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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I restate the character trait I'm focusing on a lot. I want to continue to work on using textual evidence and thought prompts to make my essays even stronger.

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What's going well for me as an essayist is I put text evidence to back up my thought.

One thing I need to work on is to use more transition words.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I am working hard on making good changes so that my writing makes sense, without going on and on and then it gets overboard and it is then boring. Something that I need to work on is I need to make sure that I use bigger words or add more detail. I can look back to the prompts more when I get stuck. I should double check paragraphs to make sure they have correct spelling. Questions I have - are you allowed to have more than three body paragraphs in your literary essay? Can you you make your claim longer than three main details?

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I am using good claims for my essays.

I can continue to work on adding textual evidence to my essays to make them better.

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What is going well for me is that I give enough evidence to support my claim .I give it a good structure so it can be built higher .I need to work on not giving too much unnecessary evidence which might make my essay weaker .

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist are my claim and my examples to back up my claim.

What I need to continue to work on is to use text evidence and to use the thought promtps.

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What is going well for me is my claim, I feel confident with this part of my essay's the most because I know what the sentences I need to put in my writing the most in the claim. I also think I am going well as an essayist is my grades. I can work on explaining my explanations more to support my claim.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist Is how I am making sure I use enough evidence in my literary essay for my arguments . Also I'm using boxes and bullets to give myself ideas of what my claim is.

What I need to continue on is using my prompts that I have in front of me so it can be more descriptive. Also I can use more examples when I am writing my literary essay, and go up to 4 or 5 examples.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is how I give textual evidence to support my claim. I can continue to work on adding good textual evidence and doing boxes and bullets. Also I could give examples in the story to help state my story. I could work on quoting some parts and story tell other parts.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is I'm adding examples and evidence from the text like what they did or what they said. I also use thought prompts to express my opinion. I can continue to work on adding more examples and details to those examples to crank it up to a 4.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is making examples for my argument

What I can continue to work on is relating all my examples, reasons and arguments back to the main statement

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is having text evidence to help support my trait. What I can continue to work on going deeper into my story and getting more evidence from it.

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What is really going well as literary essayist is that I have more evidence/information, so the reader can understand what is it about. I have a LOT of reasons about the character.

What can I continue to work on is that I need to graph my paragraphs orderly. I don't really have a question.

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Something that's going good for me is that I'm using the thought prompt a lot. Something that I will work on is to use the other resource that Mrs. Reuter gave us. I don't have any questions to be asked.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is I make 3 good reasons because I add things from the story and on to the page.The other growth for my literary essay is I add my traits to my reasons

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One thing that is going well for me as a literary essayist is pulling evidence from the story to support my claim. One thing that I need to work on and improve on is the format and structure of my claim because sometimes when I write I don't make it very clear to the reader on what I'm trying to explain.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I can back up evidence to support my claim. Something that I can work on is on the format and the structure.

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I am doing well as a essayist at using the boxes and bullets format.

One thing I can continue working on is adding evedince to support my claim.

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What is going well this year as a literary essayist is that I'm using lots of thought prompts in my essays. Somethings I can work on is quoting bits of the story and boxes and bullets.

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One thing that is going well for me as a literary essayist , is that I'm doing well at supporting my claim with textual evidence.

One thing that I can work on is to use the thought prompts like for example... , I wonder if... and other thought prompts.

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What is going well with literary essays. I am putting a topic to write about. Also im also putting paragraphs. Im also adding support to my reasons.

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As a literary essayist, I think that I am doing well at using the boxes and bullets structure to help structure my essay.

As an essayist, I can work on finding good and supportive sentences to back up my thoughts. The reason why, is because I want the reader to be convinced that I have good and supportive details.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist, is that I am using good examples to back up my claim and I am using a lot of textual evidence.

As a literary essayist, I will continue to work on finding more transition words and use the thought prompt sheet and start to use different prompts instead of the same ones over and over again.

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As a literary essayist I am doing well in finding text. I can work on listening to the mini lessons

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Something I want to work on in literary essays are more detail in my supporting evidence like using exact words from the story. I will achieve this goal by actually having my story out and looking at it and not just having it out and not looking at it.

I can continue to work on saying actual lines from the story and not just lines that I make up. I will prevent this by looking at my story and in my essey I could say where I found my evidence so people can see what I was trying to say.

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What i is going well for me as a essayist? Is that I am adding three support reasons to each reason. What can I contine to work on? I could keep working on adding textual evidence for my reasons.

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Something that is going well for me with literary essays is, I can use text evidence to support my claims. I could continue working on having more examples for my claim and write more detailed claims.

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Something going well for me is using the prompts. Something I would like to work on is usingtext evidence to back my statement up.

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Things that are going well for me as a literary essayist are using the boxes and bullets structure and giving evidence from the story. Things that I could work on include giving direct quotes from the story and using thought prompts

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Something that is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I am putting a lot of textual evidence in my writing to support my claim.

