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More experience

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Exemplar 2 is better
Because there wereabundant details to support the sentence

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Exemplar 2 is better
1.passive voice
2.relative  cause

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Exempar2 is better
Cause the conclusion is better (maybe)

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Exemplar2 's topic sentence is clear than the exemplar1

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The examplar 2 have topic sentences,and also they have the researches to support their view

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e.g.
- exemplar 1 is better.
- The student wrote more words.

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Q.1 Which piece of writing is better? Give 2 reasons to support your answer.