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We are three people in my family: my wife, my daughter and me. We also have a pet. My wife is hard - working and my daughter is giggly.We live in a house in Peñablanca, near Villa Alemana. Carlos Cabezas

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We are three people in my family: my wife, my daughter and me. We also have a pet. My wife is hard - working and my daughter is giggly.We live in a house in Peñablanca, near Villa Alemana. Carlos Cabezas

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Loved your writing! it's great :)

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We're four persons in my family, my mum and little sister live in germany, they are very intelligent and funny they are very similar, I'm not too closer with them. My dad is hard-working and outgoing, we're closer.

Great work! careful with the commas and periods (for example: "We're four persons in my family. My mom and little sister live in Germany, they are very intelligent and funny.") I really liked the intimacy of your piece of writing. In English, every time you finish an idea and your sentence is complete, you can put a period (punto seguido). The first time that you say "closer" should be only "close", since you're not comparing anything there. Super!

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we are six members in my family; my mum is lovely and nice, my dad is hard-working and generous, my brother cristobal is smart and charismatic, my brother hector is relaxed and funny, and my little bro francisco is smart and introverted

Nice job! Careful with the capital letters (mayúsculas). You can use periods (puntos seguidos) in between some sentences (for example: We are six members in my family. My mom is lovely and nice. My dad is hard-working and generous. ...) I really liked the description of your family :)

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Camila Villavicencio
In my family are four persons. My dad, my mom, my sister and me. My mom lives in Santiago. My dad and sister live in Cartagena. They are very funny and hard-working. My sister and me get in touch very often.

Super! careful with "in my family THERE are four persons". Remember you can use commas too ;). Great job!

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I`m very creative, outgoing and hard-working, because I like new things and ideas in my life. Also I have brown eyes, black hair and I'm tiny. I like play the guitar, meet my friends and go to cinema.
Esteban Ruz

Good job!!! remember that when we use the verb "like" we add "to" (e.g.: I like TO play the guitar) Super ! :)

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My mum Paola is very inteligent, independent and laaaazy. She has brown eyes and hair, pale skin and she is short person.
My dad is very creative, funny and shy. He has brown eyes and hair, tanned skin and he is short person
My brother is atletic, gamer and inteligent. He is brown eyes and hair, pale skin and he is taller than everyone.
And I am cheerful, hardworking and lazy. I have brown eyes and hair, and I am very short person.
Family Camila Velásquez

Good work! kepp an eye on "brown eyes and BROWN hair". Also, we say "he/she is A short/tall person". Keep up with the good work! :)

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ANA PÁEZ: In my house live 7 people, my mom, my dad, my big sister, me, my youngest brother, my grandmother and my grandad, we also have a dog, her name is Pelusa. I love my family, their are very lovely, i spend a lot of time whit them. I am very close with my older sister, she is very talented. My brother is very talented to, he play the piano very well. Now he is serving a mision as a missionary of the church of Jesus Christ of the latter day saints in Paraguay so he calls us once a week to tell us how he is going. About me, i am very short, and i have brown hair. I like to sing and play piano, i think a im good in that.    

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ANA PÁEZ: In my house live 7 people, my mom, my dad, my big sister, me, my youngest brother, my grandmother and my grandad, we also have a dog, her name is Pelusa. I love my family, their are very lovely, i spend a lot of time whit them. I am very close with my older sister, she is very talented. My brother is very talented to, he play the piano very well. Now he is serving a mision as a missionary of the church of Jesus Christ of the latter day saints in Paraguay so he calls us once a week to tell us how he is going. About me, i am very short, and i have brown hair. I like to sing and play piano, i think a im good in that.    

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Nice job! a very long description :) Careful with the difference between "their" (possessive) and "they're" (subject + to be). When we want to say that two people have the same qualities we use "too" not "to". Another thing is that when someone calls to tell you how they are, you say "... to tell us how he is doing". You were very descriptive, I loved it ! :) great work!

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In my family we are five people. Me, my parents and two brothers. We are very close. My dad is serious, my mum is lovely and my two brothers are very good with me.
Nicolas Castillo

Great job! try to make it a little bit longer tho :) Keep up with the good work! :)

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We are three person in my family. My mum in kind whith us, is storng and she's always worried for me and my dad, because she like to make sure if all its ok. My mum have blonde hair and blue eyes, also she is very tall. My dad is smart, he like study all the time, he is also peaceful and patient. My dad love to teach and learn about everithing.

Great job! careful with the misspellings (storng -> strong). Check out the present and past simple to make sure of the grammar forms ;) Very good!!

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-my mum is hard working but we call each other everyday
-my dad is strict but a cheerful father
-I am the youngest of the family.
- We are four in the family, my mother, my sister, my dad and me.

Maximiliano Hernandez

Good! try to make it a paragraph tho ;) Great job tho!

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in my family, we`re for persons, my mother, my father, my brother and me.
my mother is lovely and funny, she always makes a jokes, my dad is a very creative person and hard working, he and I work on our house building rooms or painting, and my brother is a smart and kind person.

Good job!! careful with writing the number 4 (four, not for). Remember we use "a" when we talk about singulars (makes jokes, not "makes A jokes"). Great work! :)

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We are four members in my family.
My mum is lovely, hard-working and happy, my brother is adventurous, creative and outgoing.
We are a funny family.
Esteban Ruz

Great job!! try to make it a bit longer ;) super!!

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In my house we are six. My mum Carolina, my stepfather Victor, my cat Pimienta and my two dogs, Ramona and Peyo. And obviously me.
we are a extrovert family and very happy. My mum is a lovely person and victor is a sociable person.
My personality is very quite . I’ve got brown hair and brown eyes. And basically I’m a bored person.
Luna G

Good job!! remember that we use "an" when we have a word that starts with a vowel (we are AN extrovert family). Careful with the difference between quite (to talk about degree) and quiet (silence, calm). I don't understand well if you meant that you are boring or that you get bored easily... so careful there too! Above all, great work!!! :)

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I lived in My house with mi mum and My step father, they are very funny and we get on very well, we have a really good relationship and we try to pass tiene together. Also i have two brothers and one sister, but i'm the unic one that keeps living un My parents house. We meet all together some times in a year and usually we pass the time together and eating barbecue.

My name si tomas, i'm born un viña del mar but i lived all of my life in Quilpue. I consider that i'm very social person, i'm outgoing and i try to be a Nice person, but i would like to be more creative and responsible.

Tomás Baeza

Good piece of writing! Careful with the tenses (present simple and continuous, past simple). It is more common to say "the only one" rather than "the unique one". Great work!

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We are four person in my family, my mum, my dad, and my brother. We are a lovely family, my mother always take care about us, my dad is very hardworking and my brother is adventurous, we usually ride our bikes and go to anywhere.
David Tapia

Great work! I'd like to see more of this writing tho! Keep up with the good work!

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my dad is serious but a lovely father
my mum is a nice person, we call each other every day
my sister is the youngest in the family, we are very close
Tomás Ríos

Great work! I'd like to see more of this piece of writing too tho, but nice job! :)