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Theory&Architecture

What is judgement ？

Why people judge ？

Existence and perfect ?

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Robert gave me some suggestions
And I know the theme is ACTION NOT WORDS

My inner monologue is that I was thinking what form it would take? Because you know , I would like to push my comfort area and try to play, try some new styles& new forms of expression.I like to play and I’m really into Collage

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As you can see, I started spending a lot of time searching for other directions like the brain until my whims realized I might be going in the wrong direction And then important key words come to my mind: The Skin color.
But whatever,
I've taken a wrong turn, but thanks to the search I've learned a lot about areas I wouldn't normally cover.😸

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I searched for some articles
Find some keywords and made some markup on my sketchbook

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Robert's commentary： It looks a bit too complicated, I need to simplify some elements to adjust.
The second problem is that this poster doesn't seem to reflect the black elements, I need to strengthen this part
The third problem is that the Frozen in the upper left corner is reminiscent of the frozen one that is animated. I need to adjust it.
The fourth problem is that the text in it is too direct, and some famous quotes can be appropriately used to express it tactfully

Matt said he like this style 🤣 and shared a similar art style, let me see more and try it

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First of all, I will simplify the background, make it all black and white, and then use the material of metal locks. After that, some symbols of the pattern indicate that people's cold words will form a sharp sword, hurting others like a glacier. What I want to show is: language has powerful energy, it can make a person or destroy a person.

Rebecca said  Push topic go on& Font is a bit big

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This poster has the same problem as the first work, that is, the picture is too complicated and appears chaotic without primary and secondary, so it needs to be simplified.

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Andrew said that I can try some more paintings on this piece of work
Ray said that this piece of work is a little hard to see that it is a black history theme, which is not obvious.
This is also a history of black people, but it is a process of trial and error. Maybe the meaning of the work is not very prominent, but for me, I also gained a lot of experience, such as collage, because I personally like collage very much. Art, I am full of joy when I create, this is what I have gained, but I understand that next time, the theme of historical communication posters should be obvious, so that people can recognize what they are doing and why they are creating at a glance. . Although this poster is not enough, it is also one that I am very happy to gain.

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I also did a visual simplification, and made all the pictures black and white, making the text more obvious and powerful.