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Watch Ms. Spence talk about how to revise for clarity.

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RUN ON SENTENCES - Watch Mr. Gold talk about sentences/run on sentences and how to edit them.

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RUN ON SENTENCES - Watch Mr. Gold talk about sentences/run on sentences and how to edit them.

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about how to punctuate dialogue

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Watch Ms. Spence Teach about how to write a lead (Hook).

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Watch Ms. Spence teach about how to write with story telling voice.

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Watch Ms. Spence teach about how to write with story telling voice.

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Strategy taught: Lead - Starting with Action, Dialogue or Setting

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Strategy taught: Lead - Starting with Action, Dialogue or Setting

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Strategy taught: Envision the Mental Movie 

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Strategy taught: Envision the Mental Movie 

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Review the powerpoint slides with Mr. Gold's story

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Lesson 5 (Live) PN_Draft_Storytellingvoice (1)

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Mentor Text: Read examples former strong 4th graders Personal Narratives writers for inspiration!

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Mentor Text: Read examples former strong 4th graders Personal Narratives writers for inspiration!

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about when to change paragraphs. 

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about when to change paragraphs. 

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about the heart of the story and read a personal narrative written by a strong, former 4th grade writer.

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about the heart of the story and read a personal narrative written by a strong, former 4th grade writer.

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Watch Ms. Spence teach about figurative language and sensory details.

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Watch Ms. Spence teach about figurative language and sensory details.

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Watch Mr. Gold teach about writing conclusions.

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When you think you're done with your draft, watch Ms. Spence explain what you might do next.

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When you think you're done with your draft, watch Ms. Spence explain what you might do next.

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Some things to work on once you finish your draft Anchor Chart

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Some things to work on once you finish your draft Anchor Chart

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Please use the checklist in order to edit for one thing at a time. 

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Please use the checklist in order to edit for one thing at a time. 

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Watch Ms. Quirin talk about how publish - making a Flipgrid video recording the heart of your story

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Watch Ms. Quirin talk about how publish - making a Flipgrid video recording the heart of your story