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Hilary put in some jokes in her resume, which is something she is not suppose to do. She did list all of her work experience and education. Her summery could be better than what she has now. Her jobs however either lasted a year or less than that sometimes.

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Hilary had some good part like when she put the jobs she worked at before and the time and what she did for the job, But the Tone was not really a Work tone it was like a tone you have with a friend not if you are trying to get a Job.

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It seemed like she couldn't keep a job for a long period of time and she didn't seem to take it very serious

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Hilary's resume was not very professional. 11/20
She listed her past work experiences

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she copied and pasted what she did in a previous job, she looked like she went through a lot of jobs and she wasn't serious in her resume

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I wouldn't want to hire her because she have jokes and that is not the right time to put those and it's a job interview not a playground where u can copy what u did from previous jobs, she needs to work on a few things for me to hire her and to act like it is a job interview instead of a playground.

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She added jokes which is a  little unprofessional 12/20

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she put jokes into her resume

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Hillary used words like amiright which is informal slang. She put unnecessary jokes and words in parentheses and she didn't use a real email address and she used probably her personal one. She repeated herself twice in some sections and having a sense of humor is not the right quality for the type of job. I would not hire her.

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she cant keep a job for long

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He used an informal style and tone. It was inappropriate.

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unprofessional, function was good in the beginning and job history was ok, but wording and jokes would tell me as the person hiring her that she is unprofessional and would not make a good fit for my organization. Quincy Lancto

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Slightly unprofessional

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I will hire her 100% Her resume was very organized and it listed all of her achievements and activities. I cannot believe she's a sale associate in highschool
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Carly's resume was filled with details she held her jobs for a longer period of time

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Professional, informative, has a very good history of achievements listed. Shes hired.
Quincy Lancto

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Carly's resume is professional she talks about her experiences, volunteer experience etc. It looks like she is taking this seriously

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Carly did a good job putting things she had did in school and what work she had did in detail. she worked at the jobs for longer then Hilary did. she has a work tone and she seems to really care about the job she is trying to get.

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Formal and clearly hard working person. Looks great.

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She is clear on what she writes, she isn't copying and pasting, she is taking her time with answering these questions, I would hire her and give her a chance even if she was beginning to be poor or is poor, but i would give her a chance no matter the cost.

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Very professional with a good amount of experience 20/20

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Carly's resume is professionally written. She included her past experiences, and worked at the jobs for reasonable amount of time. She also includes her academic history and achievements.
19/20

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seems she would be like a very good employee and she was very organized and would be a good worker

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very professional tone,  and style. And resume includes  required information, work experience, achievements and etc.

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I would hire Carly because she completed her years of college and graduated with a full degree. There were no typos in her resume and she worked at more than two jobs and got positive feedback from her boss/employer. She has played for piano for ten years and she was promoted the youngest manager at one of her jobs.

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I would definitely hire Carly she seems to take her job serous and works hard

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Carly would be my choice as she has many achievements, is formal in her resume approach, and got straight to the point without using jokes or copy and paste.

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Carly would be my choice as she has many achievements, is formal in her resume approach, and got straight to the point without using jokes or copy and paste.

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Quincy Lancto

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I will hire Carly 100% She listed all of her achievements, extracurricular activities, interests, and volunteer work. Her summary was very good also.

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I would hire Carly because based on her past experiences she knows exactly what she is doing and knows how to be professional

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I would hire Carly. She seems to take her job more seriously.

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carly seems more professional

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Carly is a better candidate. She included more detail and less jokes.

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Carly is a better candidate. She included more detail and less jokes.

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Carly's resume was definitely the best. She included academic history and achievements while Hilary only included her college. She also worked at her jobs much longer than Hilary did. Carly was also professional while writing her resume. I would hire Carly over Hilary.

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I liked Carly's Resume, because she was being clear on what she was typing and taking it seriously. hilary wasn't clear and was copying and pasting if she was poor she needs to get it together and act like its a job interview instead of a playground at school or answering like a child. I like how carly was formal and clear on what she was saying and not copying and pasting everything.

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I would definitely hire Carly Because she had a work tone, she worked at the jobs longer, she put that she made Honor roll, and she Volunteered.