I could work on using the boxes and bullets structure more often, or using different thought prompts, since I tend to use the same ones.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is how I give evidence to support my claim. What I can continue to work on so far in the literary essay process is using specific details in a story to find a character's true desire.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is using examples from the story. What I continue to work on the literary essay writing processes is to use boxes and bullets.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that i'm including examples from the story. Overall I need to work on is my boxes and bullets in my story.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is using boxes and bullets. What can I continue to work on is writing a claim. My question is do you have to have 3 paragraphs or can you have more than 3.

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What I think Is going well for me as a literary essayist is really connecting through to the character and seeing their perspective and being able to see through their eyes. Something I could work on as a literary essayist is looking on the other side of the story and adding more evidence to support the claim like for example and looking back to the binder for help.

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What i'm doing well in writing liteary essays is adding a lot of tranistion words.What I can work on is quoting some parts of the text.I can also look for more evidince that can suport claim.

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What I am doing well in literary essays. I am doing well with putting thought prompts in my writing and also finding evidence to back up my claim.I feel I am doing well in these categories.

What can I work on and what questions do I have about the process of writing a literary essay. I feel that I could work on writing a stronger thesis statement. Also I think I could work on having a plan before I write my literary essays because I tend to lack on the plan and writing a stronger thesis statment.

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What I'm doing well as a literary essayist is getting examples or reasons from the story. I want to work on is using prompts like "This is important because.." to my reasoning.

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What I am doing well as a literary essayist is I am really good at using thought prompts in my writing and having good ideas for the character trait. I can continue to work on finding more evidence to support my reasons.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is i'm able to understand the characters qualities and and write a paragraph about the character. What i'm going to continue to work on is I'm still going to add more prompts to help support my Ideas and thoughts. I question i have is what are we going to do the literary asses on, are we doing it on "Raymond's Run" or are we doing it on a different story.

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Something that I am doing well is citing evidence from the text to backup my essay. Something that I can work on is to really try to focus on the Boxes and Bullets structure so my essay has the correct outline.

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Something that I am doing well is that I used evidence to back what I am saying . Also I can use the boxes and bullets. Something that I can work on is to put more examples to my Literary Essay to make my point. Also to work on writing more about what I am talking about and to keep on writing more about the topic, this will help me with putting more examples.

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something that is going well for me is using specific examples a lot more often. I can continue on using thought prompts such as "for example" and "I think the author included this because"

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There are a couple of things that I am doing well, and some things I need to improve on. One thing I am doing well is taking the line in the story that the teacher gave me that she wants me to write what I think about it, like the I rather just knock you down line in the story "Raymond's Run" and I am good at taking the sentence and then get more examples to back up my claim. Something though I have to work on is, when I get my points to back up my statement I need to make sure that I either get more examples or more important examples to back up my claim and idea better.

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Something that is going well in literary essays is giving evidence. I understand how to find evidence then put it in my writing. I can find multiple pieces of evidence to support my claim. Something that I can improve on is using thought prompts. I think that I need to use them more then once, or not at all. I think it will help my story flow better.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is using evidence back to the mentor text. In my case the mentor text is Raymond's Run. Something I need to work on is to restate my claim with a little more detail in my writing. One short question I have is, what will our final Mentor text be about?

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is using the boxes and bullets structure in my work.I can continue to work on putting example from the story in my work.

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What is going well for me as a litrerary essayist is using evidance from the story. I can continue to work on using a variety of thought prompts instead of just basic ones like "I wonder if..." or "For example..."

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is using the thought prompts freely and actually understanding them. I also think taking Ideas from the text and using them in my own writing is going well. A question I have for literary essays is are conclusions just restating the claim, or can we add more detail?

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As a literary essayist I'm doing very well on how a write a literary essays.What can I continue working on more is to have more evidence whenever I claim my reasons or show examples.

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What I am doing good at so far is usually writing long paragraphs for the sentence and its examples, I use good boxes and bullets structure, sometimes including the thought prompts. But the thing I need to keep working on is adding the thought prompts at the start of a paragraph.

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What's going well for me as a essayist is most of everything, I feel that I am doing really well using examples from the story. Such as when we get a sentence to write about I try to find a way to put it in my claim.

Something I can continue to work on is my boxes and bullets and putting my ideas out there, and planning all my essay structure into one big idea to make my claim.

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One thing that I'm doing well as an literary essayist, is I'm using thought prompts. I really started my paragraph off with a good first sentence on "I'm the swiftest thing in the neighborhood".

One thing that I can work on is using different kinds of thought prompts, not just one or two. I need to use more than one.

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I am doing well on thought prompts. I still need work on using more text evidence to support my claim and more planning would really help me get my words out to really tell my audience what I want to say.

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I think something going good for me is the examples that I give and I give good claims I am really working hard on both of those and I am also using most of the thought prompts which are very helpful.

One thing I am going to start is to try to use the boxes and bullets structure more so that I can get deeper into my the essays that I write.

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Somethings that are going well for me as a essayist are using lots of examples and evidence in my writing.

I can continue to work on going deeper in my story, and internal movivations.

