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Clear position

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unclear

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Limited understanding

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highly effective

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Sentences are reasonably varied -esmeralda a

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unclear, or illogical- jakayla

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word choice is purposeful and precise- jakayla

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not always appropriate - Betsy

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Sentences are purposeful, varied, and well controlled, enhancing the effectiveness of the essay. - The development of ideas is highly effective. The argument is forceful and convincing because the reasons and evidence the writer uses to support the position are specific and well chosen

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unclear

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highly effective

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word choice is general and imprecise
little or no thoughtfulness

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repitation of wordness,vague or confused Alejandro

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repitation of wordness,vague or confused Alejandro

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no punctuation

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largely convincing

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word choice is clear and specific

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"The essay is clear",

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not always clear weak or somewhat unclear Alejandro

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not always clear weak or somewhat unclear Alejandro

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essay is thoughtful and reasonable

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repitition

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highly effective clear position Alejandro 

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highly effective clear position Alejandro 

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"word choice is purposeful and precise."