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I would hire Carly because she was more professional and she was honest and did not copy and paste like Hillary did. Carly had lots of work experience and got positive feedback from her boss.

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carly i would hire because her resume was very good and had a better work experience

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They seemed unprofessional and can't seem to keep a job.

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Seemed very professional and seemed to be able to keep their jobs.

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I would be hesitant on Hilary. It doesn't seem like she knows that a resume is supposed to be a serious thing. Not my personal pick only because it isn't very professional.

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I think she should've did it professionally..

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Hilary made little comments through out her resume. That was unprofessional and she should not do that.

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I will not be hiring her, seems like she couldn't keep her job for a long period time, and she put jokes on her resume, which I do not think you're allowed to do.

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she put little side comments that shouldn't be there and it looks like she worked two jobs at once that were the same and she also didn't keep her job for a long time

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Hilary's resume seemed to almost be more focused on entertaining the reader instead of providing the interviewer with information. Because of this her resume turned out seeming incredibly unprofessional and childish.

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Hillary's resume was unprofessional, childish, and repetitive. I also noticed she switched jobs a lot which I wouldn't want in a employee.

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Hilary's resume was unprofessional, and does not seem to keep her jobs.

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the resume would be good if she finish things that she started and not put jokes in her resumes its doesnt look professional.

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Multiple job experiences where she usually stays with that job for a short amount of time. Puts tiny and snarky comments about her past jobs and about how she works, so she is childish.

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She seems to prop up the fact that she hasn't been able to keep a job, which to the interviewer will already be a sign of not being skilled in anything that they would be looking for, and thus would already get her shot down, not to mention her uncouth, unprofessional, informal language.

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I think Hilary was unprofessional and childish.

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I would Hire Carly cause she's very professional, seemed like she could hold her job longer than Hilary, organized well, she also seems like a hard worker.

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Carly's resume Is very well written and provides the interviewer with relevant information. She keeps her points brief and concise while inputting all the required information.

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Carly seems very professional based on her resume. I would hire her. Her resume was organized and she listen everything needed.

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Carly seems very professional and has a good work history.

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Has a lot of work experience in many things good at finishing her summary all the way.

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Professional, educated, and smart. I would hire her for her achievements and education, while she is looking for jobs, she is a Sales Associate manager, which would normally need a diploma, but with achievements she is right for the job.

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She has a great summary and explains her education and past jobs well, she also kept her job and didn't have a bunch of different jobs

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Carly seems like she has herself set and put together. She's mature with her resume and keeps it simple, quite professional in my opinion. Personally, would hire.

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it's a great resume

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hire her she put in a whole bunch of information that was needed -

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Her formal language is a great start already, she lists her extensive experience with young children, as well as her volunteer experience.

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Carly provided lots of her work experience seems very smart and credible. Also hardworking for a young age. Overall she's a great applicant.

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Carly's resume is better to me, seems well thought out, keeps it professional and it's quite simple. She seems to have good experience with children and the sales floor for how young she is.

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Carly's Resume is definitely better, she did not joke around, more mature, and her resume was clear and organized.

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Now, shes professional, I WOULD DEFNITLY HIRE HER!!!
SO MUCH BETTER

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I think Carly resume is better because she has alot of work experience she seem very neat with her sresumes and professional.

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I think that Carly has the better resume due to education, profession, and how achieved she is so early in her life. Also, to have the job, someone normally needs a diploma and a specific education, but with the education that she has, she deserves it.

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carly's better more Professional

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Carly's resume is better because she meets the criteria while Hilary doesn't

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Without hesitation, I would hire Carly over Hilary. She has more work experience, she was able to keep a job between the two, used proper language, and overall seemed more serious. She is definitely the better pick.

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yes i would hire her she included information that was needed.

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Carly because she did a good job explain everything and her future goals

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Carly's because ....Its clear, Its Educated, Its Formal. That's why

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I would pick Carly. She was very organized and professional.

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i would say carly because she is mor

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i will hire her she is ready and orginized

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i will hire her she is ready and orginized

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She has more detail and way more experiance. Natalie Scranton

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carly she did a better job and put down stuff she was supposed to

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carly she did a better job and put down stuff she was supposed to