify my life.

dear Chiara I think you are a creative person, perhaps sometimes a bit too instinctive in your way to approach literary works. Anyway I must confess I really appreciated your interpretation of the Rime my means of colours.  there are some  language and pronunciation mistakes and errors, but despite it the speech is clear even though the intonation is too theatrical.

Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale, lessicale ed il contenuto è pertinente
Dimostra di conoscere adeguatamente gli argomenti trattati

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After listening to "Impressioni di Settembre" by Premiata Forneria Marconi, I've started the same journey in search for identity that the mariner experienced.
Despite few language and pronunciation mistakes, you project appears to be pretty interesting and lively with this unusual comparison with PFM's song.
Si esprime in modo sicuro e i contenuti sono esaurienti
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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Your project sounds intimate and profoundly personal , unfortunately your language is still pervaded by uncertainty and there are several mistakes in grammar and pronunciation errors, but you seem have understood the goal  of the assignment.
Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale e grammaticale, ma il contenuto è sufficientemente chiaro
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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Hope i did it right. You did indeed.
anyway, your project refers mostly to your own experience with little reference to the literary work by Coleridge. there are some grammar mistakes: for  to reach the goal; ed pronunciation and use of present and past tenses in the a series of sentences. Then some excessively repeated words as : Perspective (why not point of view or simply views?)
Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale, lessicale il contenuto è sufficientemente pertinente
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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Sometimes, when I feel lost or sad I take refuge in my safe place: I watch trains going away, imagining my problems leaving with them.
A deep journey into yourself as the mariner did. Congrats
good language, intonation and variation of vaocab. very few language mistakes
Si esprime in modo corretto sul piano morfosintattico, preciso su quello ortografico, appropriato su quello lessicale e il contenuto è ricco e pertinente
Dimostra di conoscere gli argomenti in modo approfondito e di saper operare dei collegamenti

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De Guidi Nicole - The relationship between man and nature

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De Guidi Nicole - The relationship between man and nature

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Leonardo Maria Perina
Leonardo I thought you could organise your project referring to a more philosophical or intimate issues, but anyway I appreciated it all the same,  in particular the physical journey you made to recap your actions and improve your mental attitude. some grammar mistakes: written, motivated by myself, to THE lake Garda, couldn't   was not able to drive i(referring to a special event), dropped in AT a parking lot, take again the test again and some pronunciation errors: I appreciated your effort to speak slowly.

Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale, lessicale  ed il contenuto è pertinente
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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who are you? Giorgia Chiosa perhaps?                 The sea and The Rime 

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who are you? Giorgia Chiosa perhaps?                 The sea and The Rime 

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"Water,Water everywhere and not a drop to drink"
Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale e grammatical con diverse problem di pronuncia, ma il contenuto è chiaro
Dimostra di conoscere adeguatamente gli argomenti trattati.
honestly, I clearly realized you were reading through a written text.
Grammar and language mistakes and errors: Image (noun) Imagine (verb); use of S in third person, S in the plural nouns: emotions, actions; pronunciation errors: sustainability, raised, ossidify (non-existent word) acidify(correct) the ocean, gases, produced, CO2, threatening, produced; grammar mistakes: use of not yet (at the end of the sentence, most of the times), aim at  significantly reducing, plastic has been founded found

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I really appreciated your efforts to make yourself clearly understood and the way you consider your sport a way to keep growing and maturing. You also tried to control the language, despite i am conscious you were reading through a pre-written text.
Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale e grammaticale, ma il contenuto è chiaro
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati.

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Benetti Manuel

well, Manuel I am a bit in trouble because sometimes your speech is not clear enough to me, partly because there are some language and pronunciation mistakes and partly because you follow your thoughts without a clear direction, I dare say instinctively. What I have appreciated is the fact you were not reading through a pre-made text and this is a point in your favour.
Si esprime in modo poco chiaro e poco corretto
Conosce gli aspetti degli argomenti trattati nelle loro linee essenziali

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English speech The rime of the ancient mariner

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parallelism between 2 crimes against nature

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Si esprime in modo poco chiaro e poco corretto e il contenuto è piuttosto povero.
Conosce pochi aspetti degli argomenti trattati
grammar and language errors and mistakes:
Ancient (pronunciation), The Coleridge's masterpiece, multinationals (you'd better use multinational corporations), we have (you'd better use there's /are), we have the Mariner that kills, the mariner/the sailors like (you'd better use the Mariner's connotated as ... The sailors symbolise)
parallelism, consequences repeated more than once, little variation of the language, will sank (will sink), our society are (is)

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Jacopo Pasqualini
This is how I imagine myself during an unlikely journey while I look for my identity.

Jacopo I am really touched by your nightmarish experience in an unreal world and by your renewed awareness of being respectful to Nature. Anyway,  I do not know for sure whether you wanted to tell your journey in search for identity or ,on the contrary, you wanted to write something in defence of the natural world. Your conclusion is unclear. Despite some grammar and pronunciation mistakes I found this speech original and really personal.
Si esprime con qualche incertezza lessicale e grammaticale, ma il contenuto è sufficientemente chiaro.
Conosce gli aspetti principali degli argomenti trattati

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Si esprime in modo poco chiaro e poco corretto e il contenuto è piuttosto povero
Conosce gli aspetti degli argomenti trattati nelle loro linee essenziali
grammar, language and pronunciation  mistakes  and errors:  it was wrote (written), second (secondly), breaks /pronunciation )since the first industrial revolution we are polluting (we have been polluting the world since the ......) the Nature, goal (pronunciation) who (pronunciation), reestablishes (pronunciation) and many others

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My journey in search of my place in this world

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My journey in search of my place in this world

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Little reference to the literary work and the Mariner's experience so the speech  sounds a bit unbalanced. Anyway, despite several language and pronunciation mistakes the use of the vocabulary is enough correct. The end of your speech is a bit repetitive and lacks of a logical conclusion. I really appreciated your efforts.
Si esprime abbastanza correttamente sul piano grammaticale, lessicale ed il contenuto è  sufficientemente pertinente
Conosce gli aspetti degli argomenti trattati nelle loro linee essenziali