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I write long detailed story's and I find good evidence. I have a hard time adding sentences from the story and thats

one thing i need to work on.

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Something that is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I am doing the boxes and bullets and using thought prompts. One thing that I can work on is using more examples and I will continue to use thought prompts and boxes and bullets structure.

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what is going well for me is that i can pick out evidence from my story and use it in my essay.

What is going not so well is finding examples for the characteristics of the character

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What is going well for me so far is I am using many different pieces of evidence from the text. I'm also using the different essay prompts to start paragraphs.

As for what I'm not doing so well with, I feel I could create better structured claims instead of just saying, I think that Squeaky will be a protector.

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I have many things I've been doing well on during our literary essays. For instance, I use thought prompts while writing my essays. One time I did this was the time we wrote about how and why the author said they have to come by me and I'd rather knock you down: "Maybe the author included this because..." In addition, I provide evidence from the story into my literary essays. One time when we talked about what Hazel really wants in the story: "For instance, in paragraph three she talks about..." However, I think I can work on adding more descriptive examples and even adding more evidence in my essays. Once in a while I tend to only add two examples, instead of three. These are what I need to work on and what I'm doing well on.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is i am trying to use examples from the story. What I can continue to work on is my detail, my examples, and structure I also need thought prompts.

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One thing that is going well for me is that I am putting more Quotes from the literary essay. One thing I can work on is getting more info from the literary essay.One question that I have is how much quotes I should have in one paragraph and the whole essay.

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One thing that is going well is I'm using the think and write prompts such as; " For example..." and "Maybe the author included this because..." My strongest example of this is my first 2 paragraphs in session 2. One thing that I need to work on is I need to add more examples and say why they work.

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Something that is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I am using the thought prompts, I am using examples form the story, and I am using boxes and bullets structure. For example in the boot camp, for the 3 Little Pigs essay, I did really well. I used the boxes boxes and bullets structure, I used some of the thought prompts, and I gave an example from the story! I was pretty surprised! And for session 2 I used a bunch of thought prompts. I also used much more examples of the story! But, something that I can work on is looking deeper into the story, because I only look at the straight out facts. I need to think deeper more!

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist? Well, I feel I am able to come up with many examples to support my main theme. I feel I am also finding good themes easily. For example, when we had to write about what Squeaky really wants I was able to think easily. What do I want to continue working on? I want to continue working using more thought prompts.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is that I have been using 1 to 2 prompts per paragraph. I have also been coming up with lots of great ideas. And best of all the claims are coming to me easy. I can work on having a more clear claim because I usually don't have a main claim and I just throw things down. I can also use more examples from the story to support my claim. I am also going to think deeper to write down better thoughts. So I am going to work on supporting my claim, making a clear claims and thinking deeper!

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Something that is going well for me in literary essays are I am very good at finding what the character really wants and why she wants it by supporting it with thoughts from the text. I am going to be continue on why the character thinks of herself/himself so highly or poorly. For example, when Hazel said, " I am the swiftest thing in the neighbor hood that is showing us that she thinks of herself highly without caring what other people think of her. I am also going to be working on the boxes and bullets structure to work on what my essay is going to be about.

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Some of the things that are going well for me are using prompts like For example and this is important because and the author included this because.... i am also doing well in setting up a structured essay and making sure the content is okay. I need to work on using more boxes and bullets because I haven't been using them often and I also need to work on having an essay that flows a lot better because right now some of my beginning thoughts are really choppy and I need to smooth it out.

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Things that are going well for me as literary essays are that I am pulling from the text so I can support my claim.

Some things that aren't going well for me as literary essays is ending and explaining my thought. I am going to try to solve this by making sure that it makes sense and supporting it with things from the text.

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Something that is going well for me as a literary essayist are I have been writing examples from the stories to support my ideas. I am finding more than one reason to support my thoughts.

One thing I need to work on is the boxes and bullets. I also want to get more detailed with my thoughts and making sure my thoughts make sence.

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What is going well for me on a literary essayist is, looking back into the story and trying to see if I have any examples if I am having trouble with my stories.

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What's going well for me as a literary essay is I am using examples from the story and I can understand what and how to write it. What i can work on is the way i add the example i need to word it into the sentence.

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What is going well for me as a literary essayist is I am using examples and going back to the short story to get the examples and I am having more than 1 claim in my essays. I have to continue working on supporting my claim and making sure that my supporting reasons make sense in my story.

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What's going well for me as a literary essayist is I am using evidence from the text and I'm using different thought prompts that help me explain my reasoning. I also dig deeper to find what the character truly wants.

I should continue working on my boxes and bullets structure to help me. I have no questions about literary essays and the writing process.

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The thing that is going well for me as a literary essayists is I am getting the hang of what a literary essay is and it's going well. I'm getting down deep into the character's point of view and different sides of the story. Something else is I'm am using the literary essay thought prompts that Mrs. Reuter has given us to use.

Something I could do better is I need better examples from the text and more meatier paragraphs. Something that I could also do is read a bit more of the story instead of jumping right into writing.